Date: July 16 2016 1:59 PM Title: Groping Around in the Dark
I like that you brought up Faith's plan for Julian again! I'm curious to see when and how that will play out... And that's after whatever happens in her sister's room!
Author's Response:
If Julian survives he's in for an ass load of trouble...
[Report This]Date: July 16 2016 12:11 PM Title: Groping Around in the Dark
Funniest chapter yet!
The conversations and the jokes were on point and I love how sinister Julian was with Josh's ideas.
I think this was the most I laughed for one of your stories. These guys make a great group.
My plan would be go into Julie's room, ruin he toys, cut her clothes like what Josh said, and then yeah, use bodily functions on her pillow, shoes, and stuff.
You know what would be a plot twist? Faith tells Julie about the tinies going to her room and Julie sets up traps for them. To trap Carver, use food. To trap Julian, use panties. To trap, Josh, um... A sewing needle? I don't know what Josh is into but he seems to like tools.
If it was just me on this quest, I'm going straight to Mrs. May's room. Spy on her a bit, and then if I get bored, try to get some action.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am pleased this chapter tickled your funny bone. Julian has been a fun character to write for. I think you relate to him strongly on account of his fascination for faith's hot mom ;)
[Report This]Date: July 14 2016 6:49 PM Title: Just Desserts
So what did the tinies learn here? Obey the girls and you get fucked. Run from them, and you get a chance to live. Well, that's what I learned.
That was quite the plot twist Duggernaut. I did not expect another vore.......ever. I thought that was it when that other guy was swallowed and I even forgot his name.
This chapter made me feel a little bad. I often think of myself that I would be a very obedient tiny person. Now I feel nervous that I may die if I obey orders.
Still, why did Henry die? And that was a shitty reward. Josh's "punishment" was better than that.
Honestly, I thought when Faith said choose, I thought it meant who he gets to play with. When I read that I got all these ideas. If it was me, I would've said both, or even her mom.
Well, I hope the journey starts soon. This little box drama is starting to get a bit repetitive. Looking forward to when the adventure outside it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 11 2016 6:32 PM Title: Reacquainted
I feel like this chapter was unfinished, cut short. It felt like it randomly ended.
There wasn't a cliffhanger this time. It was just Henry saying that it wasn't fair and Faith checking the bottle cap. I was expecting Faith to punish Henry for saying it's not fair, but then the chapter ended.
Josh just climbs back in and doesn't say shit. You know he just got ptsd or something. Lol.
Icecream was the reward??!!!!?!!!?!!?! Lmao! I was expecting like some foreplay where Henry gets to decide what to do. They get free food anyway, so the reward was just desert. Pfft. Julian's quest is more of a reward than the icecream. At least he gets some freedom. But icecream?
Lol, Faith needs some better prizes. It's like when you win a contest at school, and you get like a pen with the school logo on it. I mean, prizes should feel special, and I don't think that icecream was special. Carver might have thought it was special, but I bet Henry was like "that's the fucking reward! Why me!"
I bet Julian was like, "Icecream? Did... wait a second. You're telling me...that by not doing anything, you got icecream? That's it? Just some tasty food hat I could've found in the freezer on my adventure? I'm glad I ran away."
I think a little more could've been added this chapter. I think now I realize how much I really miss your cliffhangers.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 09 2016 4:18 PM Title: Playtime
Thoughts? Yeah, Josh just got fucked!
I mean, after what....32 chapters and we finally have a sex scene. Lol! Only you would do that, haha! But of course, it's always worth it in the end.
I was actually impressed. Josh got so much action this chapter. Went in both girls mouths and vaginas. Then he was on Candences's breasts, and right now he is on Faith's breasts.
Another thing. I love the use of floss, string, tape, straws, rubber bands, and all these bondage items. Interesting to see Faith use floss for a second time. I think her mom taught her that. I bet Mrs. May uses all sorts of equipment to tie up her guys. I can't wait.
I thought it was going to be a Faith and Josh scene. Candence was a surprise. Lucky threesome.
Of all your stories that I absolutely cannot wait for the next 3 chapters, this is it. I mean, the journey is about to begin and I'm just excited for the mom to show up.
While Josh was stunned after that ordeal, I bet Julian will be thinking, "aw, did I wear you ladies out?"
Interesting to see Josh just melt down after that. He was always up on his feet. Now he just knows he just got fucked.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 09 2016 12:29 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places
I just don't see too many tinies showing up, becuase then we won't care about them if they die or get played with. Yeah, I think mom does have a tiny but maybe not too many. I can't picture too many characters. Ex. In this box is Tob, Ron, bob, max, and Tyler. In this box is Chris, John, Joey, Chad, and Ben. Now in this box... You get the idea.
Or, maybe she just has one that she keeps just for her. Faith collects lots of tinies and she has argued that she wants more. Mom probably argued that it's too much responsibility and that's why she is pissed when Faith lost them just now. Faith's mistakes will make Mrs. May's argument stronger and that keeping one tiny is the perfect way to have fun and maintain control.
