Date: August 18 2018 7:59 AM Title: Fated meetings
Wowie, this is well-written. I read a bit, in the middle actually, haven't gone through the beginning.
So, wow. Good stuff, I want to say. I don't think I'll ever finish it, due to my abject hatred of the omnipotence fetish, and that's not ragging on you or anyone who likes it, that's purely me. I think I'll be recommending this though, and definitely looking through your works.
Author's Response:
I'm gload you enjoy it even if it's not your cup of tea then, larkpie. :)
Feel free to read my other story if this one isn't to your perticular tastes. There's a difference with those girls compared to the ones in this one that might give you a better read. Hopefully.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2017 7:34 PM Title: Epilog
Yep, I finished this long ago. I'm a very fast reader. And so I have nothing to read and I'm desesperate for new stories. If you have any recommendation I would gladly accept any (This is a response to the other comment. But I dont know how to respond to it, it doesnt let me, and I would have responded sooner. But I did not notice xD)
Author's Response: I'd say any of F.W's stories but he has a lot of stuff he writes so it's hard to find what you're into at times. @_@ But, he's one of my favorite writers so I'll shamelessly promote him. :P Totally has nothing to do with him being my friend or anything... *cough, cough...*
[Report This]Date: September 16 2017 7:17 AM Title: Epilog
I love this story so much!! Are you going to do a sequel or something?
Author's Response:
Jumped right from Pay it Forward to Precious Little Demons? I think you did that backwards. XD
I won't say that there won't be a sequal but at the moment all my times invested in P.I.F. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. It was my first story and by far one of the best experiences I ever had. :)
Out of curiosity did you finish this one already? I'd be surprised since I made it so long. XD
[Report This]Date: March 16 2017 6:06 PM Title: Epilog
It's the warmest day of the summer, the water company cut the supply for the whole city because of an emergency and now I see this final chapter uploaded to make my day.
;___;
It was such a beautiful ending, Claire finally got to a point in her life in which she can have real happiness and a family that won't betray her, and so did the other girls. The relationship she has with them is sooo adorable, specially with the twins. I'm sure she can keep them through the good path. I hope only the best for them.
It was a really touching story, reading about Claire and the girls, facing their problems, being betrayed, gaining trust in each other, themselves and overcoming themselves, becoming a better person. It's quite easy to make me cry with fiction but not so much to make me care for the characters as much as I did for these girls. Until now my favorite is still Kai but I got attached to all of them. It's a bit sad not to see more of the girls at least for the time being but I think the ending gave them enough closure.
Thanks again for writing this and thanks to Franchise Writer for helping you. I'll be reading your next story too when you get to it. Take care.
Author's Response:
Thank you KentaRyu for sticking with me till the very end. I've seen your reviews from day one, and you were one of the people who i got excited to see every time i posted a chapter. Thank you for always leaving me something to read. It really does make the world to a writer when we can see what people think of our work. and i'm glad to know my story made you feel the way it did.
I look foward to seeing what you think of whats to come. Thank you for supporting me. :)
Date: March 16 2017 3:13 PM Title: Fated meetings
This story is your own doing Sterben. And it was a great read, from begining to end. I look foward to seeing Pay it foward, from begining to end as well. :)
Author's Response:
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Thank you for helping me. Thank you for everything...
[Report This]Date: March 16 2017 2:50 PM Title: Epilog
And it finally draws to an end. :(
All I can say is thanks for writing this story! If you choose not to continue it, perhaps start another and I'll read it.
Author's Response:
Thats what i meant when i said i didn't know if i would continue it or not. this story, is finished. As to what follows after, however, i don't know.
Thank you for sticking with me Spooky, you've been a pleasure to have here. :)
[Report This]Date: March 12 2017 3:35 AM Title: The truest form of love...
D'awww, there's nothing more romantic than a room full of flying objects while someone declares their love~
No but seriously I found that part really cute. It's a really nice ending. Claire realizing the twins' true feelings and having a happy finale with them and the other girls, plus Kat's new addition to her family.
I'm eager to read the last part, still, take your time with it and have it done when you thing it's right.
Thanks for writing this story.
Author's Response:
xD
I'm glad you enjoyed it KentaRyu. I'll probably have it up soon, but yeah. I need to be a little careful. There was a lot of information i had in mind to put in the story but i ended up cutting it down the line so i need to tie up any loose ends i may have left open.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 11:33 PM Title: The truest form of love...
Now that they realize they almost became monsters, maybe they won't shrink people and use them as toys.
Author's Response:
I can see you're highly against GTS when it leans towards the crueler aspect of things. But i can say firmly, if a monster comes in to play for them, they'll do whatever means necessary to remove it from the picture. Claire however will be a guiding factor for them. They know the fine line they walk on, and know how dangerious of a game their playing.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 6:41 AM Title: The truest form of love...
Wow! An amazing ending to an amazing story! Ack, I so don't want it to end! Maybe there will be a sequel, perhaps a year in the future or more. Regardless, I commend your effort here and appreciate you saw it through to the end. So happy you chose a happy ending after all the difficult scenes!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the ending SpookyTaco. But, i don't think it's the ending for their story, not yet at least.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 12:21 AM Title: The truest form of love...
i cried... how many times did this story make me cry...im sad to face the conclusion, but this is one damn good story.
