[Report This]Date: June 15 2016 2:14 AM Title: May-be this won't be so bad?
Is nice to see a new chapter. Now getting to know more about May, it seems her situation isn't as tragic as Kat's but still pretty serious.
I liked the relationship Claire formed with May, and I'm a bit interested in how the twins would explain May what she was doing with that man.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it Kentaryu :D I was begining to worry i made it to tame. I havent had a lot of reviews in my last couple chapters. But i plan on making it get better soon.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2016 2:55 PM Title: May-be this won't be so bad?
Nice chapter! I'm very happy another chapter was added, I can't wait for more! However, I did find a few grammatical errors, but nothing too major. I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Aww i thought i nailed all those in when i re-read it :(
I'll try to make it cleaner next chapter, thank you for telling me!
[Report This]Date: May 03 2016 2:05 PM Title: Rewarding good behaviour
Another good chapter. It's nice to have some time with the twins before the next girl and also quite interesting see how different they can make Kat's cat bath idea.
What is the twins' great plan that hey have for Claire and what kind of "modifications" the have made to the other girls is something I'm looking forward to see.
Anyway, things are looking good for the next chapter
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I didn't want to just give one girl a spotlight then never have her shown again, so expect each of the girls to be current in most of the chapters :)
As for Claire's role in the twins plans, well thats not going to be revealed just yet >:p
Date: May 03 2016 5:01 AM Title: Fated meetings
Just read it and... wow! Great story, realy!
I like the way you expand your charicters, and all of them have a very interesting personalities. Can't wait to see where it's all going and what twins are planning to do with Clair.
And... Is Kat was created as a reference to Taokaka? :3
Author's Response:
Actually i based her personality off Tao XD i'm surprised someone noticed. Also wanted to make her stand out, i have plans for her in the future as well. While she doesn't look like her one bit, i based that off a different image entirely. But yea, i wanted her to have that fun type of speech.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2016 3:47 AM Title: Kat toy
Good chapter, its nice to know more about Kat and see her have some fun in the end, the only thing I would point out is that I dont really think the title fits the chapter since Kat doesnt really uses her as a toy but thats just me nitpicking, everything else was pretty good.
Also I wonder about what Kat said that only the people she wanted could see her and how Claire saw her anyway. Hope to see more soon.
Author's Response:
I was some would catch onto that, i guess with time you might find out :)
[Report This]Date: April 15 2016 7:08 AM Title: Fated meetings
Awesome story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you SheerForce, that really means a lot to me :)
[Report This]Date: April 14 2016 4:41 PM Title: Kat toy
Wow!! What a chapter! Powerful insight into who Kat is, and the altruism of Claire.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it, i was worried the chapter might be to long.
[Report This]Date: April 13 2016 6:57 PM Title: Prove your worth
Enjoying this quite a bit, eager to see more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad it's to your liking i'll try to keep pleasing with it
[Report This]Date: April 12 2016 2:10 AM Title: Prove your worth
It's really nice that we have time for all of the girls. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review KentaRyu, i appreciate it. I'll try to give each girl their own chapter before this story ends and a few chapter's inbetween as well. I'm glad your looking foward to whats coming next!
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 4:58 PM Title: Prove your worth
The plot thickens...
Author's Response:
Indeed it does...
Date: March 18 2016 1:51 PM Title: Fated meetings
This was an awesome story so far and very interesting and well done!!!!
I just wanted to know when the next chapter will be out because i am eager to read more! Thanks!
Author's Response:
I will try to finish it soon, i'm working on it as quick as I can. Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2016 6:51 PM Title: What we are
Dark...very well writen concept but this has reached Stephen King levels of holy shit.
Author's Response:
XD I appreciate your words, i hope it's still to your liking with upcoming chapters :)
[Report This]Date: March 07 2016 8:25 AM Title: Fated meetings
Very nice story you've got here! I like Lily stuck up personality lol! Please continue writing.
Author's Response:
I will continue soon, just have to write a few more chapters first. I wrote all of them at once and broke them apart into seperate ones.
[Report This]Date: February 25 2016 3:58 AM Title: Let The Games Begin
Great chapter, I hope we get to see more of Kai since she's my favorite now, anything with sweat, smell, nose or something tomboy-ish would be fine with me. Unaware is also pretty good.
Of course I'm also looking forward to what you have prepared for the other girls. Looking forward for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
All of the girls will get their own chapter in time, telling more about them and feature them each, don't worry :)
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 6:59 PM Title: Let The Games Begin
Village of the Damned lol, that said great character crafting.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review, i'll try to update soon :)
Date: February 24 2016 5:13 PM Title: Fated meetings
great story! Since you asked for input can i request a chapter of unaware interactions with May? the girls could prank her in various ways and she would be none the wiser with some vore and barefoot crush
Author's Response:
Oh don't you worry my friend, there will be unaware giantess play afoot, and yes i used that word purposefully.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 3:03 AM Title: Fated meetings
It's starting to look really good, hope to see more soon.
Could you tell is which anime characters you had in mind for each girl?
Author's Response:
It wasn't so much one's i had in mind but ones i found to fit the role's i had in mind. I think these are the characters i based them off of but if there not the right one's I sorry. I don't watch a lot of anime, mostly main stream long ones.
The twin's i based Sophia & Alexis as are called, Matsmiya Yuumi & Matsumiya Yuuka.
Claire, Kat, and Kai were all based off different artist drawn pictures so i can't exactly say an anime because there not from one.
May was based off someone from something called, tachibana artemisia
And Lily (Lilith) was based off someone called ichinose sakura, also an artist drawn picture from what i can tell but she has a name none the less.
I found all the images i wanted to base these character's off of from GelBooru.com, in case you care to look for them yourself. the discriptions i gave of them should be enough to find them.
I hope that helps.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2016 11:16 PM Title: Fated meetings
A very intressting first chapter and I felt really easy with reading into it. I am looking forward for a continouation. Perhaps it would be nice to add a description for CLaire, how she looks like (her bodily assets)
Keep writing, its great :)
[Report This]Date: February 22 2016 3:42 PM Title: Fated meetings
Very Twilight Zonish...
Author's Response:
Thank you, I wanted to make it stand out from other stories here.
[Report This]Date: February 22 2016 10:05 AM Title: Fated meetings
Interesting story. Need to read more but I'm definitely intrigued.
Author's Response:
I think you will like.