I think the second option is more likely.
Date: July 09 2016 12:20 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places
@D W
Now you got me thinking.
I can see a fancy, large master bedroom with a walk in closet, and on all the shelves in that closet are shoeboxes filled with tinies, all organized by characteristics.
I bet she has some for trade, some for torture, and some for play.
Maybe she even has tinies all over her room. Stuck in her high heels, in her toilet, under the sheets, in her underwear drawers, in her bathroom drawers, in the pockets of her clothes, on her body, inside her body!
I just can't wait for a chapter about her!
Date: July 08 2016 10:28 AM Title: The Offer
@ Tom Speedy
I think the mom sounds the most fun too; even though she was just given an introductory character developement, she gives off the air of having a closet full of shoeboxes stuffed with tinies.
Duggernaut is doing a terrific job with this story, so I don't want to sound critical or be influential of his plot because I really like what he's doing.
One thing I would like to see is Cadence finally getting her hands on Carver and having the fun with him she mentioned in an earlier chapter. Afterall, we haven't yet heard what her favorite activity with tinies is; though didn't she like Faith's boots and want to wear them? Some possibilities there perhaps?
Is Cadence really going to let Julian get away with all those insults? A small punishment might be in order, like another bathroom trip or a good ole fashion spanking.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the props. Next chapter will see some retributive payback for one of our little captives...
Date: July 08 2016 12:31 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places
@Dw,
That's what I was thinking. I thought the offer was about Faith's mom. But it was actually about her sister. Maybe, this is just a trick and they ignore Julie's room and go straight to mom's room.
I love your ideas too. Being a servant to mom and the necklace thing was creative. I also like the present idea. It made me wonder what if Julian's offer was the Faith give her mom Julian as a gift so she will let her collect tinies again.
Faith is smart and sexy. Candence seems cute. Julie is sadistic. And mom has dominance. Loving the diversity. If I was a tiny, I'm choosing mom. There is something about her control that appeals to me. Maybe she has control of something or someone to keep her like that. :)
This mission is way too risky. I bet Julian knows what he is doing and is using this offer about Julie just to Faith lets them go. Yeah, he just wants the milf. Me too.
Author's Response:
:D
Date: July 07 2016 11:25 PM Title: The Offer
Fantastic story.
I'm a bit suprised Julian didn't request of Faith to be let loose to live out his time in her hot mom's room after playing the tricks on her sister. Perhaps even asking to actually be given to her mom as a present in a manner where he couldn't be hurt, like caged in a pendent on a long neckless that would dangle between the mother's breasts or have Faith present him as a tiny with a crush on the mom and who begs to serve the mother as an irreplacable foot massager that mom should keep and keep alive.
Just a thought; but keep doing the great work as you have been. Thanks for a terrific story.
Author's Response:
Julian surmised he might elicit a better chance targeting a known adversary. Faith might have balked at the mother idea seeing how quickly she buckled and accepted the punishment. Gain some trust first. then renegotiate, :)
[Report This]Date: July 07 2016 5:08 PM Title: The Offer
I think that was one of the most stupidest offers ever. Julian wants to risk his own safety, by venturing into foreign territory and in return, they get an upgraded box? Lmao!
If I was Julian, I would have said, ...actually, never mind. That is a good deal. I can't really think of better things that make sense. Of course, my crazy head would have said to drop me in Mrs. May's bed all tied up, but that's just me. (Yes, my reward is a form of torture)
I think this idea is good becuase it's basically a way of escape. Faith even mentioned them being captured, so if they don't come back, Faith may think that they are dead or are captured.
I hope this journey starts soon. It sounds exciting! Finally a way out of the bedroom! I wonder if one of them gets caught by the mom as they travel to Julie's room.
Faith tying Josh up? Already? And for what? Ha! I bet Julian is probably touching him self when he sees Faith have playtime with Josh.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
If you know you are going to get caught, is it really that stupid? Stupid like a fox!
[Report This]Date: July 04 2016 5:07 PM Title: Hanging On By a Fingernail
I'm with Josh on this one. What the fuck Julian! I mean, they spent all this time escaping the box, hiding from these girls, and now he just decides to let himself get captured?
Lol, I found this hilarious, but I also agree with Julian a bit. These girls are gorgeous and why not just have some fun while being captured. That's what I would do in this situation as well.
I swear Julian has the same mentality as me. I just hope is smarter than he looks though. This proposal seems very risky, especially since he didn't discuss it with Josh.
Now what could it be. He referenced the conversation between Faith and mom which was about no more ( new ) tinies for Faith. Is Julian asking to get fucked? Part of me says yes, but I'm not sure.
This cliffhanger is frustratingly good. It has enough information to get me on the edge of my seat, yet has enough mystery that I can't tell what is going to happen next chapter.
