[Report This]Date: May 02 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 43
Go Lucie! Keep him safe! Even from Adelina, the witch!
Lucie seems to be the only giantess witha heart. (Or is she just like the others?)
Now Lucie just needs to go somewhere private and have some one on one time with Michael.
I bet they are going to have fun with each other!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: April 28 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 42
Funny how Adelina lets Madison thinks she has a free hand in this. Still the question remains why Adelina is so interested in Madison and wants to play this game with her, Lucie and Michael. Wonder how Mirielle will react after these incidents.
It would be funny if Michael falls prey to misadventure. They left him alone downstairs. Maybe there is somebody else in the house who that bag belongs to or/and Adelina is playing games again.
Lucie seems like the strongest person. She seems like a person who doesn't get easely corrupted by power.
Wonder what Helena's connection is in all this.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 42
I'm hopping Michael gets away with Lucie. After all, while he's inside that purse, he can't see what Adelina does, making it pointless.
[Report This]Date: April 28 2016 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 42
So now they are going to bring Michael's mother into this? (Let's be honest. If u mention someone, they will be a giantess.)
It would be awkward if Michael's mom got her hands on Michael.
Why does Madison have to be so clever? She seems just like Janine. Also, Lucie is very cautious about everything and reminds me of Tess.
We know that Mirielle is an agressive giantess who loves to use passion and have her way with Michael. I think Lucie is the opposite and she will be caring and loving to Michael when she finds him.
Please Lucie, leave the house before Madison finds Michael. We can't let the sister get him! All in for Lucie!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: April 25 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 41
Plot twist: The handbag is actually a person that Adelina has once transformed.
[Report This]Date: April 25 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 41
Interesting. What did they discussed upstairs. Can't shake the feeling that Madison is just an easy target for Adelina.
Adelina is so overly interested in them. She wants something from this family.
The question is still, why does Adelina feel so at home there.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2016 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 40
Pre planned or not pre planned and at what level. I wonder with wich one you would go. I hoped the none pre-planned what happened to Michael, but that also planned. Her relationship with Madison I suspected was a pre planned from the moment you could feel Mirielle's plan was full of dangers. Hope that granddaughter isn't a certain someone. Why does Adelina care so much about Madison? Adelina trust Lucie enough with more information than Madison. We still don't know how much Madison knows.
It will be more revealing when Madison, Adelina and Lucie are in one room talking. We than finally get a glimps how far the relationship goes.
I have an idea what would be ideal in the end for Michael.
@Tom Speedy. Have a feeling your favorite character Mirielle comes back on top. Adelina is now too proud of herself, something has to go wrong with her supposed plan. Isn't clear what Madison learned from Adelina, but it doesn't seem like shrinking someone.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2016 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 40
As much as I love dialogue, this chapter had way too much, haha.
Here's my take on this:
Basically, Adelina wanted to punish Michael from a while back and she has given the power to Madison to keep Michael in check. Mirielle wasn't part of Adelina's shrink plan, but her desire for power convinced Adelina to shrink her too. And Madison controls her fate as well.
Another thing to note is how Adelina questions Lucie's sexual history-nothing. She never had fun with a tiny, which makes me wonder if Lucie is up next to have fun with Michael.
Story is starting to turn around for me. This chapter basically summarized all of Duggernaut's tricks in the last 5 chapters, haha.
I can't wait for the next one!
Date: April 16 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 39
Adelina is the one who knows at least, She turned to English first. Just to show Michael escape is impossible after she gives him some false hope.
The question is also why Lucie is there. We know more when Adelina has a conversation with Madison in the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: April 16 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 39
I can't believe Michael just escaped like that. I thought he was just hiding there or probably fainted thinking it was the end of his life.
Instead, he take courage and sneaks into the rest of the house where Lucie and Adelina are. So Adelina changed into a hot girl who made out with Lucie and spoke some foreign language. Then Adelina says it's enough and she breaks it up with Lucie. (So the grandma made out with granddaughter?) maybe Lucie didn't know it was Adelina.
