[Report This]Date: February 08 2026 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 1: Demesne
Hi! I just finished reading your story, and wow your writing is so rich in detail and emotion. I really enjoyed it! You have such a creative mind, and I think your story would make an amazing comic. Would you be interested in discussing that idea? I'm a paid artist with friendly rates, and I love bringing stories to life through visuals. I'd be excited to take your story to the next level! Feel free to reach out to me via Discord (my username is avablaise_98 ) or by email (avablaise9@gmail.com). Hope to hear from you soon
[Report This]Date: December 30 2015 1:55 PM Title: Interlude I: Primer
Heh! Rather bizarre chapter. I can only presume that Ivan is doing a little unauthorized reading behind the backs of his current "owners."
Thanks for updating this, dude. Happy New Year!
[Report This]Date: December 22 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 4: Copacetic
Hmmmm! Sounds like Janet and Meredith might be behind an altered state of reality.
Happy Holidays, dude! And, thanks for uploading a new chapter just in time for Xmas . :-)
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Thanks for the kind reviews!
[Report This]Date: December 21 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 3: Release
Well, at least they didn't make fun of his name by having him imitate Oliver Twist.*
*As in "Please, sir, Ivan some more." ;-)
[Report This]Date: December 20 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2: Status
These sorority girls sound sadistic. But, Ivan sounds like a masochistic macrophile. So, thus far, this arrangement sounds like the proverbial win/win situation for everybody! But, then again; sounds, like appearances, can be deceiving.
A great first pair of chapters. I read straight through them! Thanks for sharing and....Happy Holidays!! :-)