[Report This]Date: November 02 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well, the reason why Sam was not pleading or screaming was because he knew Elayne wasn't going to kill him just like that.
He also knows that she fancies him, and that just makes him more comfortable. Other tinies of course would run and scream. They are probably going to die because they got kidnapped and not "chosen" like Sam.
So I don't think Sam is that "special", I just think he knows that Elayne likes him, so he doesn't have to worry.
Anyway, I like the sex scene. It's a slow, teasing kind of chapter, something I rarely see you do. However, this is the perfect relationship to begin that slow, sexual journey.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 24 2015 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 17
Lots of high level vocabulary in this chapter. Had to pause and look and some of them up.
In the end, I'm not even sure. Did she swallow him? It seems like it, but it felt odd becuase he was struggling to climb up her throat.
Kaylee goes straight for the action a lot quicker than Elayne. Elayne takes her time, (probably for Sam) and wants him to enjoy it as well. For Kaylee, it's a nonstop ride of sexual play.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: October 19 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 16
I got to admit, this is romantic. Not like a girl overreacting on her first tiny man, this is a woman of experience in love with a man and is making every effort to make this situation very memorable. As for Sam, he is in for a show. This giantess won't likely hurt him but will happily use him for sex which is a great thing to see.
She also hints of a little foreplay. She is very patient and doesn't seem to immediately shove Sam in anywhere soon. She cares not just about her pleasure, but also how Sam feels and is willing to make his experience enjoyable.
I also like how you made it 1 guy 1 woman. It would be a little weird if Wyatt was there too. I'm glad they went to a separate bedroom.
For some reason, I want to see Kaylee fuck the shit out of Cameron. Maybe Cameron gets naughty and pushes her too far. Maybe Cameron is fearful of Kaylee and she decides to change that.
I don't know, but I know these next few chapters will be sexy. I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Elayne is definitely intrigued by Sam and is thinking a little more long term than her rapacious companion
Date: October 14 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
Elaine and Kaylee are great. Love the interaction as they look in the dollhouse. I assume that when Elaine gives an order they had better respond quickly. Enjoying the story very much.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
We shall how Sam, who's accustomed to being in charge is now in a position, of shall we say diminished authority. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: October 11 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
A relatively short chapter, but it's a good transition chapter. It went from dramatic robbery to giantess slavery. I like it.
For some reason, I don't like the name Kaylee. It's just not attractive in my opinion. But otherwise, I like her character. She's the giddy school girl type.
Let me guess, Kaylee plays with George and Cameron at the same time. Cameron gets ass and George gets pussy. Meanwhile Elayne plays with one at a time. She starts with Wyatt. She uses him as a show for Sam, trying to tease him by playing with Wyatt. Soon Elayne gets bored and replaces Wyatt with Sam. At first, Sam refuses, but out of nowhere, Sam just all of a sudden explodes with energy, touching her in all of the right places and she orgasms, and when it's over she looks at him and Sam still has a stoic expression on his face. That's my prediction.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Bit of a different start, hostage role reversal now. I know a Kaylee that would absolutely change your opinion, straight up beautiful
Date: October 07 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoying the story very much. Love the dollhouse from their point of view. Will they feel an earthquake?
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, it is abot to get real, and yep, they're going to feel it!
[Report This]Date: October 06 2015 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
I totally forgot that Cameron was responsible for all this.
Boy, everyone knows that Cameron is a pervert. Servers him right to be trapped in Elayne's panties.
Doesn't the doll house have doors? If not, then I'm pretty sure Elayne is going to open to roof and find them.
Well, the games begin next chapter. I can't wait for it!
Author's Response:
She's definitely going to open the house. the doors on this house are all fake, just stickers on the wall, :O
Date: October 05 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
This appears to be another outstanding contribution to my entertainment! I'm really looking forward to the interactions between Elaine and Sam. Will Sam be the same kind of character as Jack Dalton... an unforgettable character, who is not only respected by other men, but attractive to women? Especially those with power...
What I've seen so far leads me to believe that this will be one of your best yet! Keep up the good work.
Thanks for that...
Tigernach
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading, yes I want Sam to possess characteristics similar to Jack, alpha male, self confident and very appealing to women of power, calm and cool under pressure (as we've seen in the bank, a bullet hole in his side). I would dare say man candy, but given the nature of the story and the direction it's taking, that could be dangerous, :)
[Report This]Date: October 01 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
Basically, they woke up.
