[Report This]Date: August 17 2016 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great start to the story. I find myself WANTING bad things to happen to the tinier teen just due to him being kind of a cad! Usually I feel sorry for characters that bad things happen to, but with him, I hope he winds up their plaything for good. It serves him right! Kind of unusual that I find myself rooting more for the giants! ;) It's the eye for an eye punishment applied to this world, steal a toy, BECOME a toy! I love the world you are building here and can't wait for more! The illustrations are a nice touch/teaser as well. Kepp up the good work.
Author's Response:
I'm not sure if I'm going to continue this one as this might be as good a place as any to stop with it. I had a scenario in mind but have changed my mind on if I want to pursue it or now. So, it's where it is now.. Perhaps damned to the dustbins of history.
[Report This]Date: July 23 2016 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
He must hope the kid goes downstairs and not in his direction or walk passed him so that he can take the stairs.
You can feel the adrenaline.
It will be an interesting confrontation eventually with this family. He has taken gold and a panty. They maybe make a bigger deal with that panty, than the gold he is taking. ;)
Author's Response:
He's definately laid the groundwork for a compromising situation should he be caught I'd agree with you Barrow!
Thanks a lot for the great analysis on what you've read as it's spot on!!!!
Date: July 22 2016 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice chapter. Realizing how noiseless the thicker floor was is cool. Never thought of what an advantage it would be.
Checking out the mothers slippers was awesome. Greatly enjoyed that. Love the picture. It helps paint the scene.
The other picture of the goose, harp and gold was a nice touch. Makes you smile.
Well done Croc,
Diesel
Author's Response:
I figured that adding images was not out of the quesiton so why not. I also thought that the scene that I had in mind definately required one rather than telling you a thousand words to desribe a very mundane visual for Jack.
Thanks again Diesel. :)
Date: July 22 2016 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 2
Cool, loved the sand box part. It really showed the difference in strength between jack and the smallest of the Giantesses. How strong must the mother be?
The laundry scene was great. Getting to smell and imagine 3 personal articles of clothing. Moms dark pantehoses, the daughters prize panties and the socks. His panty raid is complete.
I am drawn in to the story,
Diesel
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you like it Diesel. I also liked how you appreciated the mundane aspects that Jack was to become a bit overwhelmed by.
And I'm waiting for you to give us another story too!
Date: July 21 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice start. You have set the scene very well. Looking forward to the many Giantess scenarios. Good luck to Jack, I am sure that he will need it.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thank you Diesel. The scene has indeed been set. Now there will be a lot more interaction. ;)
[Report This]Date: July 21 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
Glad to see you're back. I love this story.
Author's Response:
Thanks Freeman.
Date: July 21 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to read more! :D
Author's Response:
An image was just added to this chapter so come on back and check it out ShadowVizard and enjoy. :)
[Report This]Date: May 14 2016 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
You are doing well. I hope that new chapters will come soon.
Author's Response:
It's Summer now so I should be able to post a few more chapters to this so not to worry Tigernach. :)
[Report This]Date: May 14 2016 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
You have an interesting concept here. Only a few other writers have tried to mix such varied cultures together in a story. I like that the main protagonist is not a good guy. That means to me that this is going to be different...
Good Luck, and keep up the originality.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot Tigermach. Yeah, I agree.. The star of the story doesn't always have to be some great guy whose never done anything wrong.. Somtimes bad guys have adventures too. ;)
[Report This]Date: May 03 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love the build up. In this chapter he is beginning to really feel with every sense how overwhelming this giant family is. Trying to lift that kids shovel, taking a parachute size panty as his trophy. Sandra the very rebellious teen. Can't wait for the confrontation and to see more how the giant and normal people interact in general with eachtother in that neighborhood.
Said it in the first chapter, but I say it again:
Like it how you in detail describe the giant stuff and the feelings that come with it. You can really feel you are there with Jack and being humbled in that house. Humbled is not the correct word. The feel of awe is what is always interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you for a very thoughtful review Barrowman. Overwhelming indeed they are with their massive statures... Lucky them I suppose.
I'll be adding another chapter soon!
Date: May 01 2016 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm glad that you have the X rate on this story, so I know some hot stuff will be coming soon.
I got this crazy idea when you mentioned that Jack was the same size as some of the dolls.
Since you know I'm a fan of the giantess mother in this story, I was thinking about what if she had a sex doll that looked just like Jack, and she mistakes him for it.
