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Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 03 2016 7:13 AM Title: Vicarious

Corrupting others is one of the most delicious pleasures.  It's even more fun when you don't have any supernatural insight into their inner thoughts; you just have to look for the signs.  The tiny impatiences, the brief glares of hatred, the exaggerated exhalations covering sotto voce profanities.  Then you give them free rein and watch as those reflexive self-restraints fall away.

What happened to Joan's earlier creations, once their initial rampages were exhausted?  Did she return them to normal size?  Did the Men In Black capture them?



Author's Response:

I imagined that once they had served their purpose, Joan's creations were shrank down and returned to their dull, dreary lives. But at least they received the opportunity to enjoy godlike power, even if only for a short time.

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 12:31 AM Title: Jubilee

This latest piece was so fucking good. Literally everything I want in a giant couples bit. You are so goddamn good at this, you should write more. I particularly loved the bit where she wrote "MINE" with her finger into the city. I don't think I've seen that before.

 

I hope they visit my city next. :D



Author's Response:

I’m glad that you liked “Jubilee.” Nano/giga stories can be difficult for me to write, although I’ve been trying to practice more because I love that sort of extreme size difference. Since I left this story open-ended, I can certainly see the two of them visiting Earth…and possibly your city. :D

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2016 7:43 AM Title: Vengeance

Idaria is awesome, the picture of her just encapsulates the image you're trying to present to us. Good job on this chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you liked her! I may bring her back in a future story.

Reviewer: SheerForce Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2016 7:11 AM Title: Vengeance

This is excellent.

Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

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