Reviews For A new perspective
Reviewer: HeavyPencil Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17 2018 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: February 17 2018 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it, please continue
Reviewer: lancealot501 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: June 10 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
I think that this was a really good story, but the second chapter needs a lot of editing. The first chapter felt professionally written with a good pacing. The second chapter seemed rushed and kept changing perspectives while leaving out a few details. If you go back to writing like you did the first chapter then this story will quickly rise to the top given the great foundation that it is written on.
Reviewer: doberri Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: February 01 2016 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
we want more!!
Reviewer: Lil Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: January 02 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Love :) Continue your story :D
Reviewer: MasterOfMicro Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2015 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: December 30 2015 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not sure how this is G rated