Reviews For A Longing
Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2018 7:06 AM Title: The Run In
Date: February 03 2018 7:06 AM Title: The Run In
Well, even if you don't continue it, this was a great one-shot. And, if it's your literary debut, here, as well? Welcome to the club!
:-)
Reviewer: aknouh Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2015 12:38 PM Title: The Run In
Date: November 05 2015 12:38 PM Title: The Run In
awesome keep going!
Reviewer: aknouh Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2015 2:40 PM Title: The Run In
Date: September 20 2015 2:40 PM Title: The Run In
keep going, hope her tits get bigger =P
Reviewer: paerslemone Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 6:14 PM Title: The Run In
Author's Response:
Date: September 05 2015 6:14 PM Title: The Run In
Pretty good. would have liked for it to go a little slower.
Author's Response:
Ok, thank you for the feedback, I will use this to develop my writing in the future.
Reviewer: jonnyjames9 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2015 5:53 PM Title: The Run In
Date: September 05 2015 5:53 PM Title: The Run In
Not bad at all, especially considering it's your first story. I would like to see more.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!