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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

A few misspellings on such words as "third" and "preparations." Otherwise, pretty good for an opening chapter!

Happy Holidays, GR. :-)

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