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Reviewer: MrEnderman Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2016 11:53 PM Title: Findings

You most likely already got a request, but I'd say yes.

Also, loving the story so far!

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2016 6:00 AM Title: Findings

I say yes she gets over her fear! 

Another great chapter. Love hearing about Mia's fantasies,  especially with Annabelle kissing her feet! Can't wait to see some intimate scenes! 

Reviewer: SenatorWarlockLord Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 9:37 PM Title: Findings

Yes. No preference though.

Reviewer: SenatorWarlockLord Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 10:52 AM Title: Two to Annebelle's House

Nicole, because why not. I personally can see it. Mia might also then hastily add that she only likes her only a little bit more then everyone else, just to not hurt Annabelle's feelings.

Reviewer: TheChoreographer Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 10:39 AM Title: Wherein I Fuck Everything Up

Ooooh, I love this one. 

Little Mia definitely crushes on everyone here for varying reasons, but Lana is definitely her favorite. 

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 15 2016 12:16 AM Title: Wherein I Fuck Everything Up

lol Im almost always on when im home. I will agree with LittleAmber in Nicole being 1st but because AB got her 1st I stayed with her.

 

The other day I was going to say Nicole but I got beat to it while i was reviewing.So far I like Nicole the most cause she seems very dom like and not afraid to do humiliating things to her shrunken friends.

Reviewer: LittleAmber Signed [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 9:30 PM Title: Two to Annebelle's House

I'm gonna say the opposite of Afroking and say Annebell is her first, with Nicole being possible second. Mia may really not appreciate Nicole pulling her along.

Also, burned through these four chapters quick, love your work! Some of the best F/f work on the site. Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

All my work is generally up to this quality (except my older stuff: "Of a Construct", "Dream or Nightmare?", "Little Do You Know . . .", "All Hail the Controller"; that's a bit of an old shame, but I can't bring myself to delete it).

Generally speaking, all I do is F/f, so if you like this, feel free to read through my archives!

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 9:28 PM Title: Two to Annebelle's House

Mia answer is Nicole. From what I read Mia seems really into Nicole.

 

But Annebelle would be her second



Author's Response:

Afroking, you've decided two chapters out of three already. You're scaring off everybody else. But seriously, fucking hell you're fast.

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 1:13 PM Title: Annebelle

Another nice chapter!

Maybe Nicole should get the shrink treatment too? Would be hot to see Annebelle get a little payback to the meanie! Also 2 shrunken girls are better than 1! 

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2016 12:52 AM Title: Annebelle

Nope Annebelle gets some 1 on 1 with Mia... for now

This is fun lol

Reviewer: v00d002001 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 13 2016 5:04 PM Title: Holy Fuck

Two great chapters! Nothing better than a group of hot school girls playing with a shrink machine! Good descriptions too! 

 

I want to see a 4 rolled, for Nicole! Let's see Mia really become her slave! 

Reviewer: RunemasterG Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 9:03 PM Title: Holy Fuck

I say it should be a 4

Reviewer: Rollerballboy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 12:34 PM Title: Holy Fuck

she rolls a 4 nicole

Reviewer: greaterthan3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 12:24 PM Title: Wherein I Fuck Everything Up

Duh Anabelle. Boobs are the obvious answer!

Reviewer: InaWorld Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 12:22 PM Title: Holy Fuck

2

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 11 2016 3:46 AM Title: Wherein I Fuck Everything Up

This is an ez one... Mia

 

I like your idea Silent-one.Lets go nuts

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