[Report This]Date: May 21 2016 9:15 PM Title: Killer
Aw, man! I was SO hoping Kira's mom would find him...and recognize him as human.
:-(
Author's Response:
I had a lot of different ideas for what was gonna happen next but I went with this for story reasons. One thing that'll never happen is him being found as a human. I get people like that and I understand why, but it's not my thing.
[Report This]Date: May 21 2016 8:45 PM Title: Canceled
This is incredible. You make being small and unnoticied so real to me. I just love how well you use characters and details to the fullest, keeping Mike in perpetual hell, and the reader in perpetual bliss.
I've loved every single chapter here, and just cannot wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
THESE REVIEWS ARE SO LATE LOL I DON'T KNOW IF ANYONE WILL READ IT BUT HERE WE GO!!
I like being small and unnoticied. Literally the only thing I care about. So I hope I can make that seem real! Thanks!! My faovrite thing is a girl going about her life and making my the shrunken guy's life a living hell!
DON'T WORRY THE NEXT PART IS.....soon?
[Report This]Date: April 04 2016 9:23 AM Title: Juxtaposition
The way Mike's luck is running, chapter 14 could be the end of the end!
Author's Response:
Mike is the luckiest person in the world.
And also the unluckiest.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2016 2:17 PM Title: Juxtaposition
1st things 1st... WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN!?!? Lol, we all missed you man, hope everything's going good! Okay now onto the chapter.
This was awesome! I love the interaction with the youngest sister. It sucks that today's the last day but hopefully we get some fun things going on! The hair dryer scene was awesome! Keep up the great work man, amazing as always!
Author's Response:
I honestly have no real excuse for being gone. There was school, yes, but idk I kind of feel out of it for some time? I'd say I'm back but you know I won't even say that unless I'm 100% sure, which I'm not. Thank you for your support though!
Date: April 03 2016 12:59 PM Title: Juxtaposition
Loved the chapter and I loved Mike being stuck to Leslie's keds. I can't wait to see what happens next although he is already beat up. I hope he gets to smell some of what is coming out of the shoes for smells before he dies.
Thank you so much for keeping up with these stories cause you by far is my favorite author and I hope you have some rough idea for a 3rd story in the future. Honestly, everytime I check the recent activity I literally hope that I see an update from one of your stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Sorry about the wait, I have no excuse lol.
Date: March 06 2016 11:30 PM Title: Canceled
Well, everybody has their unalterable stances; you and I included. I guess the only thing we can agree on is that we both permanently disagree on whether or not the descriptors on the title page should've included "water sports."
Of course, if you'd answered that question "yes," in the first place, I could have just skipped chapter 12! Thereby negating any need for this mild philosophical difference of opinion. ;-)
Author's Response:
It will be noted for the future!
[Report This]Date: March 06 2016 6:06 AM Title: Canceled
In my opinion this last chapter was one of the best I've read. Thank you for your superb work!
Author's Response:
Thank you, I aprreciate it!
[Report This]Date: March 05 2016 8:52 PM Title: Hygiene
Awesome chapter bro! I like how you go outside your comfort zone and still give us greatness! I wonder how our hero will escape this fate. Plus I love the one lined chapter titles. Keep up the great work, the wait was worth it!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: March 05 2016 5:44 PM Title: Hygiene
Well, I rarely find anything about the stories, here, that would displease me enough to give a score lower than a perfect ten. Usually, eight points at worst. But, this particular bathroom scene felt a little _overly_ descriptive to me. A needless case of WTMI, as they say.
So, while I apologize if I was _overly_ blunt, the basic underlying feeling is still there and is not likely to change. That being said, however, I promise I will follow this story to the concluding chapter.
Author's Response:
I can see the issue with being too descriptive. I felt I was no more or less descriptive than any other chapter, but given the subject matter that can make an impact. I do apologize if I went a tab overboard with it, but I would never want to be less descriptive of any given scene just to tone it down. I love writing realistic fiction in general, even moreso for stories involving macrophilia, as it gives a sense for having this happen for real. Events and such aren't "less gross" just because one doesn't like. It is what it is and there's not a damn thing you can do about it. I actually want to try and be even more descriptive and really slow down and experience every moment that happens, but there is a limit because overtime it begins to get very redundant. That's probably why this was moreso detailed because it was a new topic and I really got to flesh it out.
This is pretty much the most of this particular subject you'll ever see me write (honestly this was pretty light compared to other stuff I've read which just goes nuts) as I'm not the biggest fan of it. But I like to include different things and many different scenarios to mix it up. So, yeah, basically descriptions are here to stay. I've kind of lost sight of where I was going with this, but whatever. I appreciate your dedication and hope that future chapters will be more up your alley! :)
Date: March 05 2016 7:14 AM Title: Hygiene
Correct me if I'm wrong. But, isn't it mandatory to include the euphemism "water sports," if you're going to have a gross bathroom scene like this?
Author's Response:
I honestly wouldn't know. If you would like I can add it to the list, but I dislike having tags like that. I feel tags should be used for what the entire story is about, not a single section of on chapter. That to me is misleading. But like I said if it is mandatory or if you really want I can add it in.
P.S.
I like you man, seriously thank you for also reviewing it means a lot to me and I enjoy hearing what you say, but calling it "gross" just feels like an attack towards my writing. It's fine if that's not your thing. It's fine if you think that. I'm the last person that'll ever tell you how to think or what to like. I'm just saying there really is no need to call it that. If you removed it from your sentence it would still mean the same thing just. But you're an adult and free to make your own decisions so by all means do whatever you feel is right. I'm just speaking my opinion. :)
Date: March 04 2016 11:01 PM Title: Hygiene
Good chapter! I like where this is going however I have a feeling that the story is ending soon. I am really enjoying the story and hope there is more too it but if this is the end so be it.
