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Reviewer: NotOblivious Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: May 14 2023 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: coolcoolcool5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1

 Fun little story. Will there be more with this character?



Author's Response:

Possibly. I would certainly be fine with doing more with her. Certainly not averse to the idea will just have to see if something comes to me. 

Reviewer: The Shrunken Scholar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

A great short story. Mavia is a very interesting character. The fact that she doesn't even need armies or politicians, but keeps them for their benefit is cool. The imagery of her creating lakes and a sea from just her footprint was amazing.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! Glad you found her interesting, might do something with her in a later story. Could be fun. 

Reviewer: Binary_Prophet Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this! love your character design for the god-queen and the portrayal of her power. the descriptions of her size and the action around her foot were especially lovely. I love to fantasize about gods-made-flesh as well, and this is a wonderful take on the concept, for me. a short and very sweet read :>

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! A little outside my normal fare, I rarely try using deities as main characters but this one was actually a fun exercise. 

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

It is written very nicely, and quick and straight to the point. 10 stars for this short tale.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, one of my shorter stories but nice to know it was enjoyable. 

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