Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: February 14 2016 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 22

Finally caught up on this story and I absolutely love it. Really looking forward to more, especially Mirielle's conquest over Mortimer's company.

Really great read.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks Aaron, it may give a whole new meaning to hostile takeover as it applies to this situation  :)

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 22

SUSPENSE......IS......KILLING ME!!!

 

Great build up, can't wait!

Author's Response:

Lol, are we there yet? No, not yet. :)

Reviewer: Barrowman Signed [Report This]
Date: February 10 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 22

As I expected. Mirielle has bigger plans discovering the secret how to shrink people. It's hard to say if Michael is better off with Mirielle or Madison or one of those other girls.
This will be an interesting game.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2016 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 21

Love these girls! Wonder if Mirielle will be better or worse then them. 

 

Unlike Tom, whom I suspect is going to have a happy ending, I don't think Michaels fate is going to be as kind *weg*

Author's Response:

These girls are ruthless and only getting more and more so as they discover new and interesting ways to play with Michael. Mirielle is coming and you're right, how will she be? 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

The action was pretty awesome this chapter. It reminded me of the good stuff from the contract.

However, these girls feel less mature and feel like young teens rather than young adults. It almost makes me cringe at these scenes just like how Michael looks at Madison using him.

Perhaps it was the way you describe the women in your other stories that made me just imagine being with them. You described their bodies, their curves and details that gave me a hint of mature, well developed bodies.

Here, it feels like little girls having their fun with Michael, and I can't get rid of this little girl idea out of my head.

Playfulness is nice, but like Michael, I can't wait for Mirielle, she seems like a breath of fresh air from all these chapters of these girls.

I guess I just want to see some woman with authority. Or some 1 on 1 action. I also miss the times when a woman describes what she will do with a tiny like you did in the contract.

Still a good chapter. I feel like each one is supposed to make me desire Mirielle even more.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2016 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

I like the pool scene, but I'm kinda tired of these girls. It feels different from the other stories where usually I want more action from girls like these.

Love the Jaws reference. That was creative.

I can't wait for Mirielle to return, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

Aw, I wanted Mirielle to keep Michael. I guess the girls weren't done with him yet.

I guess I have to wait, and now it's back to the girl party in that room.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Never give up hope. I think it being Madison punishing her brother set a few people off but for her it was punitive not sexual. I'm not finished with Mirielle yet though

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2016 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

And we still have no idea which girl has Michael. Well, it doesn't matter now since it looks like Mirielle will gain custody of him next.

I think it's Gennifer playing with Tom right now. Tom wanted to be naughty with her and she granted his wish.

Speaking of naughty, man, I hope Mirielle is extra naughty with Michael. Now Michael will be given to the one he is in love with. Sounds a lot like the situation with Janine.

I think Mirielle would be like Janine but not as agressive as Janine. Also, I think Mirielle won't be as gentle as Lina. A good mix of both seems good in my opinion. And yes, panties! Keep him in there as long as you want Mirielle!

I hope Mirielle takes advantage of the whole situation. I hope she lectures Michael on his stealing incident and then describes what she is going to do with him.

"Michael, you have been a bad boy. Bad boys deserve to be punished. How would you like to be punished Michael? Would you like me to suck on your body with my lips nonstop? Would you like me to put you in my cleavage and squeeze you? You may have a hard time breathing. Or would you like to be tucked inside my panties and pleasure all day during work? You may even enjoy it. I can see your body enjoys it. Mmhmmm... I can feel myself getting all wet. I think it's time we grant your little dick's wish, shall we?" Mirielle picks Michael and let's him dangle from her bra. He looks down and watches her pull the waistband of her panties open, the heat radiating upward and he trembles at the thought of being stuck there all day. Mirielle giggles and Michael falls. He slides right into her gusset and she lets go of her waistband, trapping poor Michael inside. Michael's screams were muffled as Mirielle began massaging herself. "Mmm, that was nice. Time for work." She pats the front of her panties and dresses up, knowing she will have a great day of work.

I love these fantasies. I got a good feeling about Mirielle and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 06 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

If this was Madison, then this chapter would be kinda messed up for Michael.

However, I don't think it's Madison or any of the other girls at her house. It must be a new girl (or woman) that is keeping Michael in her panties.

My bet is on Lucie. My second choice would be the assistant lady that Michael tried to hit on in the first chapter.

I still think it's Lucie becuase who else could it be? Not many girls have been introduced to Michael and he also recognizes the stench on these pussies.

Also, Maddison maybe decided to give Michael to Lucie to have him fixed, and Lucie is now going to her grandma's house or something. Or, Lucie happens to be busy and wants to do her activities while keeping Michael with her.

I love chapters like this where a guy is trapped in the panties of someone. However, it would be much sexier to know who was holding him hostage instead. The mysteriousness is good, but I think these chapters are too rare enough to hold on this information.

I really want to know who is this girl, and I love her aggressiveness by pushing Michael into her vagina.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 14

In this chapter, you can't really tell the difference between a mouth and a vagina.

Just think about it. Besides the smell, if you were tiny and inside one of these things, the experience will probably by the same. Kinda.

In addition, we learn about Michael's past with his sister and why she wants to get her revenge.

Good stuff, I can't wait for the next chapter!