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Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

A good start. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

Just some feedback, maybe proof read it again. The us a sentence that doesn't make any sense: "The first one she saw was a to the trope loli". I'm not sure what a 'trope loli' is? 

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