[Report This]Date: March 05 2016 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was really nice story and I loved Adriadnes personality. I would really like to see a sequel that tells us more about her life as a godess and what that shadow thing was.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for taking the time to read my story. I am currently working on the sequel now, not sure when I will have a final draft for the first few chapters though.
Date: November 06 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 11
I really like her attitude - a clear villain who's being forced to work with the heroes. Plus, I dig her taste in clothes. I love a giantess rampaging in boots! It would be a blast if her super-strong frined had a similar attitude - sadistic, murderous and in love with her own power. The two of them could be a terrifying combo together...
Author's Response:
yeah I love a rampaging giantess in knee high boots too :D and don't worry, there is more to come, surely to include more about Ariadne's friend
[Report This]Date: October 28 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Suprised to be your first review. I really liked Adriadne's charachter, seems like she resents her father and is a very angry and confrontational person outwardly while feeling like other people are out to get her inwardly. The way you portrayed her intoxication with growing was awesome too. I wonder if she will err more toward villany in the future or how her relationship with Ansam will progress. Having her crush clones and people in a simulation is a great way to keep her character in a grey area while showing how much she enjoys her power. I'd imagine anyone on her squad would always be looking over their shoulder afraid of being crushed.
Hope to see more soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review combine45. I appreciate you taking the time to write one. I do indeed have plans to put Ansam in the spotlight a little more, and that will definately include interactions with Ariadne. I'm working hard at part 2, and want to it be as good as i can make it. stay tuned !