Date: April 13 2018 2:13 AM Title: Canceled
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[Report This]Date: June 30 2017 11:32 PM Title: Canceled
If this were any other author I would have called you a hack for having the "it was just a dream" ending... But the story was so good I can look past that. Being honest, I can't really think of any other way to end it. I'm glad that's over though, I don't think I could take anymore punishment. Which is a testament to your writing, you really feel the suffering, it's a slog.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Yeah, the "dream" ending isn't really my forte for how cliche it is, but I did try to at least twist it up a little bit by making it so everything during the story did happen, just not permanent..? It's a weird ending, but it's the best way I felt of closing off the story.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2017 10:36 AM Title: Miracle
The most bizarre happy ending in literary history. But, definitely better than no ending, at all.
Bravo! :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, it's a weird ending, and despite the long wait, it was always the intended ending. I'm just glad I finally got it finished!
[Report This]Date: June 29 2017 9:25 PM Title: Canceled
Loved the story!!! Also I don't mind the "happy" ending! Once in a while a nice ending is a good change up!!! Hope to read more from you in the future!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Almost every story I've ever written in my life has had a downer ending, or at the least a bitter-sweet. This is the a happy ending as far as I'm concerned. I needed one of those though.
[Report This]Date: December 14 2016 9:25 AM Title: Canceled
the suspense is killing us, any ideas on a release date for the finale? perfect story
[Report This]Date: October 28 2016 1:45 PM Title: Garbage
He's still alive?!
Author's Response:
Yes. He's a strong kid, okay?
[Report This]Date: October 26 2016 12:57 PM Title: Garbage
This is my favorite story on this whole site. Next chapter seems like the end :/ I've had an awesome time reading this. Hopefully this story goes out with a bang! You get a 10/10 for me bro! Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you.
The last chapter is gonna be a big one, so I hope I end it in a good way. I can tell you right now it won't end the same way as Not as Planned. I have something very different in store.
[Report This]Date: October 25 2016 7:07 AM Title: Canceled
It looks like the next chapter will be the final one. :-(
Author's Response:
I can say with certainty that yes, Chapter 18 will be the end. But I hope it'll be good.
[Report This]Date: October 24 2016 5:30 AM Title: Vacuum
LOL! Sort of.
Author's Response:
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This is an "f" in Russian. I'm using your comment as a non-sequitur post.
Date: October 23 2016 11:46 PM Title: Garbage
Awesome ending to the story! Hope you have an idea for your next story! 20 our of 10 on this story! Hope to see you writing soon in the future.
Author's Response:
It's not over yet!! Thank you for the score, but save the final verdict for the end, I can tell you it's going to be interesting.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2016 7:58 PM Title: Vacuum
AMAZING chapter and welcome back! Can't wait for more bro! 10/10 so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! It feels good to be back!
[Report This]Date: October 16 2016 6:45 PM Title: Vacuum
Since when do vacuum cleaners _not_ have impellers that should normally slice him to ribbons?
Author's Response:
This story takes place in an alternate universe where everything is the same except vacuum cleaners are built with that. Did I forget to mention that?
Date: October 15 2016 10:49 PM Title: Vacuum
Awesome chapter! loved this chapter! Unaware Jen! I know this story is almost finished but are you planning another story soon? If so I cant wait to read it.
Author's Response:
Thank you thank you.
I do have an idea for another story but we'll see how and where it goes. Gotta finish this one first.
Date: October 15 2016 8:36 PM Title: Canceled
The stuck in teeth part was marvellous. I hope he ends up stuck in otherunusual and humiliating parts of his sisters' bodies.
Author's Response:
Thanks! He's gonna get stuck somewhere soon, but it's not what your expecting!!
Date: October 12 2016 10:16 PM Title: Hungry
Awesome Chapter! It was well worth the wait. I hope Jen makes another return with cleaning in the next chapter. Cant wait for the next!
Author's Response:
Thank you. Oh yes, Jen will be around next chapter. And it won't take 30 years for the next one either I am back to writing now.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2016 8:45 PM Title: Hungry
"It couldn't get any worse than this."
Why do these shrunken guys _always_ think/say that? Because that only guarantess it _will_ get worse!!!
Author's Response:
Gotta love those clichés.
But let's be serious, how much worse could it possibly get ahahah...ahah...ah
[Report This]Date: September 07 2016 11:27 PM Title: Canceled
great story, best ive read, wheres the next exciting episode?
Author's Response:
It's back now!! Hehe!! :):)
Also thank you for the feedback!
[Report This]Date: July 24 2016 8:24 AM Title: Canceled
hope youll write again I liked your two stories a lot. would love to see some vore ending maybe or anal vore plots too.
Author's Response:
Thanks thanks!!
VORE, huh? WELL well well you might like next chapter...whenever it shows up?
[Report This]Date: June 28 2016 12:24 AM Title: Canceled
great story, how long roughly till the next chapter? cant wait to see the conclusion
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Next chapter.........................................................................................Too long. Maybe soon? BEFORE AUGUST ENDS I PROMISE YOU.
[Report This]Date: May 22 2016 1:30 PM Title: Killer
10/10. Can't wait for the next chapter bro!
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
IT'S COMING SOON MAYBE POSSIBLY