Author's Response:
I felt the same way writing it, knowing it was going to reach it's apex... But no story lasts forever. :(
Thank you for your words Afroking, and sticking with me all this time.
Date: March 03 2017 10:05 PM Title: Fated meetings
I'm SUPER-happy to see the story go on!
And I think it becomes better and better. It's not a good giantess-related story - it's a great story as a story-story. Love the charicters: the "monsters" philosophy is good and I like to know where it's all going to.
Latest chapters are the best! And I would love to see the next one! *0*
Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying it even if the last few chapters have seem rather tame of GTS compared to the earlier chapters. Either way thank you for leaving me your thoughts. I'll try to have the next chapter up soon. It's proving harder to write then I thought sadly.
[Report This]Date: March 01 2017 4:25 AM Title: Who... are you?
It feels good to see stuff fall into place now with most, if not all, of the past revealed. I can see a nice constrast between the twins' attitude towards their friends before and now, saying things like "you must listen and follow us to the tee. If we say jump, you jump" in the past, which aren't exactly the most friendly words. It seems the twins have changed quite some in this time, for good I think.
What Claire and the other girls need now is time to process all this new information and see exactly how the twins have changed their life, specially Claire. Hopefully they can understand their reasons and maybe get to a good point in their relationship, I'm looking forward to see how all of this develops.
Now, sorry if this has been told before and I forgot about it but, Lily's wish hasn't been revealed yet, right? What about Lily's commentary on her and Claire being more similar than the older one thinks, was that because of both being part of the twins' scheme?
Great job as always.
Author's Response:
You're always quick to jump to conclusions, and most of them time their spot on lol. On regards to Lily's hidden wish, it's not just hers. The Twins had each of the girls tell them their deepest desires, and wishes. And each girl gave them one. What they are, will be revealed next chapter. I can't give away everything now can I? ~
Thank you for the review KentaRyu, i always look foward to reading yours. You read deeper then most and that excites me XD
As for Lily's commintary however, it was more that instead of Claire being just any other adult, she was like her. She was hurt, had been hurt. She was abused. She tried to run away. And... other, incidents that haven't fully been confirmed just yet. Make no mistakes, all the girls still have a lot that had happened in their past that hasn't been revealed yet. Whether it all eventually will be or i leave it up to the readers to figure out is still...
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[Report This]Date: February 28 2017 10:17 AM Title: Who... are you?
The words are raw and unedited, but the story siezes control and doesn't let go. Every character in the sizable cast has a distinct personality. Themes of betrayal and forgiveness are leveraged skillfully to create a masterpiece of storytelling. The saddest part, by far, is that the story is drawing to a close. Of course, it's already the length of two full novels, but I don't want it to end. I want to see Claire reunite and forgive (of course), but also how the plan unfolds, how things are five years from now, and so much more. Maybe if I leave a review after every chapter, you'll just keep writing them. :)
Author's Response:
Hehe, if i had kept with the story path i set out when i first started this i might have just held you up on that offer. But sadly, or i should say thankfully i was stopped a few chapters in and the story by far has made me happy as a whole where it otherwise might not have. Thank you for reviewing SpookyTaco. I know even with my work being edited by F.W. there's still a lot of mistakes i make he isn't able to fix for me... :(
But i'll edevor none the less to fix them and make it better for people to read with time! Your review was kind and informative where i need to better myself. So once again, thank you.
[Report This]Date: February 28 2017 12:17 AM Title: Who... are you?
They may have the power to do anything they want, and to punish anyone they want, but do they have the right to? They used thier "friends" and now they must reap the "rewards".
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're still here with me Frozenbutt. They have made mistakes yes, and the outcome was as followed. It's just time to see where the die fall and what numbers land on for them all.
Date: February 27 2017 4:12 AM Title: Fated meetings
So did they erase her memory of meeting them the first time or not? I assumed when they first said they had met her before that something bad happened and the twins wiped or changed her memory and she doesn't seem to react to any of it until the whole story is told. Look at me, questioning potential plot holes on GW lol.
Author's Response:
Lol XD
They had met her long ago, and learned a lot from her and wanted to eventually bring Claire into their world. But with her sincerity came her naivety. She wouldn't be ready to learn of everything they had been doing. So they had planned on completing their plan before eventually bringing Claire into it, but they ran out of time...
Claire was reverting back to her old deppressed self because no one was there for her anymore. So, they stepped in. But they had to make her forget... so to not frighten her or change her irreversibly like they had with their friends. Their extremely cautious with Claire after all that had happened with their four friends. And Claire is the last one they'd want to mess with mentally.
I hope your reading this helps clear up any confusion. Or... possibly adds on a few other questions that i haven't answered yet...
:P
[Report This]Date: February 26 2017 2:07 PM Title: Fated meetings
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[Report This]Date: February 23 2017 2:04 PM Title: What We'll Do...
Again, that was fast. It hasn't really been long since my last message.
