Date: June 04 2016 3:57 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
Out of all your stories this is probably my favorite. You're doing a great job of pacing having just enough character building and action going on!
Author's Response:
Thank you for giving this story a read. I am always gratified when people enjoy the words I string together. Thank you for taking the time to review
[Report This]Date: June 03 2016 11:04 PM Title: The Finder of Lost Sheep
Finally they are caught! Well, I thought Josh was going to found first. I guess not.
I don't get what was happening to Julian at the end. Was she going to drop in a toilet? How are things not good? She won't just waste him like that. There is a reason why she kept him through all this.
Candence likes Carver. I suspect they will have some fun soon. Faith obviously gets Julian so that should be interesting.
I think I figured out how Josh is going to escape. Faith will remove the towel thinking Josh slipped through and then Josh can then escape to the rest of the house! Perfect!
I think I like how you setup this story. You have multiple guys to suffer different punishments to satisfy many readers and we can choose which tiny we would like to be in their position.
I'm rooting for whoever escapes the bedroom, and enters another room. (Like the master bedroom). That's who I will be following. It doesn't have to be Josh. I will even relate to Carver if he ends up there too.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
There is definitely a point in what faith is doing with Julian it will become clear next chapter. It might be time for faith's mom to at least make an appearance just for you.
[Report This]Date: June 03 2016 7:11 PM Title: The Finder of Lost Sheep
Good stuff.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read this story and share a review.
Date: June 02 2016 8:27 PM Title: One Person's Garbage...
Josh's first tactical mistake. Very very stupid to just go out in the open like that, surprising he'd do it when the smarter play was to just stay put.
[Report This]Date: June 02 2016 12:41 AM Title: One Person's Garbage...
Just keep on going. The tension is building up each chapter as the girls are getting closer in finding the guys.
Damn, Julian with these names! It's like he looked up all the synonyms for fat people. I believe in karma, and I think something large and fat will punish Julian: a giantess's ass. It's gotta be his punishment. It kinda makes sense.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: May 31 2016 5:11 AM Title: Unfamiliar Places
God Julian is so much fun. Even in such a dire situation he's got a quip a minute. He's the best, I'm very much rooting for him even though Josh is the "good guy".
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Yeah Julian seems to be the character people are rallying behind despite his caustic and acerbic personality. He is very fun to write for. :)
[Report This]Date: May 30 2016 9:54 PM Title: The Girls Return
Didn't the phone record them getting into the bathroom? I'm sure it would've kept on recording until they came back into the room.
How does the camera from a phone be able to see Julian pissing? If the cameras were on the edge of the wall, a tiny person would be kinda hard to spot. I can't imagine Julian's piss to be that visible. It should look kinda transparent.
Instead of all this time leading up to the bathroom, I was expecting: "let's check out the video!" "Oh, look, they went into the bathroom." Then the rest of the chapter would be them searching most of the places and soon they find a spot that they didn't think of which is where the guys are hiding.
Well, I'm sure that they will be found next chapter. Unless next chapter is then searching the bathroom, and it ends with the girls checking the last final spot. Lol, I hope the action starts next.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2016 7:34 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
Have you ever done any professional writing? Your style and presentation is so captivating. Every word jumps off the page and screams epic! Don't stop writing! All your stories are fantastic
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your praise. I am delighted my stories entertain you and your sharing only makes me want to write all the more! Thanks.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2016 5:36 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
Good story. The suspesnce is killing me!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I've been trying to update this one fairly frequently so the suspense doesn't leave you hanging too long :)
[Report This]Date: May 28 2016 12:28 PM Title: Porcelain Paradise
Yay! They got water.
I'm sure the girls will be looking for them soon. I think this is my second favorite story of yours. Mostly becuase there is still so much to happen and the possibilities are endless. In addition, I love it when the setting is inside a house. So many ideas can be used.
2 girls and 4 guys. Does each girl get 2 guys or does someone escape and gets found by another woman, if you know what I mean. (I hope the towel to the rest of the house gets removed soon.)
I really can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 26 2016 5:20 PM Title: The Great Escape
Funny how all this work is going to waste since both Faith and the other girl have them recorded.
I really wish the bedroom door towel will be removed soon becuase I'm eager for them to go to other rooms in the house, you know which one. :)
The lonely Henry remains. Well, Faith doesn't need to show an example this time. Perhaps he gets a treat this time. I think Carver should have stayed with Henry. I don't see Faith eating another person. She is running out of men.
The girls should arrive back soon. It must have take some time to get Carver out. Maybe they will bring some popcorn and watch the movie "escape" by Julian and Josh featuring Carver. Lmao!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 24 2016 3:35 PM Title: Improving the Odds
I can't believe a freaking phone camera is going to reveal Josh's hiding spot. I'm so pissed at Julian now.
Man, Julian was staring at Faith's ass 24/7, it's only fair that he gets put in there as punishment.
