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Reviewer: Maximus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 11:28 AM Title: Popular Girls: A Teammates Story

Awesome! Loved the scene where she so casually disposes of Cindy in ftont of everyone. The way Nicole just slapped her down with her boot, such a gentle movement yet so devastating to Cindy, loved it!

 

I did not expect that turn around, Ill have to go read Part of the Team :)

 

Well done!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2015 10:31 AM Title: Popular Girls: A Teammates Story

It's great to see you writing again, few people make a text explination of a boot so vividly wonderful.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2015 7:18 AM Title: Popular Girls: A Teammates Story

WOW! I can't believe nobody has reviewed this, yet. I'm almost NEVER first to review a one-shot story. Let alone, such a Halloween-worthy thriller, like this one.

BRAVO! And, thanks for sharing this with us. :-D

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