Date: June 02 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
This was a good amount of plot, I liked it. Also good to see Richard again,I thought he wouldn't be here for this one.
Author's Response:
That's good to hear, happy that the plot was interesting enough. As for Richard, I thought about leaving him out, but in the end, I decided it'd be more interesting to have a more human character amongst all the demons and angels, even if he does have powers. Anyways, thanks for the review, it is much appreciated.
Date: May 11 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
It's great to see your story got a sequel. I like the first chapter more characters and we get to see how the old queen of hell is doing. Again a great story Demetria and angel are some of my favorite character on this site so I'm happy that I get to see more of them.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I was going for more characters and more intersting stuff happening in the plot. Hopefully it will be as good if not better than the first.