[Report This]Date: December 16 2006 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 Be warned
Very good short story.
In fact, I would like to hear more about her other victims who died in a variety of ways.
However I do question the "G" rating. Should be at least an "R".
Author's Response:
Thank you, Safety Pin for your compliment, but please tell me about those rating letters - what does G & R stand for. You must excuse my ignorance.
Banfield, and yes, I may well tell of that vengeful girl's other reprisals.
[Report This]Date: December 16 2006 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1 Be warned
A good story banfield. A real turn on and well written. I have one about a smuggler who crashes his plane deep in the jungles of Malaysia. It starts out much as yours does, but ends up as a love story.
Author's Response: With great respect to your endeavours, Stanley, your story about a smuggler in Malaysia sounds intriguing...but for the "love" element. Perhaps it is not for this site, so do accept my apologies. You're a damned good writer!