Date: September 09 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 8
This bank robbery plan is amazing. Let's just hope that nobody gets any ideas. :P
Author's Response:
You know something has to give, otherwise this would just be another boring story, :)
[Report This]Date: September 05 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7
Very intriguing indeed. Wonder if Sam is gonna force Blaine(first thing I thought of was David Blaine street magician lol) and Steven to bring the hostages outside with empty guns or something completely different... Whatever the case I'm hooked. Looking forward to see how/if they get outta there and how/if the cops can thwart them.
Really wanna see how Elayne will play into this. Wonder if Sam can manage to get on her good side?
aaron
PS does Elayne have any other powers?(if that's a plot point then disregard)
Author's Response:
Elayne is ALOT more than she appears to be and now her curiosity is aroused, well curiousity and other things, ;)
[Report This]Date: September 05 2015 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
Cop- "Miss, are you ok?"
Elayne-"ah..(she moaned)yes" She smiled at the cop.
Elayne is hot, even though she did basically nothing this chapter, I just can't hide my desire for a chapter dedicated to her.
I wonder why Sam wanted those 2 guys to dress up like the robbers. I'm no hostage expert, so I am really curious of what he plans.
Not much else to say except that the plot continues to thicken.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: September 03 2015 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Whoa. Not only does she possess some kind of magic but she can kick some serious ass. What a badass. And a professional actress to boot. I'm almost certain she's some kind of immortal or a type of goddess because the way she acted letting this just happen naturally until it affected her and she seems so confident(not that a woman with the ability to shrink wouldn't be but she has an heir of superiority I can't quite explain however I find incredibly intriguing).
Also like how she merely embellished when asked where Cameron was.(if I'm reading her right that he went to the bathroom stall to whack it) Sam seemed to believe her immediately because he knows the type of person Cameron is.(which is very perceptive of her)
aaron
PS
Only thing I found confusing was his size(I get you're being intentionally vague) but their seemed to be some discrepancies; like when she first picked him up and dropped him in the toilet(it seemed like he was at least 5") but when he was placed in her panties her seemed much smaller. This could just be me though.
Author's Response:
Yep she is certainly a bad ass she didn't seem fazed at all he was armed just systematically took his toys away before shrinking him. He is between 2.5 and 3 inches in height. She dropped him into the toilet from about 6 inched which seemed like 10 feet to him. My apologies for any confusion. Thank for the read and review!
Date: September 02 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 6
Whoa. What a twist.
Author's Response:
Had to happen sometime :)
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
I was wondering when the shrinking was gonna happen and as always you outdid yourself :)
Author's Response:
Thank you I wanted to keep people saying "How the hell is he gonna get the shrink on?" :)
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! That was freaking sexy. I knew this girl was someone special from chapter 1!
Cameron, that bastard, deserved everything he got.
When Cameron asked "who are you?" I wanted the girl to say "a woman. Women today are smarter and can outplay men all the time, like you" she smiled.
If that was her response, then Cameron would never mess with a woman ever again. Then again, shrinking him solves all those problems.
I love how your stories focus's on the front of the panties as the preferred spot to keep these men. It's my favorite spot too. It's sexy and gives control and pleasure to the woman.
I have a feeling that this girl's real name is like "Simone, Elizabeth, Serah, Clarrisa, Angeline", or someone from the "contract". But to be honest, I prefer new names, and I think what you did with the Sophie story was good. You put new names and made it separate from the "contract".
So is this woman going to shrink all the robbers? Or will she call up her friends and let them have a robber too?
While this hostage situation is great, I can't wait for more news on what Cameron is experiencing.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I'm trying to keep the primary story thread plausible and full of suspenseful tension all the while this young woman is right there.
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
Another great story, Duggernaut.
"her hoo-hah"? Now, that brings back memories. : )
Author's Response:
Doesn't it :) Thanks for the read and review!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
"Alright Clint, what's your move?"
