Date: September 07 2016 7:41 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
Please kill Julian ASAP. I don't care how. He's a douchebag asshole of literally unbelievable magnitude.
Sometimes in fiction, characters are so unsavory that members of the audience either begin to lose suspension of disbelief or abandon the work entirely because the real world is filled with enough unpleasant people that the audience member thinks "Why should I waste my free time exposing myself to another one?"
Julian is such a character. In the real world, an alpha douchebag like that would either get the shit kicked out of him to take him down a few pegs or outright murdered. (*) If I was another guy in this story, while Julian was being used as a buttplug, I'd be conspiring with the others to take him out.
(*) This sort of thing happens in reality too. I've seen on PBS an alpha female hyena who was a real douchebag. The other hyenas got fed up with her and beat her to within an inch of her life and she became the lowest in social order.
So, either please kill Julian or cause something to happen to him so he reassesses being the alpha douche he is.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to write a review and share your feelings about the story. Yes, Julian is an asshole and I've tried to shed some light on some of his character flaws. While I can't defend what an absolute tool he's been to other characters, he is has been trapped here longer than any of the others and has constructed defense mechanism to push others away, all the while desperately afraid of being al;one. I too have seen usurpation of misplaced authroity and social upheaval both in the animal kingdom and obviously through human history. Rest assured, there will be some comeuppance for our disagreeable mouthpiece.
[Report This]Date: September 07 2016 5:11 PM Title: Making the Most out of a Shitty Situation
Progress! I'm so excited! Soon Julian will look at Mrs. May! I can only dream what will happen then.
I hope Mrs. May takes Julian for herself. I know Faith wants to keep Julian, but guess what. She got Bodhi so now Mrs. May gets to take one from Faith. (Seriously, Mrs. May gets what she wants.)
I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter! (The redeem chapter?)
Date: September 02 2016 8:31 AM Title: Julie the 'Merciful'
Since the mother is a varitable Nancy Drew, will she figure out Julian must have seen her earlier in order to take such a chance to wonder into her room on his own accord; and to have done so means Julian must have liked what he saw and heard of her?
Julie seems just to be a sadist who wants to run a torture cell more than a hormone driven sex machine. Surprised she didn't have any tinies on her person like her sister Faith and her mom does. Though what's up with the one on the end of the ruler, does Julie spank her own butt with it?
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 8:49 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
Thank you.
Author's Response:
You're welcome, I'm planning for another full Julie chaprter in the next little bit.
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 6:47 PM Title: Julie the 'Merciful'
Well, Mery's analysis was developed quickly. I don't mind. I want her to get Julian asap. Maybe next chapter Faith removes Julian and then Mery's takes him. :)
I think it's funny that Julie doesn't give a shit about Bodhi's disappearance. I was expecting some revenge of from her, but I guess this is more realistic.
Ok Merys, it's time for you to barge into Faith's room, get Faith to poop out Julian and then take him to be your plaything. If only it could be that fast.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: August 31 2016 11:56 PM Title: Inventory
Just thought of this, how many tinies "like way up in there" in Julie's asshole? 3? 7? 13? 21? Any???
[Report This]Date: August 30 2016 9:29 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places
Just read this story in one go.
I must say, it's brilliant! Perfectly paced, and you do those characters of yours so well. I concur with squashed123 too, I'd love to see more of Julie, though I think you'd have to change the rating of the story from R to X for that to happen, lol! (Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter with Mrs May and Julie)
I have yet to read Tom's story, but this one is simple enough that one day, I'd really love to try and render this one out. Might come out really nice!
Author's Response:
More Julie coming. I'm glad you find this story engaging and thanks for the props! Tom's Story is taking on a life of its own...
Date: August 29 2016 9:42 PM Title: Inventory
FINALLY!!! Yaaaa! Julian is finally, at long last not only in Faith's asshole but he's "like way up in there"! Oh Julian, how can Caesar not be at full attention now, despite the hot, humid air? Perhaps if Julian decides life up a woman's tush is the life for him, as nice as it's really turning out to be in Faith's, poop and all, we can listen to the mental struggle in his mind {"Why have I always been an asshole to people, especially women? Because up inside a woman's asshole is where I have always longed to be and now that I'm here, in Faith's, I love it. But is it Faith's asshole, or her mom's asshole that awaits as my destiny?"} he he he
Would be nice if Julie winds up finding dozens of tinies bound up in her room.
Well well well, now did Josh volunteer to be the hero or "take one for the team"; or did Josh secrectly "want in" Faith's panty? Did Josh realize he wants something much more than he does being restored to full size? Something inside Faith's panty, or just Faith as the Goddess she is to him {if not a bit more benevolent, at least to him}???
[Report This]Date: August 29 2016 6:52 PM Title: Inventory
I swear, if I had the technology to warp into your stories, I can't decide if I want to be in this story or Tom's story. I love your stories so much and these giantesses are amazing!
