Date: September 26 2016 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
Quite the lovely sex scene you've written here. I love that there's juuuuuuu~st that little bit inside Melissa that thinks he's attractive, or somehow endearing. Something just small enough to keep him alive... well, at least long enough to watch everyone he's ever known suffer and die at Melissa's hands.
As always, I loved it.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you're still loving it! There's a good chance that Melissa may get tired of Wyatt and just dispose of him, but for now, she's keeping him alive.
Date: September 25 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great new chapter, glad to see it's back :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad to see that you're enjoying it. :D
Date: September 25 2016 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic first chapter. The fear of watching her walk to the colony and then gas and step on them was chilling. Now her interrogation methods begin. Love how she looks at them as less than human.
Great start,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Melissa certainly is terrifying, isn't she? Whether or not Wyatt survives is anyone's guess.
Date: September 24 2016 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
That's the trap with cruelty. If you try to stop, even for a moment, you remember everything you've done before, and rather than fully reconcile your actions it's easier just to double-down on the next atrocity.
Author's Response:
Very true. It’s easier to continue being a monster rather than face one’s own moral corruption.
Date: September 24 2016 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
You have easily become one of my favorite writers I'm all honesty. I love all your stories!! Do you take suggestions/requests?
Author's Response:
Thank you! I’m always happy to hear whenever someone enjoys my work. I do take requests, depending on free time. :)
[Report This]Date: September 24 2016 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting notion and story development. I think I concur with JDO's idea of being charming enough to survive in the clutches of a malevolent giantess though it may be more of a curse in the long run. Melissa is the embodiment of savagery with a misdirected moral compass. I also like your writing style. Overall a good read thus far. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! Melissa certainly is a misguided individual, someone who tries to justify their sadism. Wyatt is just lucky to be alive…for now.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2016 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is really great. I like the characters m, what you've done and the writing style. I hope you'll continue it but I understand if you don't, just like how I never finish mine :/
Author's Response:
Thank you! My intention is to finish this story as soon as I find the time and inspiration.
Date: April 21 2016 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful and brutal. Everything I'd come to expect. I love the idea of managing to charm a sadistic giantess with my looks JUST enough to keep myself alive. It's very hot.
Also a neat little world you've set up here. Totally disposable tinies, just what I'd expect from that twisted mind of yours.
Author's Response:
You know me, brutal is what I do best :D Despite his attractiveness, it's probably going to get worse for poor Wyatt. Much, much worse.
Date: April 10 2016 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have been missing your writing hon!!I really like it,hope to see more of it in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D I've been busy with real life, so I haven't been able to write as much. I'm hoping to finish this story (and several other stories that I have in mind).
Date: April 09 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 2
Cool story. Love the premise. The mind games are great. Melissa is cold and calculating. Very good at her job. Loved her exterminating the colony and enjoyed learning her history. Poor Wyatt.
Looking forward to more,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad that you're enjoying it so far! There are more mind games in store :D
Date: April 09 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not bad, not bad. Will we see her giant male friend soon. Someone that will do terrible damage to these little people?
Author's Response:
I’m not sure if there’ll be a male giant in this story…although I’m sorely tempted to include one, because giant men are incredibly hot :D I do plan on writing more giant couple stories in the future, though.
Date: April 09 2016 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story hoping to see more
Author's Response:
Thanks! I wrote the first two chapters several months ago, but I’m hoping that by posting them, I’ll actually finish this story.
Date: April 09 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
Such a cruel species, to deliberately create tiny, helpless versions of themselves to torture and maim and kill "in the name of science." I'm glad I don't live on such a cruel planet.
Looking forward to the Last Temptation of Heidi.
Author's Response:
The terrible thing about monsters is that they often don’t even realize that they’re monsters.
We’ll see what happens with Heidi. She may or may not be slightly more mentally stable than Melissa.