Adelina turned into a hot girl who spoke some weird language. Just imagine that a hot random girl pulled you into an alley, then into a room. She starts kissing you and you loosen up. Then she knocks you out with a punch. You wake up, and she is on top of you, riding you and you are tied to bed posts in what looks like an abandoned basement. You try speaking to her, but she responds in a foreign language seductively and you realize that communication is not an option. This girl just goes on and on and soon you don't care that you've been captured and then you actually start enjoying the sex. Then all of a sudden she transforms into a grandma and speaks in English. "How you like fucking grandmas?" She asks with a creepy smile and you just lay there shocked. (Cool story, huh.)
I would laugh so hard if Adelina transforms into a hottie and has fun with Michael. His reastion would be priceless.
I would enjoy it if Lucie finds Michael. Now that's a relationship that I want to see.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Adelina is presenting herself in a younger form, though she and Lucie did not make out, instead, they are arguing about shrinking people and the long ranging consequences that may happen and Lucie is trying to get her great grandmother to rescind her decision and restore Mchael and Mirielle. Your story is funny, something very similar to that happpens in a few movies (Species, They Live) where one of the partners change during the course of the act.
[Report This]Date: April 15 2016 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 39
Let's see where this is going. The fact that Adelina is casually downstairs in the Hearst home(if it is the Hearst home) and probably been there many times before is great cause for concern for some people.
Lucie's defiance to her supposed great grandmother is interesting. When Michael comes close they speak English. "Before irreparable harm has occured". That can mean so many things.
It looks good. How will Michael handle himself in the days/weeks to come in this form. Interesting that he is beginning to self reflect and he has resolve build in. With that attitude, even when you eventually break and go into depression mode, you will have the capacity within weeks to just stop being depressed and come out stronger, smarter and a better person.
Author's Response:
Yes, it is unusual that Adelina seems quite at home in the Hearst household. some of that will be explained in the next chapter. At some point after they disappeared fromt he foyer, the argument switched to English and they returned, or, is one of them aware they are not alone? :O
Date: April 13 2016 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 38
There will of course be more dialogue coming in the next couple of chapters that enriches the characters and provides some measure of context for the current predicament, well sort of. could be just another red herring to throw readers off the trail. As long as it's entyertaining and feasible within the framework of the story.... :)
Totally agreed with that statement.
The crucible of human suffering can make or break a person's character. Michael is about to find out...
Can't wait for that. The build up towards that and conflicting feelings of the people around him through this development.
Date: April 13 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 38
Mirielle did the smart thing and these actions are a logical followup. But for Mirielle it is much easier to act cool and be at ease having sex with a non blood relative. But still, good strong character trade I can relate to.
Let see what Madison is playing at. Let see the interesting subtle development between those three, how they influence eachother. Madison is not invulnerable.
Mirielle seems to have the strongest mind with more life experience.
Michael has a long way to go.
Author's Response:
The crucible of human suffering can make or break a person's character. Michael is about to find out...
[Report This]Date: April 12 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 38
Even though this is not exactly my cup of tea, I cannot deny how unbelievably erotic this chapter was.
I still prefer Mirielle to be a giantess, but I guess this is ok, story wise. Mirielle reminds me of Tom from Tom's story, especially with her confidence in trying to please a giantess.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Patience Tom, this story may yet turn around for you...
Date: April 10 2016 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 37
@Maximus. Thanks. I love the effort the writer makes with this story and gives subtle clues and smokescreens. This is not a simple smut story If you look at it. It is a good read and I'm praising the writer for it. Thanks to subtle clues, my conclusion was spot on. About Lucie and the betrayal. Only I had Raven as possible suspect too if it wasn't Madison. Don't trust her. Duggernaut was also smart with counter measures that I would debunk my own theory about it by what was said in chapter 32 and 33. But that text in chapter 34 that Mirielle wasn't suppose to hear, was to suspicious and by looking very close what was said in the previous chapters I saw it didn't made my theory invalid and the conclusion was so fun, It just had to be the writers intention.