After all, the tinies are forbidden by that fence so it's not like she expects a tiny person there.
I love it when a story gives me these ideas, haha!
Author's Response:
Elements of that would be possible I imagine.
I have the X rating so that the young sensitive readers will stay away and I can do whatever I want at any time... Makes the element of surprise, surprising. He, he.
Thanks again for the comments and possible suggestions, these sorts of things help me out a lot Tom. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Jack is crazy if he thinks his knife is going to scare any Giant haha. I'm curious to see which family member is going to find our little thief first.
Author's Response:
Well, we tend to grab things that have worked for us in the past even if it has no application to the present challenge. And it did help him cut through the screen door so it wasn't a complete waist to bring it along, :)
I'm curious as to which one will find him first too. :)
Thanks for the rating and the comments Shrunken Scholar.
[Report This]Date: May 01 2016 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
You got my attention. The story is fantastic. I'm drooling over this heist that he is about to do.
I love how as a theif, he is scouting out the area and watching these women. I don't know why, but I'm rooting for the mother as the sexier giantess than the teen. Something about her authority just attracts me.
I see myself in Jack. If I was raiding a giantess's house like this, I would also take some panties too. But instead I would take the mom's panties instead.
The little girl is the x-factor. I bet she is the one that Jack has the most trouble with becuase he can't predict her actions.
Good analysis of the clothing. Mom with stockings, teen with girly clothing, and little girl with the tiny sized ones.
You get a whopping 10 stars. The setting the scene is perfect and we know the characters, the different types of giantess, and we get an interesting protagonist who reminds me of myself.
I will be following this story and I hope it's a good one. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much Tom Speedy.
I agree that each female (due to their extremely large size) bring their own set of dangers to the table for Jack. He starts out pretty cock sure of himself, but once he get's in close proximity them he learns that they aren't as vulnerable or an easy target as he at first anticipated. Even their natural bodily odors are oppressive to him.
You've naild some things down pretty well here but I might still have some surprises in store for you. ;)
Thanks again for the reading and commenting on this story Tom.
Crocodile
[Report This]Date: April 30 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Starting off with some suspense, we still wait in build up for the thief to starting theivering. Jack's ever growing perverseness gets to develop in this chapter, but we see nothing of the family aside from their scattered cloths. The wait kills, and their isn't quite as much going on as the first chapter, making Chapter Two feel a little slower. Jack's character is what redeems The Burglar, however, as we get to see him messing around with giant objects. Ultimately The Burglar is a fine chapter, though the anticipation for contact is killing me. The Burglar recieves: 3.5 Stars. (Which is still 7/10)
Author's Response:
I promise not to tease you much longer. But a story must have build up and background in order to orient the reader and satiate his or her wise subconcious which demands such food.. And please forgive my hesitation to throw that reader directly into gratification of some sort until the above requirements have been met. Otherwise, I'm just giving you fetish tripe which I wish to avoid at all costs..
The reward is usually worth the wait. And the story must go from point A to B to C and never jump from A to C lest I disrespectfully rob you of the substance that you are entitled to, which I am not prepared to do.
Thank you once again for a thoughtful review FreemanCD as I'm beginning to look forward to the next one. :)
[Report This]Date: April 30 2016 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is going to be a good story. The protagonist is charming, but still a believable prick, the giantesses have great potential, and the set up is ingenious. For a setup chapter, it still have me an erection to think about giants bathing in the sun. Very few cons, aside from perhaps too much exposition, though I wasn't personally bothered. I can't wait for Chapter Two, so I'll give Chapter One: 4 stars.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much FreemanCD.. You guys keep on going like this and I'll be stuck writing scores of chapters, he, he! Speaking of which... Here's another! Chapter 2 on the way. :)
Date: April 30 2016 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
A nice twist on a classic tale. I think Jack is going to seriously regret his decision to steal from giants. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
You wont have long to wait Shrunken Scholar as Chapter two will be up tonight! And thank you very much!
Date: April 30 2016 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, can't wait for chapter 2. Always liked the good description of the environment and the feelings the characters have in your stories. Wonder what those giantesses have in store for though guy Jack.
Author's Response:
Chapter 2 coming up! Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: April 30 2016 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the set-up. Giants and normal sized people living side by side and a not so nice Jack trying to steel gold from giants. That raging boner will be his downfall in his steeling process.
Author's Response:
Isn't the raging boner always our downfall though? Ha, ha!
Thanks for the review Barrowman!