I mean, I wish I was in that tank and if Faith asked for company, I would be shouting, "tie me up and put me down there!" I might even be crying for joy. It just sounds so hot, the way she asked for company.
Josh doesn't even give a shit anymore so he said yes. Bohdi spent his life next to Julie's pussy. Carver is about to spend his life with Candence's pussy, so it makes sense that Josh gets Faith's pussy now that Merys is looking for Julian to be put in her pussy. 4 women, 4 men. That's how the matching game is played.
Why is there an "uh oh" for the end notes? Does Julie have like 20+ tinies? Does Julie have just 1 and now he is missing? Does she have 0 becuase she killed them all?
Merys walking sends shivers up my spine, my goodness. She just casually inspects all the tinies and lets her own daughter keep a tiny in her ass! She doesn't even care! This means that this method of playing with tinies is acceptable to her and now I wonder how far Merys is willing to go to find Julian and play with him.
I also wonder why Merys is making such a big deal about Julian. Is she thinking that Julian has to pay for spying on her? I feel like she can get any tiny she wants. You know what, Merys has so much power and high tech that I wouldn't be surprised if she developed a device that shrinks giantess world readers like me. Imagine she can sense when readers are aroused to her and when the device senses it, she presses a button and then I get zapped into this story and I am her pet. Now that would be awesome. She would explain how I am nothing but a slave to her and her I cannot escape. I must pleasure her or die. I think I found my dream for tonight.
I bit less action than I hoped for, but hopefully Merys gets some playtime with another tiny, maybe one called Tom. :)
Plot twist! Maybe Julie has a tiny that looks just like Julian and Merys mistakes this new tiny for Julian. Merys then demands that Julie hand over the tiny and she then makes him her pet. Then this guy could be Tom. Hehe!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 25 2016 9:43 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
Great story, though I wish the chapters were longer.
You have built great characters that stay true to their personality, which is hard to do. This way, it gets quite personal with all of them and that is simply an amazing achievement. I really like the way Julian acts, his boldness, practicality and cynicism never fail to make the corners of my mouth turn upward. I yearn to be able to write a character like him, kudos!
What you did with mother May was just perfect. Here you are, little slave, but instead of falling into depression or trying to save yourself, I'll just make you yearn for another giant captor instead of the one or two you already have. Brilliant!
You get around telling lot's of backstory like a pro. It never feels like it's needed at all, and that keeps the story the way it's supposed to be. You're just a really great author.
There's one think I hope for in the future though, and that is more Julie. Her insane, over-the-top cruelty is exciting. Perhaps you'll let us sneak a peak into her mind at some point?
Consider me on the edge of my seat, begging for more.
Best regards.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts. There have been a few reviews extolling Julian and he is super fun to write for. Funny you should mention julie because there is more of her in the next chapter or two. Again thanks for such praise I hope I am worthy of it as this tale moves along. Please enjoy!
Date: August 25 2016 8:59 PM Title: Shower Time
Being up Faith's asshole could really be a pleasant experience for Julian. Perhaps he'll find he likes the security, the giving up of control and responsibility, the aroma and taste up Faith's asshole. Let's hope it's a long, long, long stay.
There's always the chance Julian finds he actually likes being in a female's asshole; but that he'd rather it be with Faith's mom.
Faith could announce Josh has to decide the fate of two of his companions, and she wants his decision once she's done pleasuring herself. Choice 1: She could keep Julian up there, with her powers he won't ever be coming out for any reason, and everyone else gets to live happily on, so to speak. Choice 2: Or Josh can chose to have Faith eventually poop Julian out, alive of course, but Carver gets sentenced to life up Cadence's asshole never to come out or be seen again. If Josh refuses to decide, both Julian and Carver live out their lives in the girl's behinds and Bohdi gets swallowed.
Cadence goes Carver
Author's Response:
At least Julian would avoid being alone. Right now he's sweating his sack off and praying she doesn't sick him any deeper into her mud pit. Cadence hasn't given up on Carver
Date: August 25 2016 6:13 PM Title: Shower Time
"Her dark sleeve." Never run into that one before. Nice.
Author's Response:
Why thank you.
[Report This]Date: August 25 2016 6:10 PM Title: Shower Time
Usually, if some tiny guy is inside a girl's ass like this, I would consider him lucky. But, since he missed the opportunity with Faith's mom, well, this is now a loss in comparison.
Yep, Julian regrets his decision for leaving that room. If that was me, I would be stuck in mom's room and probably never leave her again. In fact, she might not even let me leave which is even better.
Well, at least Faith took a shower, so it should be too bad. I just wonder how long will she keep him in there. When will Julian embark on his next journey to Mom's room.
