Date: March 10 2016 5:07 PM Title: Goodnight sweet prince
A great story, I'm rooting for the men
Date: September 24 2015 6:27 PM Title: Truce Part 2
Okay so I guess women aren't the only evil ones in this world. But this desire that men have to eradicate women could have been born from fear of them. Fear that is completely justified I might add, I mean, it only took ONE woman to destroy an army of men and trample all over the city without any effort! In my opinion, it would be better for both sexes of this world if they just kept to themselves and left eachother alone.
Date: September 24 2015 10:10 AM Title: Truce? Part 1
I have to say, you're not very good at this.
The girls are the arrogant ones, not the men, and more importantly, this truce shows their sheer stupidity. They attack them without remorse, then expect them to just come over and have no fear of being attacked.
And why is Todd such a bitch? He seems all right with all this mindless violence.
Please tell me you haven't made these women invincible. The fact is, the men must have some form of protection, otherwise the women would have walked in years ago. And don't say 'The Wall' because THAT IS NOT A SIGN OF AN ADVANCED CIVILIZATION. Give them some kind of counter-measure so they can show these over-confident feminine creeps that they don't need women!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and giving back feedback on plot holes, I hope you read on to see if sense can be made.
Date: September 23 2015 9:21 PM Title: Truce? Part 1
So far, despite what Amy might think in her arrogance, it does seem like the men can function, provide and defend themselves just fine without women. Ironic since she seems to think that the men are the arrogant ones! If anything, women appear to be only danger that they can't defend themselves against. Men of this world so far have only shown that they want to be left alone, we haven't had any indication of men attacking women or anything of the sort.
Also, I guess I should ask but don't men have like bombs, nukes or even laser beams or something? For a civilization that is supposed to be so advanced they certainly haven't shown it in the weapons department! Unless these women are invincible, I doubt they could survive a nuke or laser beam as hot as the sun. They are 200 ft tall not 2000ft tall, after all.
Author's Response:
As is in most cases not all is as it seems right now.
Date: September 22 2015 6:35 PM Title: Absolute obedience
Pretty good chapter too. Its becoming abundantly clear that these women see men as nothing but commodities! The men of that city were completely right in being fearful and hateful of women, so far we haven't seen anything to boost the status of women as nothing but lustful savages.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 11:25 PM Title: Exciled Eddie
So far this story has been a nice surprise, im really diggin it! And now we are getting some backstory so Im stoked to see where this goes! Your writting alsp is improving with each chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 6:41 PM Title: Mission Humiliate
So now we know for a fact that women of this world are violent savages so its completely understandable why men fear and hate them. And Todd is getting horny at this massacre so hes a douche and I hope something bad happens to him but now that his girlfriend is around I doubt shes gonna let that happen. Also arent men almost extinct? If weapons have no effect on her then why is she fighting back to kill? Shouldnt she just grab them by the handfulls and put them in a bag or something? Anyway good chapter!
Author's Response:
She's a bit of a sadist so her killing requires little logic. It's only after she remembers the overall goal does she realize her folly, but as you discovered the women in this world aren't the big picture thinking types. They have evolved physically to the point of driving men to extinction only to realize their carnal desires are a detriment to the future of their race. Thank you for the feedback, I like it when people ask me the logical pieces to the story as it makes me think about them myself.
Date: September 08 2015 3:27 PM Title: Goodnight sweet prince
Cool idea. Very intriguing. Looking forward to more.
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks, I know others stories that have gone the NWO route so I will try and make this one as different as possible.
Date: September 06 2015 8:26 PM Title: Goodnight sweet prince
So far, so good, I'm hooked in...