[Report This]Date: February 22 2016 8:58 PM Title: Bonding
Man! I sure hope his luck improves in chapter ten. :-|
Author's Response:
Well...it might improve...doesn't mean it'll be good!
Date: February 22 2016 9:50 AM Title: Polish
Another great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! By the way, I love your name.
Date: February 20 2016 11:10 PM Title: Polish
Just a fantastic chapter overall. Now im imagining Jen going to a toe-nail salon and our protagonist being held underater, rubbed all over feet and hands and lotioned and barely surviving an encounter with toe nail clippers with an unaware salon worker looking very closely the entire time. Please write about this if you could squeeze it into the story-arc at all! great work.
Author's Response:
I guess we'll find out together what happens. Most of this story is already planned out in my head, but there's room for other stuff. Thanks for the comment regardless!
Date: February 20 2016 10:40 PM Title: Polish
Love this chapter!! I eagerly await each chapter. I cant wait to see if Jen puts on her scuffed up heeled boots for a smelly prision or sandles. the boots would be an interenting chapter though. Hope the next update comes soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks!! I guess we'll have to see what comes after, but it might not be where you expect! Or maybe it is?
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 9:30 PM Title: Canceled
Just found this story. I love it. The micro. The unaware. The FEET. it's perfect please continue!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I like it as well. I'm all about micro, and unaware, and...well being on the ground which is where feet are located so yeah feet.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 6:37 PM Title: Polish
Still not "polished" off, huh?
Durable little guy, isn't he?
Author's Response:
I hope I "painted" a good picture with this chapter. It'd be no fun if he died or broke his legs ten seconds into the story. It's just a series of coincidental and lucky, but entierly plausible events.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 5:19 PM Title: Polish
This was hands down one of the best chapters I've ever read in my life!! Wow! The detail is amazing, it left me begging for more, you sir are truly gifted. I'm a huge unaware fan, and this chapter and story is right up my ally. Please keep this going, I feel as if I should pay for this story that's how good it is! Once again keep up the amazing work, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Why thank you!! This chapter was one I always liked the idea of, and wished there was more of, but it just wasn't that common. That's why I had to do it! Don't worry there's still probably about...at least six more chapters. That's a minimum too I'm still not 100% sure of everything exactly.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2016 10:24 AM Title: Chores
This chapter was amazing! I'm loving the detail you put into each one. 1st we get mikes POV then we get one of the sisters POV then the overall POV (kinda like a narrator) keep up the great work, this is one of the if not the best unaware story on this site right now! I'm a big fan, keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate the comments and support! I always enjoy doing comparison POVs like that because it gives a nice sense of the magnitude of their actions. Like for the sister's it's just a simple mundane action, but it's hell for Mike, and that's what I enjoy so much! Thanks again!
Date: February 17 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chores
Nice chapter! I liked the laundry part and I liked Leslie doing it. Great chapter overall. Are you going to Jen do something like unkowingly do something??? Like Jen doing some sort of chore or something?? But good story overall.
Author's Response:
Oh don't worry, Jen will be doing something in the very, very near future.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chores
Oh, brother! If this doesn't kill him, nothing will. On the bright side, however, at least he was pre-shrunk when he went in the wash!
Author's Response:
That was the best joke I've heard all week, and I am ashamed I didn't think of it. I have disappointed myself, and now I feel the need to add puns in every chapter no matter how forced.
Date: February 15 2016 8:42 PM Title: Bristle
I do have to say I love this story especially this chapter because it reminds me of Honey, I shrunk the kids, but better since I have always wanted a detailed story with girls like Linda Molly, Jen and Leslie. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Well I mean that is a fantastic movie (and seriously I don't care whoever made that movie (ESPECIALLY the sequel) had this fetish there's no way they didn't), and the broom scene in that one is great and where I first liked it.
Date: February 15 2016 8:22 PM Title: Bristle
I absolutely love this chapter. Love the action. I hope Mike lives to continue the story. Jen and Leslie are awesome by the way. Keep up the great work! Will be looking for more updates as well!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I already have plans for the next like 5 chapters so we'll see where it goes after that.
[Report This]Date: February 15 2016 7:54 PM Title: Bristle
Crafty!
Prompt, but crafty.
Author's Response:
My only response is Arts and Crafty because pun. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: February 15 2016 5:27 PM Title: Dinner
RIP, Mike. :-(
Author's Response:
Hehehe, if only he were so lucky.
Date: February 15 2016 12:36 PM Title: Dinner
Nice Chapter. If Mike ever gets out of the trash can it would be so cool to have more Jen haha. Or is he going to be trapt in the lint ball all the time now? Good overall. This is the story i wait for to have an update every day. Or something that you write.
Author's Response:
Thank you that means a lot to me! I didn't expect this chapter to be as short as it is, but I'm all about those cliffhangers so I stop the chapter where I think it's best. Of course, if you know anything about cliffhangers, or moreso, the resolution of cliffhangers, you might see where the story is going next. No hint or anything...
Date: February 13 2016 9:26 PM Title: Mother
Love this chapter! I hope Jen gets some action soon! That would be cool to see how she unkowingly tortures Mike.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, we'll be seeing a lot more of Jen soon!
[Report This]Date: February 13 2016 3:31 PM Title: Mother
Poor kid! I hope he grows back to, at least, an inch tall. That way, if they mistake him for a bug, they'll at least (however unwittingly) put him out of his misery.
Author's Response:
Let's all take a moment of silence for Mike during these hard times. ... Too bad for him though things are only going to get worse.
Date: February 11 2016 8:31 PM Title: Lint
This is an incredibly creative idea (or at least I've never read it). Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! It's stuff that's been in my head for years so it doesn't seem that creative to me but I'll take your word for it.
Date: February 11 2016 2:20 PM Title: Lint
Loved this chapter. I was so hopeing for Mike to just be entangled in the shoelace and him just to be stuck there for a while. Then I was hopeing he would be put in the laundry basket and be possibly thrown in the washing machine. That could have been a great story line then Jen comes in and throws him in the washing machine, but good story so far. keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Well, not giving away any future plans, but this story is far from over. My last one took 12 chapters and it took place over the course of like...half a day. If the title of this one is any indication, it's over the weekend...that's roughly three days. A lot more is going to go on during this story.
Date: February 11 2016 12:03 AM Title: Canceled
Well, indeed, I must say, a job well done. Honestly, there are few people I actually constantly follow, but you've earned it. I started reading your last story, and despite the fact that it didn't go into barefoot scenes, I found I couldn't not read it. I honestly find it impressive that you kept me hooked, without even providing my preferred material. When I saw this one, I immediately knew it'd be a good read, and quite frankly, I'm glad you're touching on the barefoot stuff now. I also enjoy that you write in unaware, as that is by far my favorite genre.
Anyways, I may not post anymore reviews, but know that I'll still be reading and enjoying.
P.S. I highly doubt it, as its probably just a coincidence, but you aren't the same Oblivious that posts Giantess content to Daily motion, are you?
Author's Response:
Thank you that means a lot, really. Yeah last story being work centric meant it was all shoes, which is why I wanted to do a home centric story now. Honestly, these stories are mostly for me but I know other people like the same thing and really unaware stories seem to be harder to come across now (especially with things I like) so anything to get it out there and maybe even influence others to write more unaware.
And actually yes, that is me on daily motion. Though I often forget about that channel and its been awhile since I did anything with it.