[Report This]Date: February 10 2017 12:04 PM Title: 11:30
I hate that this never got finished :(
Date: September 09 2013 12:34 PM Title: 7:00
I would do anything for this to get finished!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2009 10:00 PM Title: 7:00
cant think of anything to say that hasnt already been said. so looking forward to more from this story. really great characters, dialog, details, etc.
aaron
[Report This]Date: November 09 2008 3:41 PM Title: 10:30
this is interesting. i really want to see more.
Date: August 11 2008 5:20 PM Title: 7:00
Law school instead of writing GTS stories? Come on, man, where are your priorities? ;-)
I had no idea it had been a year since your last update; I didn't actually keep tabs on that. I just know that I check this site nearly every day, eagerly awaiting new chapters of this story. Not the only reason, but I get a rush of excitement when I see Forest Lake on the Most Recent list.
Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm a fan of Tara--as are all the guys who want to survive, I'm sure!
Author's Response: Well, I'll do my best to make that rush happen more frequently. Tara and Zach will be featured in the chapter after next. Next chapter should be something completely different.
[Report This]Date: August 10 2008 6:19 PM Title: 10:30
Well, wel it's been a very long time sence i saw a chapter by you. After a long time i thought that you,...um well might have died or something had happen to you.
Am happy to see and know that you are ok and well.
I was hopeing when you cam back after this long you had written all the chapters for this story, and finish it.
But any way, i am very happy to see that you are back and ok. A another good and fun chapter.
Author's Response: Haha, the only thing that happened to me was life. Law school kind of cramped my writing abilities, and I wound up with a serious case of writer's block shortly afterwards. I haven't completed any more chapters yet, but I do know where I'm going with them. No promises, but I hope to have them done soon-ish.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2008 12:37 AM Title: 7:00
Good story exept it's been soooooo looooooong since a chapter was released!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2008 6:12 AM Title: 10:00
Great Story =)
Keep on it!!! :)
Michael =)
[Report This]Date: July 28 2007 11:53 AM Title: 10:00
I also have a question. I wonder if the men will be able to play a big part apart form being stratigests. Like what you did in A Man of His Time, where the ben were armed with toxic darts. Will there be anything like that. Good stroy though apart from that conundrum.
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Zalrus IX
Author's Response: I've got some ideas for how they'll fight back, Zal. You'll see soon enough, but probably not until a chapter or two from now.
Date: July 24 2007 3:37 PM Title: 10:00
Good job on this chapter.But i can't but help to feel sorry for the men and the teachers.Still i can't believe the girls are so out of heand.I hope the men and the good girls can stop them soon. It is so far a one side battele.Am also would like to know if Alexa,Aisha,and Christine are the tallest of the girls or are there are some are bigger?I also wonder how long is this story is going to be i mean is how meany chapters is it going to be.I hope by the end of the story it hase a happy ending to it.Also when i read this story i like to belived that am the only guy that got tall as the girls and i have a girlfriend just as tall to at lease give the men a chance to fight back to win but i can't because it is a giantess story after all and i can't do that to this story. I don't know way i tolled you that i guss it was something i hade to got off my mind to you. Any way hope to see a new chapter soon keep it up.P.S Ill leave a rating when the story is finish.BYE
Author's Response:
Well, things aren't as one-sided as you think. For one thing, the girls may be much bigger than the guys, but they aren't united against them. As you can see in the earlier part of the chapter, the two groups with the biggest members actually hate each others' guts.
Now let's try to answer some of your questions. At the moment, Alexa's group contains the tallest girls. I'm aiming for something like sixteen chapters, with the story ending around 3:00 PM. Yeah, there's no couple stuff in this story, although if you think about it, Zach is much smaller than the other guys, so at least they look like giants to him ;-) . I'm still trying to figure out what exactly will happen in the next chapter, but I'm working on it. Thanks again for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2007 10:52 PM Title: 9:30
Nice addition as per usual. Look forward to more....
Author's Response: Thanks DX. More is coming, hopefully at smaller intervals. The whole "write one chapter every two months" thing isn't good for my karma.
