Reviewer: fierysport Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2019 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

Amazing and engaging story.  I had to read the final few chapters over and over again.  It's one fo the most erotically descriptive prose I've ever come across, especially when Jumko is inside Nadia's mouth and gut.  I wonder if Nadia is based on a real life character known to the author?  

I wasn't sure about the whole castration thing.  Could have been more sensual had he been allowed to keep his genitalia, albeit as a vastly reduced size.  I also couldn't accept Nadia's words (out of context) given she was a virgin and about to experience sex for the first time.

Overall I loved it and especially the whole concept of having to swallow a live being to almost trigger the fertility process.  Well done and deserving of a follow up or similar prose.   

Reviewer: versusterminus7 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2016 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

The good

-cool and intriguing plot

-handjobs

-manages to build a somewhat decent society. tells a lot with few words.

-hand jobs for everybody

-each character's voice is distinct, a rare talent

 

the bad

-cool and intriguing plot for like 4 chapters

-tone is stuck in a time warp- cant make up it's mind

-so much cuckold its painful

-like form ch 5 on

-so much fucking cuck

-chicken goes cuck cuck cuck

-says right here that jumk is a lil bitch

-it's not the wedding wine you honking cock-snogging spunkchariot, its you, jumko the fuckboy

-hand jobs from mom

-freudian paradise

-did i mention that there's a shitton of cuck

 

the uncomfortably real

-i became physically uncomfortable at the testicle slaps

 

not the worst story ive read. its good for entertainment if nothing else. 2/5

Reviewer: combine45 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 12: A New Day

Ultimatly it was anticlimactic for me. I felt like you set up some grand story where there was going to be a rebellion against a corrupt government and it boiled down to a cruel breakup. I will say the story was very engaging and you delt with the emotions very well, but the story ended up being more about conventional sex than any real interaction between sizes.

To imagine a world like that I guess you can't really blame Nadia for the way she acted, but to fall in love with Ziv so quick... I feel like its breif infatuation and she would grow to detest him after years of marriage. The sex will lose its luster and she will realize ultimatily what a waste it all was. 

I still look forward to your future stories.

Reviewer: ASenpai Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

I must say it was a well thought out and engaging story with a wide variety of characters each with their own quirks. I must admit I have mixed feelings about the ending. It was great of course, do not get me wrong. I just feel...bad for Jumko if that makes sense. Not the vore part, just the circumstance. Nadia was a little insensitive but other than that I understand her position. 

 

All in all, Jumko's overconfidence was his weakness...and his faith in his friends as well! XD

 

Keep on writing friend that hit the emotions deep and that's the best kind of story.

Reviewer: dudeduderson2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

Not a bad story, definitely more plot development than anything I write.  I can't help but think that this society is going be screwed when their version of Columbus crosses the Atlantic though.

Reviewer: eldorado Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

Well, this story's deffinitely up there as one of my all time favorites so far with the character development you see. My only lament is that Jumko never got to call Yuli out on how much of a hypocrite she was being, though that was probably smart since that didn't go too well with Nadia. I really hope he gets thrown a bone since everything came crashing down on him at once after a freak occurence. And when he understandably protests what is (fetish aside) a pretty ghastly death, then he was pretty much tortured until he wanted to kill himself. But again great story, I found it impossible to stop reading.

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

Interesting story. Always exciting and scary theme with shrinking involved is, when loved ones turn against you and when it's done in a believable way. That is what I find most interesting in these type of scenarios. Who will remain your friend and who will betray you.
Good build up.

 

 

Reviewer: bobobo Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2016 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Argument

Shout out to TinyLeo for letting me know that I accidentally revealed a spoiler. Changes have been made to correct this.

Reviewer: ZeR0x Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2016 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

Awesome updates. Just awesome!

Reviewer: combine45 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2016 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Forbidden Act

I'm really digging this so far. The sense of abandonment and lack of compassion from Jumko's family really sets up his despair. Seems like he eather has to accept his fate and go with the girl he loved or take his chances with the suspicious but beautifull Xanthe. Personally id take my chances with her but she could be planning some even worse things than a quick death with Nadia. I'd like to see things swing back in a positive direction for Jumko. First step avoid castration somehow hopefully. Don't worry about the impatient readers. I think youve realy set things up well prior to his shrinking.