As for Josh, I hope he stays hidden. Julian keeps on jealordizing everything, man it was such a good spot! Talk about hiding in plain sight! Why Julian! Why?!!
Man, I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 21 2016 2:35 PM Title: Nowhere to Run, Nowhere to Hide
So....that mature voice was the sister, not the mom? Oh. Well, that makes my prevoius review look bad.
Faith...hmm. Interesting name choice. I never met a faith before so if I do in real life I'm going to think of this Faith.
Julian always invulnerable. I get this feeling that that will be tested heavily. He mentioned Faith's ass. Will she stick him in there? I get the feeling he will. Just squirming in there, almost dead, but somehow her survives and lives to be shoved back inside again.
How old is Faith, Julie, Faith's friend? We know their names, how about ages?
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I have tried to depict Faith as late teens no more than 19. Just because it's you and you can't tell anyone else, the more mature voice was her mom not her sister so your review was bang on. ;)
Date: May 21 2016 10:01 AM Title: Nowhere to Run, Nowhere to Hide
I see you've created a hollywood blockbuster there! I can't stop reading this story with amazement.
Especially how you manage to keep the excitement going by simply implying potential risks during Josh and Julian's flight.
Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thanks for leaving another review. Now that things are picking up the story has gotten more interesting and fun to write. With the girls in the room real vs imied danger is helping to establish a great mood especially after Ham. Please continue to enjoy and offer your thoughts about this story.
[Report This]Date: May 20 2016 6:05 PM Title: The Hunt
Wow Duggernaut!
2 chapters! This is amazing. You seem to have a big plan for this story since you're pumping out chapters like this.
I'm jealous of Josh, he is in like a 3d movie where you get lots of thrills and lots of scares, except he is living in this movie!
He got into close contact with both girls and my heart is beating so fast becuase one mistake and he either dies or is found.
So the dark haired girl likes Carver. I think The blonde girl likes Josh. I have no idea why she keeps saving Julian.
You mentioned a girl named Alana finding a tiny. Now you got me hooked. So it's a whole world full of giant girls and small guys. Got it. I thought it was just this blonde girl with shrunken men.
This makes me wonder. Is that mature voice from chapter 15 the blonde girl's mom? I wonder if she has her own personal tiny. (I would love to be that tiny. What if his name is Tom? Lol. I hope the mom is like Miss Harwood and this time I want her tiny to be afraid).
This double girl search party reminds me of the story "Double Dog Dare". You had 2 girls searching for multiple guys and they are clearing out hiding spots. I just keep finding references, don't I Duggernaut. :)
These 2 chapters have been the best so far. We learn about that this shrink things is not just in this room. We have another girl involved. We have a mom involved. Julian might die!
I really, really can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: May 19 2016 3:41 PM Title: Unfamiliar Places
I have seen those boots before! Good choice. They are nice.
[Report This]Date: May 18 2016 5:40 PM Title: Julian
Can you tell me what kind of boot it was? Like a name I can search on Google? I just want to see a picture of it.
Carver was right. Julian isn't planning on rescuing Josh. It's every man for himself for Josh and he is taking his chances on his own.
I wonder is the boot is too high for Julian to get out of. Is he stuck there? I really need to get a picture of it.
Josh's position is making my heart beat quickly. Trapped in a stuffed animal on this giantess girl's bed and there is no escape since he tied himself in. I wonder what she will do to it?
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Look up 'Imogen Black Stack Heel Ankle Boots' for a visual. ;)
Date: May 18 2016 5:13 PM Title: Julian
I'm not the only one who hopes Julian doesn't die, right?
Author's Response:
Another reviewer SomeRright also expressed support for Julian. He is a wonderful character to right for.
Date: May 17 2016 10:44 PM Title: Murphy's Law
Good chapter. Very tense. I'm claustrophobic, so the idea of swealtering inside a stuff animal is absolutely miserable to me. Not that Josh has a choice!
Author's Response:
True there isn't much choice like being hidden in a sleeping bag with a hungry grizzly looking for you. :)
[Report This]Date: May 16 2016 6:28 PM Title: Murphy's Law
There was another story where a dwarf got to hide in a stuffed animal in a giant girl's room. However, this is my first time seeing a tiny man the size of inches hiding inside a stuffed animal.
The other story the girl was hugging the animal and sleeping with it like a teddy bear. I bet this story has other creative ways for this girl to play with her orca.
How big is the orca? A baseball size? Golfball? Soccerball, or what?
To answer Josh's question, let's just say that there is a reason why the orcs is a bit worn out, hehe.
Duggernaut, I bet you had fun writing about this stealthy maneuver. It sure has that suspense feeling every time he sees the girl. It fits your style of writing too, with all these cliffhangers.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
The orca is about 12" long from nose to tail. i did think it was a clever turn...but thzat's just my hubris talking. Yes I am very much enjoying this story at present. there will be another update in two days. The next couple chapters are roughed in and I'm trying to keep it exciting.