This chapter 37 has obvious information that Madison feels a bit uneasy to have done that to Mirielle. The tone and the way she explains in a civil manner why to Mirielle why she did it makes it seem that she feels some guilt for what she did, even if it was also justified not to let Mirielle go through with it. Also the obvious conclusion of Mirielle that Madison and Adelina are closer and new eachother for a long time. That she have means the contact her directly says enough. I wonder how Madison and Mirielle interact with eachother. 2 persons who have a reasonable clarity and don't hate eachother at all but something has to happen. :)
I also got the feeling there are hidden clues in here and smookscreens that will puposly lead you to the wrong conclusions.
This sentence of Madison keeps bugging me, :“I can see you are coming to understand,” Madison said.
I went to re read some chapters If I could find something. It only raises more questions and more possible theories. Good job, Duggernaut.
I wonder if the screaming laughter in the house just when Mirielle left the first time without Michael was of importance. That whole scene, someting doesn't feel right.
But I'm just going to wait for the next chapter and try to keep it simple. We have 10 people in the story so far and they all if some important part to play.
Agreed with you. How will the now coming relationship go between Michael, Madison and Mirielle and possible other characters.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
There will of course be more dialogue coming in the next couple of chapters that enriches the characters and provides some measure of context for the current predicament, well sort of. could be just another red herring to throw readers off the trail. As long as it's entyertaining and feasible within the framework of the story.... :)
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 37
Barrowman, you put entirely too much thought into smut :) Good job though! And as I said last review, great story teling by Dugger. I thought that Lucie might refuse to change Michael back or that her attempt may fail or that Mirelle might shrink by accident as Lucie warned but never thought shed be shrunk on purpose and turned over to Maddison, nor did I think it was Adelina impersonating Lucie.
I like Maddison and her freinds, Michael had this coming, Madison was tormented by him growing up and we saw that Mirelle had less then good intentions when she tried to acquire the power, so she is going to get what she deserves too. Gypsies have their own code of justice.
Oh, and F/f action rocks, glad to see Madison will get to enjoy it as much as her freinds have :)
Author's Response:
And here we go...
[Report This]Date: April 09 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 37
Madison smiled, “Hubris,” she said. “You thought you could glean millennia old knowledge out of what you presumed were simple old world village folk and there would be no cost.”
“True,” Madison conceded, “But it begged the question, why did you want the ability? Why couldn’t you just enjoy the uniqueness of the situation and take delight in the opportunity to play with Michael? Help him understand the impact of his behavior?”
Mirielle frowned. Had she gotten greedy? Blinded by lofty ambition to bring Mortimer low? What about the cop? Would she have shrunk him if she had the chance? Yes.
Funny how the different thought patterns clash. In this Madison shows she is smarter. Some people have the wrong idea what real power is or what is truly important in life. Interesting how Mirielle will develop and the coming interaction between Madison and Mirielle.
@Tom Speedy.
Put yourself in Madison's place. You would have the same alarmbells go off when a person, in this case Mirielle, comes with this kind of offer/plan? I don't think Madison wants to have problems with Adelina.
She choses the non stressfull way and could ask for a shrunken person other than Michael if she is close to Adelina. Why bother with elaborate plans to power through a corperation with all the stress, planning, hiding and paranoia, so that your main goal, having fun with a shrunken person gets lost in that time consuming unhappiness.
That said, I still don't like Madison either. She is lecturing Mirielle, but she will fall victim to her own hubris very soon. I believe her words in this for 99%, but like you said, she is hiding some other intentions and I can guess what they are and why.
I don't see Adelina as purely good. Every person has layers and conflicting emotions, etc. That what makes it fun.
I'm glad Lucie was kept out of this. Very important.
I agree with you with that power too shrink and the fun you could have. Mirielle has the potential to be fun, but she isn't there yet. Some thought patterns and sometimes the roughness in the sex she had, disappointed me and that was done on purpose by the writer to provoke precisely that feeling. That she was likeable, but not totally likeable.