However, I hope you come out with more stories after this one finishes up.
Author's Response:
I dislike stories that go one for longer than they really should, so it will end at some point. But it's just about to be Day 3. Day 1 was chapter 1-5, Day 2 was chapter 6-12, so Day 3 is 13-?? So we'll see! Thanks for reading!!
Date: February 28 2016 9:29 PM Title: Seperate
Such a good chapter!!! Cant wait to see where he lands next! I have an idea of where he will land. Hope the next chapter comes soon! and I hope you have another great story idea after this one.
Author's Response:
Thanks again! It might be a bit of a wait before the next chapter, sad to say. I have a lot of stuff to do for school right now and I kind of need to focus on that first and foremost. But it's coming, trust me!!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2016 6:10 PM Title: Seperate
Love how you setup for the next chapter! This one was very good as we got 3-4 turns in one chapter. I can't wait to see what ideas you come up with next. I check everyday to see if you update this story. These little setups are gonna set us up for a great big one, I don't mean to spoil but any preview for the next chapter? Till next time! Cheers bro!
Author's Response:
Oh yes, something is definetly going to happen! Hmm, next chapter? I'll just say that it's nighttime, people are ready to go to sleep, but they need to do their nightly routine first. Whatever that means, I guess we'll find out next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2016 5:26 PM Title: Seperate
Poor Mike! Out of the bathing tub/into the flyer.*
*Come to think of it; that would make a nice title for chapter 12! ;-)
Author's Response:
If I didn't have a preference to using one word chapter titles, my next titles in line would be Long/Weird/Referency titles like that. I'm an extremely unserious person but I like my writing to have a serious tone to it so I don't know.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 8:59 AM Title: Flat
Awesome chapter! I wonder if mike will find his way home... (; and I like how you introduce these side characters only for a brief period of time, I must say Jen is my favorite among the sisters right now! Keep up the great work! Till next time, cheers!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I like to keep my stories confined to one area (unless the main plot is that it's across multiple areas). so just saying now he definetly will get back home....Whether that is with Molly or not, and how for that matter, that remains to be seen!
Date: February 27 2016 6:21 AM Title: Flat
Loved this chapter! I was not expecting Molly to get some action. I hope Molly's coworker starts sweeping the floor after he gets free from Jens nail polish that would be epic. Cant wait for the next chapter and hopefully it comes soon!
Author's Response:
Fun Fact! This chapter was originally going to be longer. Don't worry, I didn't remove any content, stuff was just supposed to happen after where this one finished (hence the [kinda] aprupt ending). The main reason I just put this up "unfinished" was because I was writing it at like 1am, and when I got here, I thought of like five different things that could happen next, so I just put it up since I didn't have anything in some time, and would figure out what occures later. Funny though, because your idea is one of the things I was thinking of. I guess we'll find out soon enough what happens.
[Report This]Date: February 27 2016 12:32 AM Title: Flat
One thing that might happen? He could meet the "missing" Thomas.
Author's Response:
Thomas is, well, gone at this point. But this story is happening just a few days after my previous one. I'll just say I have a plan of where I'm going with this.
Date: February 24 2016 8:07 PM Title: Bonding
Im glad that you are planning on writing more to this story. I was thinking bout how you said that you had about 6 chapters left when it was like chapter 5 and now Im happy because now I know there is a lot more left to this story than just 11 chapters. And I love how you have something planned to write about after this story, I look forward to reading your stories daily. I look multiple times during the days to see if you have uploaded any chapters.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had less ideas back then, but like most of my ideas I get them from real life inspiration and stuff happened and I was like "Yeah that would be cool!" so thus more chapters. It'd be okay if you just check at night (Eastern Time) cause that's most likely when I'll post something. Also I wish I could do something daily or at least every other day, but with life and school that's just not possible. Still don't want to go too long without an update though.
[Report This]Date: February 23 2016 5:33 PM Title: Bonding
Once again, you did it, wow. Just wow. The detail!!! Amazing, I love the experience from start to finish. I'm not one for spoilers but I do need to know a few things.
1: Will his mom be back in the fray?
2: About how many chapters left?
3: (this is not a question.) but STAY AWESOME BRO!!! Lol. I'm loving this story, this chapter gets a 10/10 for me! Till next time! Cheers!
Author's Response:
Thanks!! Let's see... 1) Yes, eventually. I know she was hardly there on Day 1, and Day 2 is still pretty much mid day, but she'll be returning soon. As for if anything happens with her...I want to say yes. I have a couple ideas of things she could do, but I want to work them in there someway. She's not my top priority as far as characters go, but I do want to include her.
2) Hmm...[calculating]...At least 8 more chapters that I can think of. I could always decided to add more stuff in, so it could be more, but at least 8, yeah.
3) Thank you thank you!! I just enjoy writing and that's enough for me. I should be thanking you (all of you) for reading it! That makes me even happier.
Date: February 22 2016 9:21 PM Title: Bonding
Interesting chapter. I was hoping for a little bit more action but it was a good chapter. Will me get more of Jen???? Will Jen accidentally crush him? And if te story ends soon I hope you will decide on another setting and new characters and write another story just as good as your 2 current stories. Seriously you are by far the best writer on here.
Author's Response:
To be honest I wasn't quite satisfied with out with chapter came out. I definatly could have added more stuff to it and have a few ideas of what I could have done, but it's already gone and past. Think of it more as a transition chapter for what's to come. Why thank you!! I actually do have a rough plan for what I'm doing once I finish this, but I'm not saying anything about it yet.