"We need you to....." Sam was cut off. An explosion inside the building occurred and blinded Sam in the light. As he regained his vision, he couldn't believe his eyes.
The woman on the floor, what's her name? Ah yes, Elayne. Sam saw her standing above the building, no she was in the building....it can't be!
Elayne looked around and saw that she was standing in the bathroom, a dead corpse by her feet. 'Serves him right' she thought.
All of a sudden bright red lights hit her face. She put her hand to protect her and saw that the hundreds of officers that were surrounding the building are now surround her.
She immediately panicked out of instinct and her legs began pivoting, tearing down the rest of the building.
Sam saw the destruction get near him and yelled "Everyone out, move out of you want to live! Where's Cameron?"
"I think it's too late, Sam" George replied as the wall of the building crumbled and revealed Cameron's motionless body.
"We got to move...now!" Sam repeated.
He felt a buzz in his hand.
"Hey....hey....you alright? What happened? The voice of Jason echoed in Sam's ears. His heartbeat slowed as if a slow motion movie was taking place. He saw debris fly and hit people as Elayne still causing havoc out of fear. This was his moment, the moment where he chooses if he wants to live or to die.
What I just typed was a prediction of what is going to happen next chapter.
I'm really liking this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Time for the stakes to be raised. I see your hostage situation and raise you one girl with the ability to fuck shit up
Date: August 31 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
What a perv...
I like the plot building and the way this story is advancing.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Also thanks for the referral on your bio. Very much appreciated!
[Report This]Date: August 31 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm rooting for the bad guys but this Cameron dude needs to either get his shit together or he just needs to die. He's very unlikeable. I also like the fact that this is a chess match between the police.
Would be cool if the lieutenant and 'Clint' were on the same team but then again it's nice having a good guy and bad guy being so likeable.
aaron
Author's Response:
Yeah I'm rooting for Sam too. Cameron is a duck and getting stupider by the minute. Stay tuned it is time for some GTS content :)
[Report This]Date: August 30 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
This is very interesting and intriguing. Wondering how the fuck 'Clint' and the gang will make it outta this. This makes me wanna watch Point Break hahaha. Wish that the Keanu's name would've been in there too.
aaron
PS don't even see how any gts/shrinking action would fit in here lol.
Author's Response:
GTS next chapter or two. Bodie and Johnny Utah made me chuckle lol
[Report This]Date: August 29 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 4
The tension is getting real!
No food, no more hostages, no more communication. Just a good chess match.
Both teams just waiting for someone to make the wrong move.
Good stuff, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Tense is good it'll keep you coming back for more
[Report This]Date: August 28 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
I like how this story is building I'm interested in seeing where you're going with this..
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the read hopefully keep you entertained
[Report This]Date: August 28 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting twist.
Now, this is the first story that I don't see even a sign of giantess content coming soon. If there's any women that gets involved, I'm immediately gonna assume that that person will be the giantess.
Otherwise, this story is gold! Pure entertainment!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: August 28 2015 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm loving the way this is going!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: August 27 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking what I'm reading. And I'm okay with the plot-building and character-introdutions in the beginning. I feel like those are really what makes a story good.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 1
Excellent chapter notes. That way no one has to ask for it right away.
Oooh! A robbery! Do you know what this reminds me of? The contract! The robbery scene of that house was soooo good that it got my attention. I loved the sneakiness of that scene.
This one is similar and it involves a lot of people, including hostages. Reminds me of the movie "The Town". Good movie.
Let me guess, that woman going to get the first aid kit will be taken hostage, then she shrinks everyone, and then she robs them, and uses them for pleasure, thanking them for all the money. Then the woman crushes one of them, puts his blood on her, and comes out to the public claiming that she killed the robbers and escaped. The city congratulates her, and during this whole time, the other 3 robbers are on different parts of her body. The end.
Lol, just a guess, but I can't wait for the next chapter!