Date: July 07 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 10
MORE... Most read more! Solid story dude, I'm loving it
[Report This]Date: June 24 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
Nice development happening in the bar with Allison meeting Courtney, though I don't expect she'll be unfaithful with Isabelle. I assume it's Lilith pulling the strings, and that should be very interestiing to see play out later. I look forward to seeing exactly what happens next.
[Report This]Date: December 18 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
You know how sometimes you just don't have words to describe what you're feeling? Yup. Uh... this is a positive review.
Author's Response:
Hahaha well, thanks? I guess? XD Glad you're enjoying it, at least.
Date: December 15 2015 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, keep going. This story has a great perspective on Sub and Dom.
Author's Response:
Thank you! That's a big part of what we're going for.
Date: December 05 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say that this is really good.
The interaction is more natural then in most stories.
Author's Response:
Well, yeah, it should.
As I keep telling people, plot is my thing. I try to write erotic, but that's more Choreo's thing. And damn is he good at it.