Date: March 20 2016 10:09 AM Title: The Family Business
Nice addition I like the way you are setting the stage and developing the story. Amidst your hectic schedule please continue
Author's Response:
Glad to see you again, Duggernaut. I had a quick lull which I used to finish this. Started the chapter a few days after posting the last.
I definitely have a number of things in mind in where to head. Will always gleefully consider suggestions though.
Date: March 20 2016 9:57 AM Title: The Family Business
Great beginning to what I assume will be a great story. Looking forward to the upcoming chapters. Thanks for your contribution!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the kind words. Hope to add more soon!
Date: March 07 2016 2:03 PM Title: The Family Business
It is excellent to see you have posted a story here. A fan of well developed characters, I like how you are setting the foundation for this tale. Cyan is a great name. Looking forward to seeing this story as it unfolds.
Author's Response:
Good to see you, Duggernaut. I've already went back and fixed a few mistakes with gramamr and misplaced words, and added a few more details. I'll certainly try my best. Hope it continues to garner views and interest.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2016 11:45 PM Title: The Family Business
Gotta say, I'm quite intruiged by the story. Interesting main protagonist with an interesting predicament. Exceptional writing, I look forward to seeing progress made on this story. For a first attempt, at least at a GTS story, it seems pretty good thusfar, you seem on the right track.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words. I like to build intriguing chracters before I get into anything. I already have a small cast in place, and might add some more. Hopefully it will live up to your hopes.