Date: December 06 2020 5:16 PM Title: Broken
Love this story, you really tap into the emotions of your character! Hope to see more from you in the future in another story or continuing this one!
Author's Response:
Thank you, that's very kind! I have pretty much abandoned this story unfortunately though you can find my work on Deviantart as AP76 and on Twitter as @TinyAP5. I've continued to make content, just mixing visuals with storytelling rather than just pure storytelling.
Hit me up on these platforms if you ever want to chat further. I think we have ideas about macrophilia that are pretty alike :D
[Report This]Date: January 14 2017 1:10 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Good job, reading this made my heart pump, both in excitement and fear of the situation. Hope to see more.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2016 1:56 PM Title: Broken
Damn!
Great read though.
Date: September 16 2016 4:36 AM Title: Impunity
More Mrs. Einhardt please.
Later,
Diesel
Date: September 16 2016 4:32 AM Title: The First "Accident"
Cool, love the woman first pushing her away with her shoe and then squashing her. I am sure that would happen.
Nice chapter, easy to read.
Later,
Diesel
Date: September 16 2016 4:26 AM Title: Compassion is Key.
Hopefully big things for Jade Hannen. She would make a great Giantess.
Later,
Diesel
Date: September 16 2016 4:20 AM Title: It's Really Happening
The journalist screaming is probably true. She should run to the nurse.
Well done,
Diesel
Date: September 16 2016 4:16 AM Title: How Did the World React?
Nice chapter. It seems so real. The possibility of a shrinking disease. Why not.
Later,
Diesel
Date: September 15 2016 10:41 AM Title: Impunity
I like the story and where it is going! Very nice
[Report This]Date: September 15 2016 2:26 AM Title: Impunity
I'm loving this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I hope the coming chapters will be to your liking too.
Date: September 14 2016 7:37 PM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Nice. Chapter 1. Good setup.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks Diesel for the support :) It's very appreciated
Date: September 14 2016 3:14 PM Title: The First "Accident"
Really enjoying your realistic exploration of our favourite topic! :)
Looking forward to the story continuing to grow and become more intimate with the mani characters.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much for the support. It's nice to hear it's realisitc considering the topic. The story continues to grow, I hope you continue to like it.
[Report This]Date: September 14 2016 1:31 AM Title: The First "Accident"
Great stuff!
Date: April 04 2016 9:21 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
I love where this is going, any more coming soon?
Date: February 27 2016 4:13 PM Title: Compassion is Key.
wow! great stuff!!
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 7:46 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Haven't read the story yet, but I'm giving it 5 stars because I think the other guy meant to do so
Author's Response: Haha Thanks for that SheerForce. He seemed to like it indeed :) I hope you like the story
Date: February 27 2016 3:09 AM Title: It's Really Happening
So well done. So realistic. The poor people on the news. Any thoughts of a female reporter interviewing a shrunken person? Or what the nurse does to watch over a shrunken person?
Nice job,
Diesel
[Report This]Date: February 26 2016 6:55 PM Title: It's Really Happening
I've just finished reading the first 3 chapters, and you have a very interesting story here. I like the POV you're using, and am looking forward to the next chapters. Good Luck and continue the good writing!
Date: February 26 2016 11:42 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Wow, great start. Your POV voice has really vivid emotion.
Author's Response: Thanks realRS. It is nice to hear. It's funny I was reading Erica's House just before beginning to write :)
Date: February 26 2016 8:37 AM Title: An Underestimated Threat
Hey I really like how your story begins and how you focus on small details. I'd really prefer the chapters to be a bit longer since it doesnt even take me half a minute to read through them :)
Great work hope you continue with it^^
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I try to make it look realistic. I think there are too many stories with incoherences everywhere. Even videos are sometimes too incoherent. Concerning lenght: I prefer to upload often and regularly than one long chapter every months. I hope you'll continue to like it.