You know what. Let's just send Josh to mom's room. Or the new guy from Julie's room. I just want to see the mom snatch some guy up and then she keeps him prisoner. The dream, still possible.
For now, the prison is inside Faith's ass. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
For now. You're chomping at the proverbial bit but have no fear Mrs May makes an appearance next chapter...
[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 5:34 PM Title: Mother May I
Whoa! Wait a second there Duggernaut.
Where are you getting these names? I thought Mrs. May's first name was going to be from the list I made like 20 chapters ago. I don't recall "Merys" being one of them. I think I had Mary, but that's the closest that I think I had to the name you chose.
Also, I thought Faith is the elder daughter. In this chapter, it seems like Julie is the elder one. Or am I mistaken?
Next, wtf, a tiny tracking device on her phone??)!!!?!! Now that's awesome! She knew the whole time. I was thinking that maybe she could've saw something, but I never expected that she actually know soemthign was there and let alone a tiny.
Also, I thought Mrs. May's tiny was going to be Tom. Instead it's Thea, and a girl? What? I remember you very first stories with like Jack Dalton, you had a theme where the girls were usually weaker and by becoming giantesses they can punish the men. I find it interesting that this Thea girl is being used, but at least it looks like she enjoys it.
Wait, so she has only Thea? You mean Faith and Julie have more tinies but mom has a tracking device? She should have more, but I'm kinda glad she has one tiny. I wish that tiny was Tom though. :)
I love how sophisticated and patient she is. She refused to snatch him up and instead is letting Julian come back to into her trap.
The tracker reminded me of Pokemon go. I hate to bring it up, but it's funny to think about it. "Hey, look a Julian is over there!" "Hey, I found a Thea!" I bet Mrs. May could find other tinies to use for her pleasure.
Hey Mrs. May, on the outside of your house is another tiny named Tom taking shelter on the porch. Maybe you should take him with you. :)
So many possibilities. Not exactly a redeem chapter for the last one, but it definatley makes me happy knowing that the story will return to this.
When I saw the chapter title, my brain was doing flips and my heart was pounding. I thought you changed your mind and she was actually snatch Julian before he escape to Faith's room. I don't know why, but I just had a glimmer of hope.
Well, at least this chapter made me feel a lot better. Love how the mom is in control of this situation.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: August 15 2016 9:25 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
"a well trained panty prisoner for the mom, 24/7 mostly solitary confinement with no chance of parole, ever." -D W
^That is like the sexiest thing I read all week! That would be a dream come true!
Date: August 15 2016 9:20 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
@D W,
Don't get me wrong. Faith is still a sexy girl. In fact, she is probably a 9/10. It's just that the mom seems to be out of this world hot. Like 21/10. In other stories from Duggernaut, I see many similar giantesses that resemble Faith, but Mrs. May. My goodness, she is something special.
For the tiny in her panties, maybe that's her favorite. She didn't tie him like what Julie did with her tiny. I think Mrs. May has found a special tiny that is obedient to her. Yes, I agree that that tiny should be in her panties 24/7. I wish I was that tiny. Sounds like heaven. Best position on the best giantess.
For some reason, I just don't see Mrs. May having hordes of tinies, or what you said "shoeboxes" of tinies. I think all these women have a limited number of them and they put all their attention on the tiny that they play with. While thousands of tinies pleasuring her seems awesome. I enjoy the thought of her enjoying 1 tiny at a time and then I picture myself as that tiny. I would be also happy that Mrs. May is focusing on just me and that she is aroused because of me, only me.
I think Faith is saving Carver for Candence. Also, I think she will swallow Carver in the end. She will put him in all of her holes. First, in her bum and she will squeeze him with her tight muscles on his plump body. The she will marinate him in her vagina, coating him in her juices and after that she will lick him slowly and then suck on him like a giant lollipop. Then finally, she slurps him inside and swallows, savoring his useless attempts to free himself. He slowly slides down her throat becuase he is so big. Candence giggles at the thought of Carver inside her. Carver finally lands in her stomach and Candence delights to know that she finally has Carver with her forever.
Date: August 15 2016 8:59 PM Title: Impulse Control
Just read Toms' review, well yeah, the mom is HOT; but still so is Faith. I do have to disagree with Tom on one major issue, if the mom is going to have fun with a tiny, don't make it the one already in her panty. The one already in there should be no more than that, a well trained panty prisoner for the mom, 24/7 mostly solitary confinement with no chance of parole, ever.
Of course he can please her and should, that's a major benefit for her; but when she REALLY wants pleasure the mom should have an army of tinies each with their individual designated task. Some may join her lone captive in her panty, others perhaps between her toes, a few dozen on her large breasts, others kissing her all over, some between her legs prostrate praying up to her womanhood.
