[Report This]Date: February 09 2016 10:18 AM Title: Family
@cpgrad08: It's probably that reverse-h syndrome that seems to be unique to Cockney English. For example: "An air conditioner is what you spray on your air to keep it from blowin' about in the breeze caused by the hair conditioner!" ;-)
Author's Response:
I also have a weird tendency to add the letter "e" to the end of words and I'm not sure why. But I usually always catch myself doing that. I think it's because in Russian one of the cases adds an "e" (pronounced 'ye') to the end of some words.
[Report This]Date: February 09 2016 10:10 AM Title: Canceled
So far/so good.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
[Report This]Date: February 09 2016 7:05 AM Title: Canceled
I hope things will go better for Mike than how it ended for poor Thomas. ;<
Author's Response:
I guess we'll just have to wait and see!
[Report This]Date: February 08 2016 9:50 PM Title: Family
ANother great chapter? Will this story by fully unaware like the last one? ALso yo got a typo, you have the word hair instead of air when talking about Jen's boot.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, pretty much anything I ever write will be unaware. It's pretty much the only thing I care about. And thanks, sometimes I type these really fast and I just type things I don't mean.
Date: February 08 2016 7:52 PM Title: Family
Keep it up! I loved this chapter. Would love to see more with Jen she would be a good challenge for Mike to get the attention of. Or Leslie, what about Leslie wearing her Keds around the house along with Jen wearing her heeled boots? That would be awesome to read about.
Author's Response:
Thanks!! I guess we'll have to see what comes next, but the "action" does begin next chapter! (I already know what happens hehe)
[Report This]Date: February 06 2016 2:17 AM Title: Canceled
I like! I like! Maybe Mike hitches a ride on his sister's shoelace or something. Either way, I'm hoping this story keeps going!
Author's Response:
Thanks! One this is for sure: It'd get mighty boring if he only walked everywhere. Now whether he willingly goes along with his transport or not is a different question!!
Date: February 05 2016 11:11 PM Title: Canceled
OMG!!! Love this first chapter!! Write some more soon! excited to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I have a lot of ideas planned for this, so I hope I can write them out soon.
Date: February 05 2016 10:59 PM Title: Canceled
Is Mike going to be invincible like Thomas was?
Author's Response:
He won't be as indestructable as Thomas was, but he won't be so fragile. I'm not a big fan of death in these kinds of stories, so he'll be safe from that.