Date: February 15 2024 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
I don't understand why you tagged this as gentle. Honestly, with a title like forgiveness, I expected something very different, so maybe a bit of the blame lies with me. But I still don't think the tag fits, at all.
Is it the last interaction? The one that lasts a few paragraphs out of the entire story? Which ends with the main character dead?
Yeah, I don't see it.
Date: May 14 2018 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved that Cassie saw him and had mercy on him as a bug and that she stepped on him. Wonderful story.
Date: May 14 2018 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awesome crush. I feel their desperation.
Date: March 22 2016 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very cool story. I can understand their risk for food. Will any of the Giantesses notice them?
Well done,
Diesel
Date: March 18 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Please go on.
Date: March 17 2016 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
A good start to a story. I don't usually read the violent/gorie stories, but this one has me interested. I think it's the escapee's situation and the grittiness of it. I look forward to seeing what you do in five chapters.
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it