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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2015 9:11 AM Title: Captured by Lila

And, this is where Tar678 originally left off! The question now becomes: will you prove less triskaidekaphobic than he did? ;-)

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 12:14 AM Title: The First Day

Really like this story. Of course I really liked it over 5yrs ago when it was first posted here by tar678.

First Day of being Shrunken by tar678
http://giantessworld.net/viewstory.php?sid=1654

I hope I am wrong but it just seems fishy that you didn't acknowledge that author in anyway.

Author's Response:

Sorry, I completely forgot. I just posted Him as a co-author. Thanks for remiding me!

Reviewer: Deanan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2015 10:38 PM Title: The First Day

Sorry about posting it all at once. Since this is still a work in progress so I will try to space it out a little more. I'm glad I was able to give you a big chunk of a story cozmos.

Reviewer: giantess_lover45 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2015 7:10 PM Title: The First Day

I think to counteract the whole issue with forgetting the story when it is uploaded periodically, in between a set of chapters, there can be a spoiler/no spoiler paragraph explaining what has happened up until that point for those that don't read long stories all in one go. 

other than that this story is a blast!

 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 01 2015 5:59 PM Title: Captured by Lila

This story is amazing but I kind of feel like you posted too much at once. I get the impression from readers on this site that they don't like reading huge chuncks of stroy all at once and are not very good at pacing themselves. That's why alot of authors here will write their stories all at once and post a chapter every couple of days, that way their story is spread out more and it's constantly being updated on the front page. Anyway, my favorites are Sophie and Alyssa but since they are the 2 gentlest gts's they are also less privy to forcing themselves on Nate, which means they get less sexy content. But that's just part of why I like them, they are gentle girls that don't just shove a tiny man up themselves without his approval! I'm really looking forward to the next one!

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