Next chapter, they eat and talk. Haha, I'm kidding.
So Cameron is back! I would love to hear his story!
The gang is all together! Let's rob this cheap house, lol.
I bet Elayne is about to lift the roof out. That should surprise them.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yep, rise and shine in a bizarre little plastic house. I think I would find it a little unsettling.
Date: September 29 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
Cool way to shrink a guy. The shrink kiss.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
"It's just a little kiss, what possible harm could it do?" she asked innocently, batting her eyelashes demurely, sultry pout on her mouth.
[Report This]Date: September 28 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Let the good times roll!
Go Elayne!
She is athletic, smart, and awesome.
I'm too much in awe to write an actual review so I'm just commenting instead.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Oh Elayne is something special, we're alomst ready for her big reveal
Date: September 28 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is great and all. But will we see another chapter of the contract soon that is a great story
Author's Response:
Because you asked for it, I jumped back on the contract and check it out. Been awhile I know, no excuses, I need to finish that bad boy - Jack Dalton is a fun character to write.
[Report This]Date: September 27 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story man... Enjoying it so far. Hope that there will be more stuff around her butt though :)
Thanks for the story!! It's really awesome. Well written
Author's Response:
Thanks for the props. If not Elayne's butt, there definitely needs to be a little backdoor action, we shall see soon enough!
[Report This]Date: September 26 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 11
At one point near the beginning of the chapter, you said "crabbing two glow sticks".
Sam is falling for Elayne. He keeps on blaming stuff on himself when things get out of hand. He has to keep his composure and not let things get more difficult.
Wow, that was one brilliant escape. I never expected it. I didn't even predict it! Usually, I get a prediction that is somewhat close, but no, not this time. I thought the cops followed the wrong van or something. But wow, a hole to escape?!! That's amazing! No wonder why they needed that van! It had that door so they can open it.
I wonder what the cops think about this. Call off the patrol? They are all dead kinda thing? Perhaps a search party, K-9 units, paramedics, and all that good stuff.
One smart thing about that explosion is that the wreckage will cover up the hole. Cops won't even find it.
Now, it's just Sam, George, Wyatt, and Elayne. 3 guys vs 1 lady. Who will win. My bets on the lady. (As always.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Fixed the 'crabbing'. thanks Tom. I wanted to keep people guessing, how are they planning on getting away,? Are they going to be shrunk and smuggled out or what? well now everyone knows and it's time for Elayne to let go of the scared girl routine.
Date: September 24 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Enjoying the story.
Thanks,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to give feedback this story will be shifting toward GTS material very shortly.
[Report This]Date: September 21 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Now that's what I'm talking about! Fire, explosions, cops, bad guys, big guns, hostages and more explosions! The action is brilliant!
As for Elayne. Wow! If a woman talked about me like that I would feel good. I would feel confident. Her descriptions made me melt because of my jealousy. I want to be Sam now. That guy is awesome and Elayne can sense it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Looks like Sam has put himself on her radar. GTS content coming very soon then we'll see how she'll handle Sam.
Date: September 17 2015 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
So far so good. Nicely written.
Later,
Diesel
Author's Response:
Thanks Diesel, appreciate the thumbs up!
Date: September 17 2015 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Another great Chapter! :) you never fail to impress with your imagination and writing skills.. Cameron has been Elayne's panties for quite sometime now (lucky guy :) ) I'm rather curious as to where this story is going and who's going to be the next shrunk and put in their place.. Keep up the wesome work and thank you for all these wonderful stories to read after a long day of work..
I've been following all of your stories since the beginning and am also looking forward to the next chapters in Tom's story, Sophie, and Double dog dare also Fan girls has been having me rather interested as to what's going to happen next..
Thank you agin for all your hard work :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for supporting all of the stories you've mentioned and acknowledging the work that goes into them. Reviews are great validation to help recognize or inspire writing and I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts and with me. :)
[Report This]Date: September 16 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
So that's how they are going to escape. Now the question is, will they escape at this size? :)
(I know right, short review.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 09 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
This is the most badass giantess story that I have ever read.
The action is brilliant. So much tension. I love these standoffs. Can't get any better than this.
Not much else to say except that I can't wait for the next chapter! (I'm so glad you are back! You were gone for a few days and I got worried. So I'm happy now.)
Author's Response:
Getting busy this time of year, like I mentioned in one of the other reviews, my updates willl be fewer and farther between, apologies. This story is close to busting loose, soon.