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Reviewer: miniscule Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2016 12:09 AM Title: Before big changes

I can't believe there are only a few reviews of this story. It's one of the best I've ever read, even though I prefer shrink stories to growth stories. The plot feels real, as do the characters.  The writing style is excellent. This took a lot of effort.  Thanks to the writer.

Reviewer: raskallion Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 2:06 PM Title: Before big changes

I found the orginal author at http://avatar-seer.deviantart.com/

their last update was February, so they may still be writing this good story. Maybe you can talk to avatar-seer about posting further chapters here their self?

All that aside, thank you for posting this here, I'm quite enjoying this story



Author's Response:

oh thanks for finding his deviant art..i can add a actual website to credit him..

 

thining about adding more stories that i've found and liked that are not on here..i know some good ones and they havent been updated in years or are completed

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2016 12:54 AM Title: Big Tragedy

Very interesting gradual build up with lot of details. That is hard to do. Keeping that transition and development believable. So far, so good.
Keep the characters realistic and don't fall into the pattern of turning her or others in one dimensional characters. The maximum size you choose of 50ft to 100ft is good. Interaction is still possible at 100ft.

Interesting read and I like it so far.

5 stars for you.

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