Date: February 15 2018 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thinking the woman is Jason's little sister. Hope this gets an update someday.
Date: May 07 2016 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting intro. I get the feeling the narrator was "cracked" for a substantial amount of time. Really wondering what relationship this mystery woman has with him. Looking forward to more.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
This seems interesting. Please continue.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2016 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
very good start. plz continue it. I hope that woman is the grown up little sister.
Author's Response: We will see next chapter, thanks for the comment as well
Date: May 06 2016 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I always look forward to your stories man. You should totally just start writing vigenettes for this universe. Just a collection of different scenarios and characters. Obviously with sexy stuff ;p
Looking forward to see how this plays out!
Author's Response: Hopefully the next couple chapters meet everyone's expectations.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2016 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
It is such a treat to read your stories, Lancealot. This one is shaping up very nicely and I'm eager for more. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: You're welcome!
[Report This]Date: May 06 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow love this story! Keep writing more please!!!
Author's Response: It's definitely going to happen with this amount of feed back