Actually I disagree with Tom on two major issues {Sorry Tom} Faiths' Asshole is still SUPER HOT and if Julian talks his way out of going up there, somehow, there's always room for Carver (or is he reserved for Cadences' butthole? Perhaps Faiths' till Cadence shows back up, then up Cadence goes Carver "bye bye")
Date: August 15 2016 8:42 PM Title: Impulse Control
There's always the chance Julian finds Faiths' butt actually IS sweet. Perhaps finding this out gives Julian the idea the mothers' butt hole must be a varitable candy store and worth the risk of introduction. Maybe the companionship Julian always longed for is actually up the moms' hiney, he could even have a girl friend live up there with him.
If Faith is going to put Julian in her butt, hopefully it's for a prolonged time. Let's say as long as it takes a spranged ankle to heal. Faiths' asshole and convalescence spa!!!
Would be nice to have a scene of Julie getting undressed and all the tinies stuck on various spots on her body or trapped in her clothing.
Date: August 15 2016 6:08 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
Part 2 of my review/rant.
Also, in your last response to my review, you said that you wouldn't drag it out because that's cruel. Well guess what. This chapter was cruel.
I'm used to you switching chapters to different characters, but changing a highly anticipated scene to something that involves faith is a big downgrade.
Maybe, we can have a random sneak peek of whoever Mrs. May is playing with. Maybe, get his perspective. I just want some Milf action and this was the greatest climactic sequence to lead us. Then it just all goes away.
Man, this chapter is more cruel than Julie fucking a mummified guy when he can't breathe. I mean, when he was debating what to do, it was basically "should I do what Tomspeedy wants or should I fuck with him" and boy did Julian's choice made my head spinning. Like why would he make such an unlike Julian choice??? What was that?
So Julian has a date with Faith's asshole and Mrs. May. At this point, Mrs. May talking to her pet is better than Faith shoving Julian inside her. That's how sexy Mrs. May is. Her words create arousal.
Cmon, Julian. You don't need a freakin plan to get Mrs. May on your side. Just let her fuck you the way she wants. Or at least watch her play with herself so you can learn about her. Why did he just abondon the whole thing all together.
This chapter....I don't know. There has got to be a redeem chapter coming up soon. I doubt any of the next few chapters will match what could have been done this chapter.
:(
[Report This]Date: August 15 2016 5:53 PM Title: Impulse Control
While this is a good chapter, I don't think I have ever been dissapointed so much before. I even had a countdown since I can kinda predict what time of day you post. (Except weekends.) It just went downhill as the chapter went on.
My expectations were like at the ceiling, and then Julian's stupid (yes, stupid) decisions made him leave paradise and enter hell inside an asshole.
In the beginning of the story, Faith's asshole sounded great and fun to read. In this chapter, it felt like an obstacle, something that I'm trying to get through as fast as possible to get to the finish line with Mrs. May. Becuase Faith is nothing compared to Mrs. May.
You put so much detail in every scene, (which is good) but sometimes it makes the story seem slower and now I worry that the next visit Julian makes will be like 5+ chapters from now. Maybe even September since its like a chapter every 4 days.
I remember for the Miss Harwood chapters in Tom's story, I was so excited and I loved the detail about every scene. I would read the chapters over and over again becuase they were just that good! When Cassidy said that Katie was coming over, Katie did and then took Tom, then played with him, then took him home, more play, then took him to school, and things got better and better.
Instead, in this story, this is probably the biggest tease ever. First there was the Josh chapter, now this. And I thought Julian was horny as I was. I guess not. If I was him, (well, you know what I would do.) I would watch her play with that guy and then maybe take his spot. That's right. I would go into her panties, free that dude, and then let myself stay in there so she can play with me. Why da fuck did Julian decided that he needed strategy? Wtf.
Julian should have just jumped right in. Josh gave Faith an excuse so he can mess around with Mrs. May as long as he wants! It was setup so beatifully.
If I was Josh and I see Julian return next chapter, I would be thinking "wtf, I distracted ur ass and you come back?!!" Seriously, everyone thought Julian would have stayed in that room for the next 10 chapters. Why did he have to stay for only 2 chapters at most?
And to think that this story was going to be more exciting that Tom's story and Nick's story. Well, now it's back in 3rd place. Nick in 1st, Tom's in 2nd.
But, I can't seem to wonder why would you change such a beautiful situation? I thought everyone was enjoying it and then .... Wtf, random change. I know you like to surprise people, but this one was uncalled for. Hopefully, Faith goes to her room, wraps Julian up and drops him back into Mrs. May's room. Why can't we get surprised like that? I know I'm complaining; I just...I just wished this chapter was different. Ohhhh, the expectations were off the charts!
Usually I would give 10 stars, but this time u get an 8. It should be a 2 but that would just be a result of my dissapointment and now how good of a chapter it was.
I can't wait for the chapter where Julian returns. Not the ones in Faith's room.