Date: May 14 2016 10:03 PM Title: Unlucky Break-In
Wow, love the older lady. Ms. Fields is great.
Well done,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
[Report This]Date: May 14 2016 6:26 PM Title: Unlucky Break-In
Wow! Usually I give longer reviews, but just wow.
Make more stories like this. I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I do have one more story ready to be posted, though it has much less crushing and more of a build-up, but I'm personally proud of the work I put in it.
[Report This]Date: May 14 2016 1:24 AM Title: Unlucky Break-In
well done. I like 1 shot plots if done right way more than short chapter based stories where the author maybe never will continue. would love to see more like this in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you. :)
I think both have a sort of appeal, but I do agree that it's a letdown when an author starts a longer story but basically abandon it. Admittedly, I'm guilty of doing that myself, but I do fully intend to get back to updating them.
[Report This]Date: May 13 2016 9:55 PM Title: Unlucky Break-In
One of the best stories so far of 2016. Amazing length, great plot, good grammer and great writing style. I love unfortunate plots more than anything. A downer for me was the 1cm of height of the shrunken characters, which is a bit too high for my taste, I like ant sizes way more. Hope you will conitnue! Would love a plot like this again but with smaller shrinking sizes, unaware, and maybe vore too.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this story. :)
I did think about making them smaller, like around 1mm, but I felt that that would have made interaction with Ms. Fields very difficult. I do agree that sizes that small have a sort of appeal.