Date: December 13 2016 6:33 AM Title: Welcome to the Armada
Was the wait worth it? Not really. You ended the story just when it was about to get good. Oh well it was a good read regardless. I kind of expected Elena to just fall in line but it's good her humanity is still in tact for now.
Author's Response:
Yeah, as stated below was always meant to be a short intro to the characters and general idea followed up with other stories. Will still likely end up happening, just not at the moment. As for her humanity. I'm a slow slippery slope kind of guy, not an immediate turn. Thanks for the reveiw regardless!
[Report This]Date: December 12 2016 11:00 PM Title: Welcome to the Armada
Great! I was hoping there would be more, because it does sound like there could be a great deal of conflict in Elena's head. She's resisting being a giant pretty hardcore. Anyway, good stuff.
10/10 woud read more
Author's Response:
Yeah, the intention with this story was to spring off into others dealing with Elana's path in the Armada. Will still likely end up happening but have some other things I wanna write first. Anyway, my thanks. Glad you enjoyed.
10/10 would respond to this review again.
Date: June 26 2016 3:37 PM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
Hey man- I hope that you continue this story. It's one of the better ones I've seen on here recently- compelling characters and a very intriguing plot line. Please don't let a lack of reviews set you back, if such is the case. You fucking rock as a writer.
10/10 would collab with you when not busy
Date: June 23 2016 10:20 AM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
This story looks interesting.
FYI, will Toxicity ever be finished? I think you had a real good thing going and it would be wrong to leave the story where it was at.
Date: June 15 2016 11:36 AM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
Short and brutal, just like that chapter. Liking Krieg less and less and less. I truly hope she gets what's coming to her.
10/10 would give Elena water for her poor, parched, now huge throat.
Date: June 08 2016 8:18 PM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
An endless array of nightmares could traumatize her as much as Krieg ever could. Is this purely psychological, on her personal fears, or caused by whatever is in the vat, I wonder.
Date: June 07 2016 10:37 PM Title: Nightmares, Dreams, and Visions
Jeeeeeez. Those dreams are pretty vivid. Especially the last one- nothing more terrible than inadvertent destruction. Perhaps it's a vision of things to come? That would be terrifying. I hope Elena can deal with the challenges that are no doubt before the redhead.
10/10 would love to be smothered in itsuki's chesticles.
Date: June 05 2016 11:52 AM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
Sounds like Elena is ready to be all giantessified. I hope she retains her humanity- it would be cool to see her duke it out with other colossi over a tiny planet, Godzilla style.
10/10 would fall in love with hot gigantic Japanese cyborg lady
[Report This]Date: June 03 2016 2:50 PM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
This is fantastic, as always. I'm dying to see just how Elana deals with being a Colussus.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2016 11:54 AM Title: The Factor
I rarely post reviews here, but... I stumbled upon your stories just recently and... Damn! Reading your stories and rating them with less then 10 is a pure blasphemy! :D I really hope you'll continue creating these wonderful pieces of art!
Even if there were almost no erotic stuff in the last chapter of the Recruitment Drive, it's still great, and that "Educational holovid scene" made it just priceless! I'm relly looking forward to reading the rest of the story and learning about how Elana deals with becoming a Colossus...
So... Once again... You're doing great job! Please Keep it up!
P.S. I'm terribly sorry for my english here... Not my native language after all. Hope it's still understandable... :D
Date: June 02 2016 6:24 AM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
Oh my, I wish you hadn't revealed the twist so quickly but I am stoked to see how Elana deals with being a Colossus. Does she accept her new stature and fall in with her new comrades or try to fight for her old allies? Well done, this is a brilliant story!
[Report This]Date: June 01 2016 12:24 PM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
Still an excellent story, please keep on with it!
Date: May 25 2016 3:27 PM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
Whoa! Quite the brutal selection process. Also, very interesting concept to have some have the 'factor' as you put it- I am very curious to see how elena maintains (or maybe loses) her humanity during her growth (I assume) into one of the colossi.
I hope that krieg gets her just desserts in the end. What a cruel (albeit intriguing) bastardette.
10/10 would plan Tarantino-esque revenge
[Report This]Date: May 25 2016 1:32 PM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
This is a great story :)
Date: May 25 2016 3:39 AM Title: One in a Million
I'm not surprised Krieg is such a monster that even her own kind fears her. The question is whether the process of becoming a Colossi will make Elana a monster herself. So far it doesn't bode well.
Date: May 20 2016 7:11 PM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
Super vivid- your intro feels like an anime. It felt like a lot happenedi n 4k words, but you managed to really keep it interesting. Also, I love how genuine the terror that Elana conveys. Really terrifying prospect to captured like that, especially what Krieg says. Looking forward to more.
10/10 would shit pants in mech
[Report This]Date: May 19 2016 12:17 AM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
Wow where to begin with my review...
I was absolutely blown away with the amount of detail you've added to inconsequential aspects of this chapter. From the secondary characters to how anxious Elana was at the beginning despite being a lieutenant, really gave such an endearing human quality from the start.
The initial interaction with the Colossus Armada was great because it gave me as the reader a false sense of security. I mean sure she just swallowed some poor slob whole but the fact that her weaponry was useless against the mechs meant(at least for me) that these two were gonna meet up with their comrades and start laying waste to these usurpers. However when Levi's mech has its head blown off and Elana has to completely rethink her strategy I think that its still doable until she sees Krieg for the first time. Even though I like happy endings and the like, when her mech was shot down and she could do nothing while the cockpit initiated ejection countdown.
Not gonna lie, Krieg's smile being akin to that of a shark is extremely unsettling.
Ok I don't wanna prattle on for too long but I did enjoy this and can't wait to see what happens to Elana.
aaron
Date: May 18 2016 12:03 PM Title: The Problem with Ejector Seats
A nice completed story, I will be following this!