Date: June 12 2024 12:38 AM Title: Prologue
This is a late review, but I thought I should tell you how amazing this story is. Easily the best I've seen on this site. You really should either continue it or create a new one with similar themes.
[Report This]Date: March 31 2021 11:59 PM Title: Too Much of a Good Thing
I suppose I should leave a review explaining how good this story is. Firstly you write unaware incredibly, easily the best I've ever read. Secondly, you write feet and shoe voyeurism incredibly well. Thirdly it isn't easy to do, but you've made some very memorable characters, and the way you write Jakes's guilt for his feelings is particularly compelling. I love this entire scenario, and I love it how you do smut; you have much control over when and when not to do it, which isn't easy to do when you're writing fetish. I have been a fan of your work since Writing.com.
Date: November 25 2020 1:40 PM Title: Too Much of a Good Thing
I only recently found this story, but damn is it good.
Your description of his family members feet, and his experiences at them, the feeling, the smell, the size. All represented so well here.
I have seen you posted a story recently on here too, so I am hoping you decide to return to this one, it's such a great read.
Definitely deserves some more chapters.
[Report This]Date: May 26 2018 12:22 AM Title: Too Much of a Good Thing
So much potential in this story to be a classic. Deserves to be continued. Hopefully you get a chance!
Date: November 06 2017 7:11 AM Title: Prologue
please continue this great story and i really want to see mom's reaction when she finds out her son was under her foot.
Date: February 19 2016 7:50 AM Title: Prologue
Please continue this story
Date: January 31 2016 12:14 PM Title: Prologue
Omg this story is so god damn good, I'm in love with it! Please continue this masterpiece of a story!!!!
Date: January 26 2016 8:13 AM Title: Prologue
keep posting, come on
Date: January 19 2016 10:33 AM Title: Too Much of a Good Thing
i love this story
Date: January 11 2016 5:22 PM Title: Too Much of a Good Thing
I loved this chapter!!! Cant wait for the next!!! Ill be watching and waiting for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: January 11 2016 2:07 PM Title: Too Much of a Good Thing
A great chapter! I loved all of the detail about Jake being trapped in his mom's shoe. I'm excited to see what Aunt Donna is going to bring to the story.
Date: January 11 2016 7:50 AM Title: Prologue
I rarely leave comments and rarely get excited for new chapters of a story to come out but I've found myself logging in everyday hoping for a new chapter of this story. It's amazing! You are truely a great story writer and this is your first story on here?! Unbelievable! Keep up the amazing work! Can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: January 10 2016 8:09 PM Title: Prologue
Every chapter just keeps getting better. Looking forward to the next one
[Report This]Date: January 10 2016 9:43 AM Title: Giving In
This is good.. THIS IS DAMN GOOD!!!! PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING!
Date: January 07 2016 3:04 AM Title: Prologue
From someone that can't finish a story for the life of him, I CAN'T let you keep this story on the backburner without completion. I love every bit of this.
[Report This]Date: January 05 2016 10:19 AM Title: Giving In
Sorry forgot to rate the story.
Date: January 05 2016 9:10 AM Title: Giving In
Great story so far. There are very errors few, that I have seen. Im wondering if Jake will regret being in his mothers shoe? I sence some trouble coming his way soon. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Date: January 01 2016 1:54 PM Title: Giving In
Oh, man. I thought he was gonna get away with it, but he had to fall asleep. He's in for a rough morning.