Michael by the way deserves this punishment, he is still a jerk. The fun part starts when characters that seem in agreement now; Madison, Adelina, Raven, Gennifer, Amber come in conflict with eachother on how to treat Michael and Mirielle or what to do and what not and the different ideas they have, etc. And the transition where Michael has really learned his lesson, but the torture won't stop and goes extreme and al the emotions involved with all the characters will be interesting. Like this story so far and this chapter.
It is Madison here. That last sentence is only forshadowing of the possibilities. Think about it, with this Mirielle and Michael are really in trouble.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2016 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 37
While the story keeps getting interesting, I feel like its losing the sexy thrill that the story had in the beginning.
Personally, I don't find Madison that attractive compared to Mirielle or even Lucie. Maybe it's becuase I picture myself as Michael and can't bear to see a sister be this giantess. Also, I always thought Madison and her friends were like little brats that needed to be taught a lesson and not the other way around. Now Madison is teaching a lesson which makes me dumbstruck.
Sure Michael stole a flower and is greedy af but does that warrant an ok from the Daeyna for Madison to abuse him as his sister. In my book, that's morally wrong and I wonder if the Dayna approves of Madison's behavior.
Mirielle upfront told Madison about her intentions of shrinking more people, but does that mean that Madison isn't hiding anything either? I'm sure Madison prefers someone other than her brother to be stuck in her panties instead. If this is the case, then Madison is keeping a secret that is similar to Mirielle but Mirielle is punished for it? I think the Daenya should read Madison's mind and see what HER true intentions are.
Also, that ending is just another trick. This Madison is not the Deadnya. Only Madison knows about Mirielle keeping Michael in her panties while they discussed Michael's future. That scene was way too specific for the Deadnya to imitate like she knows. Nope, that's the real Madison.
I want the Deanya to represent Justice, but I can't. Especially when now it seems like Madison tried to get Mirielle to say something greedy and report it to the Deadnya. The Deadnya keeps rewarding Madison and it bugs me becuase she is getting away at playing with Michael and what looks like Mirielle next. Soon, Deanya should punish Madison for her evil deeds to the tiny people.
Speaking of people, where is Lucie? Is she ever going to get her hands on Michael? We saw Madison, Mirielle, and now I want Lucie. She dissapeared and never returned since the first few chapters.
So it's confirmed that the Deadnya can transform into other people. Can she grow and shrink too? Man, I wish I had that power to shrink so I can shrink next to Mirielle and tell her to "play" with me. Also, if Mirielle becomes to rough, I can just unshrink myself. The dream!
Ps: Will there be any hot teachers in this story? Milfs? Only 2 girls had Michael so far.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: April 08 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 36
@Maximus.
Didn't you even suspect it could go wrong for Mirielle, Maximus? This plan could have never succeeded of you think about it.
The important question is now. Was this planned after Mirielle left with Michael or was this whole scheme planned in advance? Than you have a totally different ball game. But I choose option 1.
The fact that they are in Madison's room means that at least one of her friends or she herself has good ties with the gypsys. But one thing remains. The power lies with the gypsys in this story and not with Madison. Madison wouldn't dare to go against them, only if she has a waterproof plan so they can't retaliate.
But Madison's motivations or role in this aren't perfectly clear yet.
We have 10 players in the game so far; Mortimer, Helena, Michael, Madison, Mirielle, Lucie, Adelina, Amber, Gennifer, Raven. With the current information of those 36 chapters you can puzzle about their possible personalities, motivations, backstories, average behaviour patterns, suspicious behaviour, how they relate to eachtother, how their behaviour could effect eachother and the timing of certain elements from the writer, etc.
Can't wait for clash of emotions within and between the characters in Madison's room and some more light on the motivations behind them.
@Duggernaut.
2 chapters after Mirielle shrunk and still no contact with somebody else besides Michael. Keeping the suspense up. ;)
[Report This]Date: April 07 2016 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 36
Wow, awesome story telling Dugger! This is a turn of events I ddi not see coming. I'm not sure how much this is Maddisons doing or Lucie just punnishing Mirelle for wanting the power to use on others.
Whatever it is, I'm glad they are back with Maddison and her freinds, those girls are fun! Now there are two to play with, this is going to be a wild ride.