Reviewer: Shrunken Fanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08 2016 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 1: Mysterious circumstances

Looking good so far, I absolutely love micro stuff as well as breast lactation! Insertion is great too, so I'm looking forward to your future add-ons. Hopefully that isn't the last of the breast stuff in this story though. I feel like you could do something special with the people considering how microscopic they are. Like an accidental shinking instead of growing with the shrink ray that dooms someone to never be found again or become absorbed into a pore in the skin. The possibilities with nano-sized people are endless! Anyways, I'll stop rambling, keep up the good work!

 

 

 

Author's Response:

There might be one more breast related scene but this is a short story so don't hold your breath. The shrink way was only for that one scene, I don't plan on using it again.