Date: May 03 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Comprehensive Combat Evaluation Examination
Great read so far. I always love vivid descriptions of growing and am super excited to see what happens to Yuuko in the next chapter. As well as possible multi size interaction between her, Meiya, and the others.
I only really have a passing knowledge of MuvLuv from a friend of mine who is constantly telling me to read it but I might have to get on that now so I can better know about the character's personalities and such
Author's Response:
Thanks, glad to hear you enjoyed what I've posted so far.
Whoever your friend is, you should definitely listen to them and get into the VNs; they have incredibly great taste. The Muv is Luv, so Luv the Muvs - you won't regret the experience!
Date: April 25 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Comprehensive Combat Evaluation Examination
This has got to be one of the most well-written, articulate stories I have ever seen on this site. I can't wait to see what you'll do with it from here, you have written it out so well so far that I have no criticism to throw your way. Congrats, I added this to my favorites list after chapter one!
5 gold stars!
DrumGuy
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the feedback! Hopefully the remainder of it won't disappoint as well!
Date: April 25 2016 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Comprehensive Combat Evaluation Examination
I am not sure about the whole setting here but I trust you will reveal it to the reader in good time. You have your basic spelling and grammar down, everything else is well done. Hope this sees completion.
Author's Response:
The setting is that of what I had described in the chapter: a tropical jungle setting on an unnamed island in the Pacific Ocean. It's canon that even in the VN, the island is unnamed, so I went with as concise a setting description as possible. Additionally, this story begins with the "turning point" of the Alternative VN; I would say more on the subject, but I don't want to spoil anything for others. I encourage you to read the VNs for yourself to find out the full story!
Nonetheless, thanks!