[Report This]Date: May 05 2020 5:45 AM Title: The Pickle
simply an amazing story. Love the family aspect and the unaware destruction of the family dynamic. That the dog name as the same magic catalyst word really sets up the characters for defeat. And the choice of the words “pickle seeds” as well as getting some of the pickle into her womb got me thinking about her getting impregnated by some daddy/pickle hybrid baby. Lol
Date: March 06 2016 5:42 AM Title: The Pickle
First of all I would like to say that this story is an excellent come back for you!
Unaware and Object Transform are my favourite genres! So I'm glad to see one of my favourite writers back again :D
I hope that whatever is happening in your life gets better. Good luck for the future
~TheSmitty #WTUTS
Author's Response:
Life is just always busy with work, hobbies, family, and obligations etc. But hopefully I can find some more time to write. It flatters me to hear how much you care for my writing. Hopefully my next release will also be to your liking. As for Unaware Object Transformation, it seems that not a lot of writers are into it, or it's tough to write for. I will strive to keep it up though.
Thanks. EricAFreak #WTUTS
[Report This]Date: February 28 2016 11:03 PM Title: The Pickle
nice, huge fan of unaware tf. hope to ee more, like you said at the end not enough authors doing this rare genre, the best genre. keep it up.
Author's Response:
Yeah it really is sad there aren't more Unaware TF writers on GTSW. Glad you liked it.
Thanks.
WTUTS!#
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 11:36 PM Title: The Pickle
Ah, yes! Loved it as usual, nice to see you write again. Really good ending, I wonder what the fathers consciousness was after this, him "split" into several pieces, most of them being reduced to a soupy paste in his daughters digestive tract and becoming her poop, some of it stuck in her womb, a tiny bit of it swallowed by the dog, some juices of him soaked up by her panties. This is the hottest thrilling thought of the story in my oppinion. Great idea of the mother panically calling her daughter and its turned off. You come up with the best plots. Welcome back man.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliments, as for the status of her father, I leave that up to all the readers immagination.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 9:16 PM Title: The Pickle
YOU ARE BACK! You are still out there! What a fantastic surprise :-] Yes, yes yes!! I was so sad you were gone, I thought all those Penny plots were lost. I think I have told you before but I think you are the best author on here, at least for me. Maybe it's just because I love transformation plots more than anything. But you also add so much joy to them, you are gifted, your irony, your sarcasm, the unfortunate endings. They are the best... this story WAS AMAZING. It was by far the best story of 2016 so far for me. What a fantastic, hot, thrilling idea with the pickle and the daughter using it for masturbating and then eating the remains. I am in love with this. I always loved the vore ideas the most, but also insertion, both pussy and anal. Sounds maybe weird but my favorit part of the story was then the girl used her dirty smelling panties to wipe up the mess and then put them on again, then be like smirking "there, all clearn"! Oh how ironic of her smearing her bum bacterias all over the kitchen table, her parents expenive one, I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS. But also what if some of the pickle juices the panties soaked up would contain some of her fathers self and it would now be, until her usisng the washing machsine of course, kept in hell in her girls inner ass back area of her panties. I always wished to read some plot like this. This story is just... YES. Thank you! Thank you for coming back!! I hope so much you will write again more oftenly, you just have to! I would love seeing a sequel to your club series too, with some unaware micro/nano anal vore again. Ah I am in heaven right now reading your story again :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the reveiw. Yeah my life is busy, but hopefully I should get some more time to write. Look forward to it.