[Report This]Date: April 23 2016 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
I like your revised ending the best. And, yes, the super-witches should've anticipated a credibility problem when they came to brag about their ironic actions. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if a lot of the other non-Earthlings in your multiverse didn't occasionally replace the letter "w" with a "b."
[Report This]Date: April 20 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 5
This chapter was so good, I feel almost guilty about updating M.T.O.C.C in preference to THE HEAVENLY BODY SNATCHERS!*
*Emphasis on "almost." ;-D
[Report This]Date: April 14 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ominous opening to the chapter! As for the rest of it; I just have two questions.
1) What does Pearl Strange look like?
2) Is she any relation to Dr. Steve?
Author's Response:
Pearl Strange is a 50 foot brunette. Other than that I haven't put much thought into her apperence. She was a normal sized woman before she made her wishbone wish.
Thinking about it, she white, brown eyes,normal body shape other than being 50 feet tall of course.
No relation to Dr. Steve
[Report This]Date: April 11 2016 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well, the only comment I can formulate right now is...only you can effectively answer the security chief's question.
Date: April 02 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wonder who else will show up at this beach party I look forward to chapter 3
[Report This]Date: April 02 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was never much of a talker, so i don't comment as much. I do enjoy your stories.
I like the story so far and happy to see that it wont get violent and there will be no killing going on.
[Report This]Date: April 02 2016 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
And I'll be here for part 3! As for all the other readers being lurkers? Maybe they think were just colluding each other with our respective reviews.
Insert "shrug" icon, here.
[Report This]Date: March 29 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
An intriguing opener, all right. But, why not (in the words of Deborah Law) split the difference? The beauty of a multiverse (as so superbly portrayed on last night's FLASH/SUPERGIRL crossover) is the literally infinite possibilities! In the case of this story? You could have the party be refreshingly peaceful on mainstream Sizeloa. But, a chapter or two later, you could have the bored GTS-goddesses go to a parallel-Sizeloa and instigate something between the counterpart Deians and Megans!
Just spit-balling, though.