Reviews For Forgiveness
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Reviewer: Mheh Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 15 2024 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

I don't understand why you tagged this as gentle. Honestly, with a title like forgiveness, I expected something very different, so maybe a bit of the blame lies with me. But I still don't think the tag fits, at all.

Is it the last interaction? The one that lasts a few paragraphs out of the entire story? Which ends with the main character dead?

Yeah, I don't see it.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved that Cassie saw him and had mercy on him as a bug and that she stepped on him. Wonderful story.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2018 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

Awesome crush. I feel their desperation.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2018 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great set up.

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very cool story. I can understand their risk for food. Will any of the Giantesses notice them?
Well done,
Diesel

Reviewer: UserDoesNotExist Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 18 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Please go on.

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

A good start to a story. I don't usually read the violent/gorie stories, but this one has me interested. I think it's the escapee's situation and the grittiness of it. I look forward to seeing what you do in five chapters.

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it

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