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Reviewer: NymphOManiac Signed [Report This]
Date: September 03 2022 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just needed to pop in here and show this story some love. It's such an epic



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm a big fan of your work as well

Reviewer: EmmyYanson Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2017 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

I am absolutely in love with this story. I finished it last night and immediately went back to re-read some of my favorite parts. There are nowhere near enough M/f stories on here, and you pulled it off perfectly. The descriptions and level of detail threw me right in the moment, and I haven't been able to get some of these images out of my head.

I love when it shifts to Gideon's Point of View and you get a glimpse into how much of a sadist he is. The world you built is so frightenning and wonderful. This is instantly one of my favorites.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words! :D I agree, there aren’t enough M/f stories on this site (or in general). Cruel M/f is one of my favorite genres, and since I don’t see enough stories with that theme, I end up writing my own. I’m very happy that you enjoyed this one!

Reviewer: Michael11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 15 2016 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow... couldn't stop reading! The way you describe what is happening and these characters... Paige, Will and Gideon... !!!

There's another story in this universe... RIGHT!? And, and... all these other stories from you...!

 

*searches*



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm very happy to hear that you liked this story! I'm considering writing another story set in this universe (and possibly with the same characters). It would be interesting to see if Gideon captures Paige, and what he does to her...

Reviewer: Naoru Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2015 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please, you have to tell me that this story is marked as finished for some mistake on your part or on the site. Thus cannot be finished, I need MORE. I love the descriptions,characters,everything. Is Paige truly free?is Gideon going to find her?I must know. The only thing I would ask is for Gideon to shove tiny women on the back of his underwear more, instead of the front, but thats a silly request based on personal preferences so pay me no mind~

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2015 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 4

I came over here a few hours ago intending to show this story love, and instead spent those hours hunting down my favorite bits. so I basically just read it again!

this is a truly wonderful story, full of rare delights for me. gideon is a beautiful monster, and his sadism is exciting to be around. I constantly worried for paige, and having mortality toyed with the way it is here is a true pleasure to read.

and oh the violence! wonderfully clear and powerfully erotic. gideon sitting down and devouring his platter of women was such a chilling and delightful scene. some brutal moments here were painted so clearly that my mind reeled to picture them the way your words wanted me to - which made it all the more exciting that I did.

for me, if fetish fiction was published, this story would be placed on a special shelf. I really appreciate these longer works of yours, that are so plot and action rich. I know a story of this size and complexity is a hell of a lot of work, and I thank you for that labor, because this story creates for me an experience that is hard for me to come by, and yet I really yearn for it, so I'm very appreciative for that.

I can only give this five stars officially, but I'm really giving it billions. unlimited stars. I'm going to sit here with a star hose and just constantly shower this story with stars.

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