[Report This]Date: April 30 2007 8:13 PM Title: 9:00
very good. I've noticed this story had more plotlines as Pirates of the carrebian: dead man's chest, so I hope you tie up those loose ends in the process of giving us what we want.
so hope that next chapter is a-near
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Zalrus IX
Author's Response:
Oh, I have all those plotlines planned out. Made a flow chart and everything.
I can't tell you when the next chapter will be here, because I don't know myself. But I'm working on it...
Date: April 27 2007 4:42 AM Title: 7:00
Your back i was happy to see a chapter update but i would like to know is how many chapters long is this story going to be? Any way am glad to see a new chapter. I wonder if there are any good girls that are taller then Alexa or her group. I know its not likey to happen because it is a giantess story after all but i am someone who likes farness could there be at less one guy didn't shrink and at less grew somewhat in hight to help the other men . But i know thats not going to happen oh well. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Author's Response: Nah, the men are all shorter than the girls. Juan should be the tallest of them.
Date: March 16 2007 12:02 PM Title: 8:30
really enjoyed it one of the best wish author would do more chapters including zach meeting with tara again and staying with her
Author's Response: We'll wait and see about that.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2007 11:40 AM Title: 8:30
i really liked this story different situations i would like to see a couple more chapters ofit
Author's Response: They're coming. I'm back from break, and getting back to work. You might see progress by next weekend.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2007 3:32 PM Title: 8:30
Very good. I like it.Good Grammer, good story, good charecters, and a cliffhanger at the end (sort of) Who could ask for more? keep up the good work and update soon!
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Zalrus IX
Author's Response: The update will probably take a while, Zal. I'm on vacation at the end of this week and won't have access to a computer I can write on. I promise that I'll try to get it done as soon as I can, tough.
Date: February 11 2007 7:12 PM Title: 8:30
this is a very clever and creative story. I am enjoyign the diverse characters and how everyone is a difference size. You have alot of good things going and i look forward to see how you are going to progress this.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, Asukafan.
[Report This]Date: February 10 2007 1:09 PM Title: 8:00
OK, maybe I did rate the story too soon. It was off to a slow start, and maybe I was a little anxious to read about some interaction between giants and shrinkies. This 3rd part is better. Looking forward to more action in the next part.
Good story line. Lots of potential.
BTW, as suggested by Zalrus, I too would prefer that stories be told in the past tense. Even if it is being told by an eye witness, it is being recorded after the incidents have occurred.
Author's Response:
I think you'll like this next chapter I'm posting now... Actually, given that it's more towards the gentle side, you may or may not. But it certainly has action.
I know the story had a slow start, but as you can see I've got a lot of characters to deal with, and I had to get some basic ones involved so I could start piling on more later.
And as far as the tense thing goes, in this story, it really isn't being recorded afterwards. I do it to preserve the possibility of any narrator's imminent mortality... At least one of the narrators will die before the story ends.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2007 9:07 PM Title: 8:00
Teh plot thickens! I'll admit that I was a bit skeptical of this narrator, as I felt he would be another Holden C-type (And I HATED catcher in the rye, because of that , um, PHONEY!), but good, very good. I've alwys been interested in the idea of diffrent sizes, adds a bit of varity. Well I hope this gets updated soon!
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Zalrus IX
P.S. I hope someone reads my fanfiction on fanfiction.com so people can tell me if it would be wise to put on this web site (Same penname)
Author's Response:
Catcher in the Rye annoyed me as well. I assure you that Carl isn't Holden. They're both misanthropes, but beyond that the similarity ends. This may become clearer over time.
As far as your fanfic goes, if it's GTS oriented, just post it. This place will accept almost anything that's relevant.
[Report This]Date: January 25 2007 4:04 PM Title: 7:30
Oh, yeah, another thing. Why do you write the majority of your stories in present tense? I mean it seems almost natural to switch into past, and it elleviates the mistake of changing tenses, and thus less crow-eating-soul-ings. Esplain!
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Zalrus IX
Author's Response: Both A Man of His Time and The Forest Lake Incident are written intentionally in the present tense. For MOHT, it was because I liked the immediacy of present tense, and the "you-are-there" feel it gave to the action. For Forest Lake, it's because it's from a first-person viewpoint, and it is quite possible that certain narrators will not survive the story's duration.