Date: August 12 2017 3:35 PM Title: Dumped
Hey question. Did you have a story called like "One might stand or something similar to it? Because I loved that story and I'm trying to find it. I feel like it was you who had it haha. Get back to me!
Date: August 08 2017 3:38 AM Title: Dumped
Did you hav3 another story like this? That was about a one night stand? Cuz I LOVED that story but cant find it now
[Report This]Date: September 11 2016 10:16 AM Title: Dumped
Please do more! This was so fun!
[Report This]Date: May 10 2016 5:58 PM Title: Dumped
What a find, amazing story. Hope to see more. Your name reminds me of a plot, I always wished to read some really ironic story where some unfortunate guys end inside the back area of a girls underpants in her skidmark, shrinking so tiny the human eye cant see them anymore and they basically become lost inside it, until it's thrown in the washing mashine.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am planning on working on more soon. I have a few inspirations that I'd like to implement into writing. I like that idea of yours, too!
[Report This]Date: May 09 2016 10:08 PM Title: Dumped
Great set of excremental punishments!
However, to make it a great story, you need a beginning and a lead-up into the punishing ending. What has he done to deserve this? How did he and the others shrink? Where did the three girls come from?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! However, like I warned in the chapter notes, this one was a short fap piece. Story wasn't really my intention when I wrote this one night. I have a lot of short stories that I've been too shy to post but I may work up some introductions or stories to weave into them and post them!
[Report This]Date: May 09 2016 11:51 AM Title: Dumped
Oh my o0 This was one of the best stories Ive read in a while on here... Thank you SO MUCH for sharing it!! Good and well written scat + micro plots are literally died out on here, sadly. This story reminds me a lot of one of the best series ever created: http://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=2151
I would love seeing you write more!! You just have to. You're mostly the only author left right now in this genre, and I miss reading good plots like this one. Would love seeing an unaware story maybe, with some digestion, ass insertion. I love your kind of humor and irony so much mixed with a very dark touch, please more like this.
Fantastic story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words! Yes, this is definitively my style- no happy endings and the girl working up a healthy body count is really what I go for.
Date: May 08 2016 10:30 PM Title: Dumped
this is without a doubt one of the best bbw giantess scat stories I've ever read, and I've read alot of them.
I'm eager to see what you put out in the future
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love 'em big, so if I get anything else posted, expect more bbw. And definitely more scat. They go together quite well in my book.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2016 4:00 PM Title: Dumped
Pretty good first start to a story, seems pretty well written :) I'd try to put more of a story in to your next one though, like how they got in to this situation and stuff like that instead of straight in to the action. But other then that keep Up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really, REALLY tried to avoid the juvenile tropes that seem to pervade scat and other bodily functions in this scene. Glad you liked it! (maybe my future stories will have more...story)