So I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!!!! (Getting better each chapter, I can't wait!)
Author's Response:
Julian realized the noose was tighting and tried something different. we'll see if it pays off for him, or...
Date: June 30 2016 10:05 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places
@ D W,
I remember you! Yeah, it's been while. I have seen you on this site many times. You had great reviews on that account. I'm guessing the worst part is that all your favorite stories are gone too. Well, I hope that doesn't again to you and for anyone.
And just for fun, welcome to giantess world D W. :)
Date: June 30 2016 8:21 AM Title: I Was Only Joshing Around
@TomSpeedy
I began doing that; but hadn't been to the site in a while and forgot (along with my previous password, I use to go by Dark Writter, now I can't retrieve that account) but your advice is well taken and I'll surely follow it.
Thanks
Author's Response:
Hey Dark Writter good to have you back! It is unfortunateyou couldn't access your account. I always appreciate your input and feedback and am glad you have found a other of my stories to your liking. I am in the process of rewriting large portions of Bang Your Head to get myself out of the corner I had written myself into.
Date: June 29 2016 11:00 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
@ D W,
Yeah, I learned the hard way too. Now when I write long reviews, I always copy the text just in case. The site will log us off if we spend some time (like +5 min) on a review. No idea why it does that. Don't let it deter you from writing long reviews though.
Date: June 29 2016 10:21 PM Title: I Was Only Joshing Around
What is with this site? It won't let me reset my password so I had to re-register. I just wrote a long reply to your great story and when I hit submit it told me I'm not authorized and erased it all. What the heck?
Wish you could have read what I wrote. Anyway, love the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read and review. I feel cheated I didn't get the opportunity to check out your original review but I am glad you are enjoying this one.
[Report This]Date: June 29 2016 6:04 PM Title: I Was Only Joshing Around
Man, I got so hyped for this chapter. Maybe a bit too much. Simply put. Josh got captured. By Faith. Again. Lol.
I did not expect this at all. I thought Julian would be caught first and I thought that someone else opened the drawer besides Candence and Faith.
I mean, I guess I should've known that since it is still Faith's room, only these 2 girls would be there.
You gave me all this teasing in these reviews about that I will like what is coming up, that my speculations are closer than I think and that got me thinking that maybe this chapter was it!
Then you say exactly 4 days and now I had this timer counting down. Now I gotta reset this for another 4 days. I have this feeling that it might be 8 more days until the fun arrives. Then again, you always surprise me.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
My apologies for misleading you into thinking this was to be the chapter. It is still a bit off. Like a storm brewing on the horizon and drifting ever closer. Patience. :)
Date: June 29 2016 5:43 PM Title: I Was Only Joshing Around
Julian always was a compelling character, with that attitude. But Josh has been growing toward a badass. He started out smart, and he's been quickly learning to keep his cool and think on his feet. It'll be interesting to see what kind of person he becomes now that he's face to face with them. How charming he becomes, is one possibility.
One thing that doesn't seem to have occurred to him: Faith can't kill and replace him for a month.
Author's Response:
The true crucible of mettle will be put to the test for Josh. We've seen Carver collapse under the pressure. It not that Faith can't kill him just that she can't replace him for a month if she does. We shall see...
Date: June 29 2016 4:00 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
It's 4 days since the last chapter, and I'm currently at the premiere of the latest sequel of Duggernaut's epic fantasy known as Shoebox.
There is a giant crowd here waiting for the doors to open and enjoy this tale. Last chapter, we were greeted by an interesting cliffhanger.
The fans here are in a frenzy as the clock is ticking, awaiting for the doors to open for the first showing tonight!
These lucky fans here will even get to meet the man, Duggernaut himself! Yes, fans will be able to ask unlimited questions about his stories, fantasies, and future updates.
A contest released by Duggernaut stated that his biggest fan will get to be included in his stories. The winner is none other than TomSpeedy. Yes, this lucky bastard gets to watch himself in Duggernaut's giantess universe.
While we have seen some stories that featured Tom, the fan favorite "Shoebox" has yet to feature him. We don't know if he will show up later or if he won't exist in this story.
Some fan theories have predicted that Tom will accidentally wander in this house and Faith will find him right in front of Mrs. May who then punishes Faith, by taking all her tinies.
In a recent interview with super fan TomSpeedy, it may be leaked that Tom is actually in the story and that he is currently a prisoner of Faith's mom. Now, this has expanded all our predictions and this leak has got our minds racing wondering what could happen.
Stay tuned for more updates!
Author's Response:
LOL! :D Some of your speculations might be closer than you think! ;)
Date: June 25 2016 5:24 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
"I'm about to shift gear now that Mom has said no new tinies. I think you might like it. :) "
I don't think I have the patience to wait 4 days for it. :) I'm so excited! I can't wait!
Author's Response:
Exactly four days...