For the twins even after getting all that knowledge to get to experience the human narute again, and see that that kind of behavior isn't just a limited case like with his father but a most frequent thing than we would like it to be should be quite shocking, of course it would make them doubt their effort. Though it's admirable that they still wanted to follow with their objective, even if not by the best means.
It was also quite interesting story to see the first interaction between the twins and Claire, is was really eager while reading. Sadly it wasn't in the best moment for them. Or maybe it was? Since it seems that'll open a oportunity for them to interact much more than they would on a regular situation.
The part in which Claire thought they finally would talk to her, when they were just leaving, that was quite sad for me.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
the World on the outside can be shiny and beautiful but when you see the hidden parts beneath it can get ugly. I was hoping this chapter displayed that, and showed that the twins weren't above playing by thier rules... even if it meant stopping the Monsters. As for claire coming int, it was a fateful moment which i hope i displayed properly. I'm glad you liked it and i'm working on the next chapter now. I hope to see what you think on the next one. KentaRyu!
[Report This]Date: February 21 2017 11:04 PM Title: What We'll Do...
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You know what, now's as good a time as any to say this. So I'll retire from 4 years of lurking and just come out and say it.
This is my absolute favorite story I've read on this site.
It's not in competition for the most sexually pleasurable, inventive shrinking scenario, or polished story (and I mean that in the best possible way; your talent is abundantly clear, and with a bit more attention to grammatical errors and sentence structure, your story could match the technical level of polish of some of the site's greatest classics). But regardless of all of those, it's still the best story I've read throughout my stay on the site, for one simple reason.
This story is positively emotionally charged. Every chapter I read strikes me so deeply on the inside, filling me with genuine warmth or sadness depending on its content. Even the sentences that are a tad confusing bleed a strong sense of emotion through them, and it's abundantly clear just how much thought you've put into developing them. I can't remember the last time I've felt so much for fictional characters as I have for Claire and the twins, and their plight has developed them into becoming so inspiring, likable, and, above all, human. Ironically, you've done a masterful job at making two superhuman, omniscient girls extremely understandable and natural, something I never would have believed was possible prior to reading this.
So, I wanted to say thanks. Thanks for writing a story warmer and more uplifting than almost any I've ever seen. Thanks for inspiring me to look within myself and try to be a genuinely better person, and a responsible, thoughtful adult as well. And thanks for convincing me to finally write a review on this site, because I'm always elated to see a new chapter on the Most Recent page.
I'll stop gushing now. But I just wanted to let you know how much reading Precious Little Demons has meant to me, and I sincerely look forward to reading all future chapters. You have a work of art here.
Author's Response:
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I, I don't honestly know how to respond to this...
You've put so much thought into this review, and your words... i'm honestly tearing up. T^T
It brings me great joy, and pride to know I can make you emotive and stir your feelings like this. Thats all i've ever wanted when i made this story. And i'm hoping i'll be able to keep those feelings going till the final words are written, and the story reaches its climax, as sad as that will be for me.
Saying thank you in return might not seem like much, i say it to everyone who reviews for me, but i mean it none the less each time i say it. When someone takes their precious time to tell me what they think, and give me that time, it makes me feel revered by them. So i'll say it again, Thank you. Thank you so much for telling me this. This, is one of the most sincere responce's i've ever gotten from this site, and it's really struck a cord in me.
I'm happy to be writing here, because it's people like you, who make me proud to be a member of this community.
Thank you, Hyperian.
Date: February 21 2017 12:28 PM Title: Fated meetings
OK so the only reason I haven't left a review lately is because I haven't read every chapter. The last one I read was when Lily revealed Claire her tragic past and you know I'm a big Lily fan ;). And the only reason I didn't finish reading was becuase I'm afraid to finish reading these awesome chapters so quickly lol I know it sounds weird but that's me personally. Please, please, please don't let a lack of reviews discourage you from writing because your story is sooo good. It's not just a fetish story but it has such dramatic depths to it invovling Claire and the girls.
Author's Response:
I appreciate you telling me this, but don't worry ^,^
The community stepped up and told me what they think of my work and honestly it's calmed my nerves tremendously. I'll keep posting chapters till the final words part!
Thank you for leaving me your thoughts, i'm glad you like Lily, she was a tricky girl to write about. :3
[Report This]Date: February 19 2017 10:31 PM Title: Why We're Here...
I'm sorry to hear that, I meant to write a review sooner but was really tight on time there, though it seems like more people have left their impression since the last time, nice.
Moving on this chapter, I misinterpreted the last chapter and thought that Amelia was able to hear what happened in that memory, seems ike it wasn't like that. Is nice that at this point everything fell into place and now the family seems to be closer than ever, and that's really good, even inf the way until that point was really painful. Really well done.
I'm eager to finally now about the plan next time.
Author's Response:
Thank you Kenta, i'm sorry if i gave off the impression i did. The Twins arn't as powerful as they currently are now. In the past, it was trial and error, as seen by Alexis showing her mother their memories. A new chapter should be coming up soon, so thank you for reviewing, you've consitantly done so and that really makes me feel better about my writing. I can't wait to show you all whats to ocme. the twins story isn't over yet.