Yeah, I got the same feeling as Hector. I would just let myself get captured too. Better than starving and risking getting stepped on.

Hector said that he was the last one left. What about Jack? Isn't he still hiding?

Wow, all these guys are dying like flies. Now Hodge doesn't have to share Madeline with John. Haha.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hector meant in his group of three he is now alone. Only he and one eye are still, and you'll forgive the Carycomic like pun, at large. Play time is coming very soon

Duggernaut! Please respond to this question.

What movie was Julie talking about this hot box thing? I have to see it!

Also, I'm kinda shocked at how easily Marcellus died. He was the toughest guy there. How can these ladies even handle a tiny guy even smaller than Marcellus then?

I love Julie! She is excited about Madeline's idea which of course is my favorite. Man, these girls are awesome! (But careless.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

I like how Hector thinks. If he is going to die, dying to that beauty is worth it.

Now these guys have a plan. Seems kinda slow, since this escape is taking multiple chapters. The presence of the women definately keep this entertaining and thrilling!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Fabulous story. Greatly enjoyed the setup. You described each character so well that I could picture them in my mind. The part where first you had the prisoners talking about where they were was great. Then the ladies talking about the men, chilling. Then the ingenious breakout.Dagmara strumming her nails before getting up was also chilling. This is written soooooo well. I can hardly wait for more. I hope she has black pumps on her feet.
Love it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I like to set the characters up to establish some context and I am delighted I've managed to convey enough personality into each of the players, male and female, that it makes a decent read. thanks again!

The lack of security and observation is strange but maybe Dagmara and her council trust that the prisoners won't escape but she already has a strategy to capture the escaped felons it seems. Can't wait for more though

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. You raise some interesting points. The lack of security and observations are founded on the examiner's faith and reliance on technology. The Omega Protocol is a termination of project directive as opposed to a recapture strategy. You're keeping me honest though!  :)

A giantess has arrived! And there was death!

I bet the giantess thought Russel was ugly and she didn't want to any of he giantesses to play with them.

Hector is now the gunea pig now I guess.

Looking forward to these men meeting the giantess.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

The big reveal is next chapter!

Imagine the doll house is like in an office at a giantess's house.

Or maybe they are in a women's prison.

Perhaps, the women are impressed by the thinking of these men when they see someone come out.

These guys better run as fast as they can before the people in charge discover that the collars are gone.

Maybe the giantesses will think all the men killed themselves. Hmm. Not likely.

There is just too much to imagine here. For all I know, they could be at some giantess strip club in a private room.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

"Jack, how do you feel?"

"Well, I am aware that I have been shrunk and surrounded by plastic material to keep me in. Just curious, what kind of experiment is this?"

After a moment of silence, the voice returned. " Jack, you are free to return to your quarters. That will be all for today."

Jack returned back to his room smiling. He knew he outsmarted them. 'Bet they didn't expect that' he chuckled to himself.

The women gathered around after Jack's interview.

"This is impossible!" One of them said. "How could they know? Who told them?!!"

"Relax, if they all knew that they were shrunk, they would be panicking, but they're not. No, Jack is on to something and he doesn't want to let his companions know. We will have to watch him more closely."

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Ok, back to review.

For some reason, I kinda want to see a guy be a little witty around these women. It could add some mystery to the plot too.

A good chapter nonetheless especially that we can see how these ladies are monitoring the status of each guy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Either you posted 2 chapters at once, or I missed chapter 8. Because I read chapter 9, and these women talk about tiny me . So I noticed they shrunk in chapter 8.

Well now they are tiny but no one realizes it yet. I really want these giantess women to be revealed to them. (All at once would be even better.)

These men would lose their minds at this. Thus, let the experiments begin!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Chapter 8 is all about something is wrong, chapter 9 introduces us to some of the ladies. It's about to get real very soon.

I doubt they gonna escape. Well, if they are going to, they better hurry before they shrink. Then they will have no hope, but that's when the real fun begins.

I can't wait!

These guys are all alpha males? Man, it's like 9 Jack Daltons. This is gonna be interesting.

I can't wait for the next chapter!