[Report This]Date: December 17 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Very descriptive. It's if you were there with Michael in Amber's mouth. You can actually feel how dangerous and mindblowing it is to be in there.
What will happen next on his journey.
[Report This]Date: December 13 2015 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Michael is in for the wildest ride of his life. Let see if he can ultimately get back to normal or finds his place in this new giant world.
What does Mirelle has in store for him? ;)
[Report This]Date: December 11 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
Another great chapter.
I had my doubts about this story. I'm starting to turn around though. Not yet, but it's getting there.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol, we haven't even got to Mirielle yet...
[Report This]Date: December 09 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, Michael broke down way too easily. Like, it was just one pussy. Only one, and it wasn't even the ass. He should be grateful at the moment.
It's starting to get steamy in that room. I'm really wondering how Michael deals with each girl. So far, this is the best chapter in the story, which is self explanatory.
I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Michael is no Tom :)
[Report This]Date: December 05 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
Next chapter title: Into the Abyss.
For some reason, I'm not attracted to any of these girls. Lucie and the girl at the front desk at the office sound more exciting.
These girls in Madison's room, seem....average. Maybe, I prefer your long development of the characters before giantess content.
The giantess content was early in this story, but I'm not feeling much for these girls. It feels like they are hookers becuase I know so little about them.
I think after Gennifer has her fun, the characters should do some other stuff so we can see who is who and which character seems sexy. One example was Selene. She stood out from the crowd becuase of playful demeanor and sexual appetite. She also reminds me of Sophie. These girls are the gems in this neighborhood and I hope one of these girls becomes the "special" one.
Good suspense chapter. The fun begins next time. I can't wait for it!
[Report This]Date: December 03 2015 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
If you could pump out 20 chapters a day I would read them all!! Keep up the great work, you've got me hooked. Keep them chapters flying out of the press :D
[Report This]Date: December 02 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Kinda weird when his sister has that smile on her face. Any of the other girls would be considered sexy with that smile. I think Maddie has to leave the picture somehow, like Tess.
So no call, huh? These girls don't want anyone else involved and no help for Michael. They want the fun all to themselves. Haha.
I wonder what happens next. They all sound horny.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 30 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
When he wakes up, it's play time!
I liked Gennifer's perspective a little more that Michaels. I like how she claimed it was a mouse in her pussy. Imagine a girl shoving a live mouse inside her. The weird part is that I have a feeling that people actually do that in real life.
Well, the girls will check the blanket, see it's not a mouse. Then they might feel bad for hurting Michael. Then Michael gets up and the girls cheer for a moment and soon want to play with him. Gennifer on the other hand wants to get revenge. Hehe. (That's my guess.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 26 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 8
You want us to think he is going to die, but I doubt it. Amber might injure him, but she won't kill him. The fun was just getting started.
Hmm. So much for a sneaky approach, Michael will be found next chapter. I wonder what these girls will do to him. Naughty or nice?
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
This chapter title makes this chapter funny. I mean creepy?!! Haha. It seems normal compared to most chapters you have written, yet it is titled creepy.
Michael chose Gennifer first. I like this choice. I would've chosen her too.
How is he nearly trapped if he can't even move? Wouldn't he be just trapped? Kinda conflicting.
Anyway good chapter. Giantess stuff is already here! I can't wait for the the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 16 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
First off, glad you are back. I got worried for a few days.
About this chapter:
Gen sounds hot. I like girls who want to sit on someone's face. If this was Tom's story, consider himself interested.
I like this movie intro in the beginning. It made the conversation seem natural and free flowing. It also illustrates a girls night out.
So these girls are getting drunk, huh? Micheal sure is in for a party.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 09 2015 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I get that he is in Maddison's room, but I don't understand where is he hiding?
Seems like between two penguins and he used the hair tie to tie himself up to a penguin. And he is stuck in the fold of a plush penguin. I know it doesn't make sense, so I was wondering if you could elaborate on that.
Another hiding spot that would have been fun would be Micheal going inside a stuffed penguin, especially one that the girls play with often. Then the girls will hug the penguin, sit in the penguin, and all sorts of stuff while Micheal is inside.
Girls inbound, I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 07 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like how you took the good start from Tom's story and put it in this story. I don't blame you. If it works there, it will work here. Besides, I enjoy this scene too.
It's always nice to hear girls talk positively about you, especially your appearance. It helps with self esteem too. Might help Micheal choose which girl he should reach out for help.
His journey in the hall continues. I wonder which girl finds him or at least which room he ventured into.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom thanks for supporting yet another one of my stories it's always great to get your take. There are a lot of similarities between Tom and Michael though I tried to make Michael a little more of a pick and this story will get grittier than the other. (No Injustice reference but I thought about doing it just for your sake :P)
[Report This]Date: November 05 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, he shrunk already in chapter 3? Is this a new record? Usually some story builds up, but I think I know enough that this kid deserves this.
Be a dick and you shrink. Good deal, huh? For me, yes. For Micheal, probably not.
Looks like giantess content is soon. Glad you jumped right into it.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: November 04 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this is good. I didn't even recognize that it was you writing it! This reminds me of Tom's story with all this rich parents, a sister, a party and things like that.
His cocky behaviour also reminds me of Tom, not to mention his handsome face and physique. Is this guy Tom? Seems like it. Instead of hitting on Janine, he is hitting on Merrile.
I have a feeling that this is like the R rated version of Tom's story so these girls will all be like Janine. It has that dark feeling to it, like bad shit is coming his way.
I wonder if there will by hit milfs in this story, but then again, this isn't Tom's story, haha!
Fantastic start, you have a way of writing good intros.
I can't wait for the next chapter!