[Report This]Date: October 23 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very enjoyable culmination to this story. Your use of language and style of delivery are very appealing and make the cadence of the story engaging.
Author's Response:
Thank you kindly. I always try to consider my stories as normal fiction that just happens to have a lot of size smut, so I hope I'm getting the pacing and characterization right as well as the sexytimes.
Date: October 16 2015 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing! You're writing style is so vivid and awesome! Could you do a chapter where a shrunken woman/women is involved with the vore please?
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
I'm afraid I don't do requests, but you might want to watch this space for my next story after The Mentor is completed.
[Report This]Date: October 12 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great so far! I love couples vore and first time vore (especially when one person persuades the other, unlocking hidden desires), so this is right up my alley.
Can't wait to see more.
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it! Yeah, "awakening" stories are richer when couched in terms of a relationship. No one is the same afterward.
Date: October 09 2015 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Surprised no one reviewed this yet , its good and that is only after the first chapter. Must be the giant content here, that seems to turn people off.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
As for the male giant, it's right there up front in the Summary, the Categories, and Size Roles, yet the story's getting views, so I don't suppose it turns everyone off.