Great chapter. And even though Sir George is an arrogant knight he still cares a great deal for Daffyd(great name btw) but I don't see how he could find his young squire unless Ivy's pet brings him up there too.
Whatever the case, I can't wait till you introduce Ivy's step mom.
Anyways, I'm really enjoying this tale and hope it goes on for awhile to flesh out these characters.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and thumbs up on the name. I wanted something different from the norm. I am already drawing George closer and the step mom will be glimpsed shortly. More on what a Trouble maker alexa is as well.

I think this story is getting interesting. This relationship might look weird for Sir George. Imagine watching your squire with a giantes.

Stepsister, hmm. I think these mean ladies might get Sir George.

Even though the giantesses have been introduced, it still feels like a setup.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I think maybe I'm becoming too predictable in my storytelling...:)

Interesting. The giantess has never seen a human before. I'm wondering if perhaps that was no mere cave but a gateway to some other realm.

Loved the end of this chapter. An excellent hiding place for Daffyd and an intriguing new character intro.

Now things got really interesting. It looks like 2 giantesses are here. That is what I call a surprise. It even makes me wonder if there is an entire family or even a villiage of these giants.

Ivy seems like the nice and caring giantess. Alexa seems like the sexy and agressive one whom I'm excited on meeting.

Anyone think that Sir George is gonna be a dick and try to annoy these giantess? I also think Alexa may be given Sir George for some punishment. Hehe.

Things just got spiced up. Not my giant prediction from a past review won't be true. However, I think the story just got 5x better.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Be a dick? Lol too funny

Cool story so far. I'm always a sucker for a fantasy setting. I loved the image of the giantess petting the dragon in her lap like a small dog. Very interested to see where this is going, especially now that the knight has also found her cave.

Kind of felt a bit like a copout chapter so that the GTS content would be delayed abit more but it was interesting to get another perspective on things. I can't say I'm glad Sir George is still alive, he is kind of a douche, but you can see that he DOES care about Daffyd since he's willing to look for him with his injuries. I can't wait for the next one!

That's a great comparison, with the cat in the lap. Now I can picture this giantess to scale a bit more easily. (Still hard to grasp her immense proportions).

Wil the dragon see the boy and alert the giantess that Daffyd's master hurt him?

Will the giantess be friendly to Daffyd like she is to the dragon?

Is Daffyd going to food for the dragon? Cats play with their food. The dragon played with Dadfyd as it carried him to this place. The dragon was compared to the size of a car near this giantess. Weird theory, right?

Is this girl going to play with Daffyd like a doll and make him ride her dragon?

Maybe the girl wants to play with Daffyd and if he doesn't cooperate, she can threaten to feed him to the dragon.

Maybe this is one of those, when big things got bigger stories. Daffyd's hears about a dragon. Goes searching for a bigger dragon. Now he finds a bigger girl. Maybe now he finds a giantess dragon! Like a dragon that is big enough for this giantess to ride.

Many possibilities. I can't wait for the next chapter!

I want a dragon as a pet. That would be cool! Hopefully there will be interaction with the giant girl and Daffyd next chapter?

Another great chapter! I wonder what's going to happen to him. I would suggest you add paragraphs to separate the block of text. It will make it easier to read.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feedback. There seems to be some formating issue when I copy the story across to this site as I do write with paragraphs to aid readability, I'll take a look and see if there's something I can do on my end. Thanks again.

Wow! First of all, another story?!!! You are on fire, man. Just like this dragon. I just read all 4 chapters, and it is amazing. No need for giantess content right away becuase the story alone is great right now.

Unlike most of your stories, this one features the main characters with a past of suffering and I really care about them.

Usually it's a guy who has taken advantage of people and a giantess gets revenge, but no, this story seems very different. And I love it.

It feels like one is those stories that you can sit by a cozy fire and read aloud to some kids. "There was once a brave knight, and his squire. They went on an adventure to find a dragon." This story has a good holiday feel to it.

Also, does anything else keep thinking that Sir George sounds like a pirate? Like, these lines have like a pirate feel to them and it's funny, becuase every pirate wants all the glory and doesn't fear much. I think Sir George should add some honor of chivalry so I can stop thinking about pirates. Becuase, seriously. When he talks, I keep thinking about a pirate, haha.

My prediction is that the boy now has to go find the dragon on his own, and instead, he finds a giantess. He is scared and points the sword at her, but she thinks he is cute and they have a relationship. The squire then has to return to the village to report any progress but he keeps the giantess part a secret. He returns there everyday, but eventually that one girl from the village gets suspicious and decides to secretly follow him. When she sees the giantess, she screams and runs back to the village. The squire now frightened that the girl will tell the village of the giantess runs back and makes a deal with the girl. The girl reluctantly agrees, but the squire is happy. He continues visiting the giantess, but one day an army of knights show up to kill the giantess. The boy now thinks the girl broke the deal, so he confronts her. She gives him her reason that she likes him and felt jealous that he was with a giantess. Meanwhile, the giantess kills all the Knights, and comes to the village to destroy it. The boy tells the giantess to stop, but she won't listen and that the giantess thinks that the boy tried to kill her. So then she tries to kill the boy, but before she does so, the village girl springs a trap which involves setting the giantess on fire. The giantess runs for her life trying to find water. She does, but not in time as her body is too weak to recover. She dies by the riverbank. The rest of the village cheers for the young girl for her clever trap and the squire thanks her for saving him. She says that she will do anything for him, and she kisses him.

The end. (That's my prediction.)

I will definately follow this story. It has promise.
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi Tom, nice to have you along for another adventure. Interesting predictions, we'll see how close you are, ;)